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Born of Black and Blue [Chapter 53] (New Version)

Sup! New version here, fresh from the press.

The actual change to the content happens at the end of the chapter, when Neville asks Gabriel if he had thought of a solution, and keeps going from there - I added almost 1k new words, I think.

Also, this whole chapter has a different formatting from the past ones, did it make it easier or more enjoyable to read? If so - or if not - then please leave a comment so I know if I should keep it or go back to the previous one. Or I could send both versions, we'll see, kek.

Next chapter is already being written, hope you guys like the change to this one and the next!

Ken Williams, Max Horrichs, Nathan, Rampant_Radish, Shinatobe, Mike, Rayshawn Lopez, Nathan Helkaa, Bremen, DragonBoy.EXE, Bookmaggot, Niggalas Cage, and Saahas Kohli! Thank you all so much for your support! You're the best.


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