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Added 2020-07-05 05:01:00 +0000 UTCPoll for AFTER the chapter (contains mild spoilers): https://rankit.vote/vote/9bJxqtG3by5xsY5OsbeV
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I agree completely. But I think the same of val
Erik Zorger
2020-08-02 19:07:26 +0000 UTCI really hate kettle, he needs to be left behind.
Franco Evett - Pig Lord
2020-07-12 23:40:45 +0000 UTCJust caught up, and this has been a great story so far! I'm a little disappointed there's not going to be a clean break from Fel Sadanis though; I have to admit I was looking forward to new territory and travels. “Damn it, Kettel!” indeed. As for the group's name, I like Zero (and voted for it) but it's a bit hard to justify when literally only comprehensible to one person as a concept. Something like Foundation or The Foundation might work though as a stand in.
2020-07-11 03:29:18 +0000 UTCit was a little confusing to read once rain joined the conversation, i really couldnt follow what he said
2020-07-09 14:12:02 +0000 UTCI'm gonna second The Union. It works on its own quite well, and it carries the meaning Rain wants from a name. Also, I think Noblesse Oblige could be a great name, though there are obviously some potential translation/language issues with that one.
2020-07-09 03:25:30 +0000 UTCDelver's Cooperative. It shows both the goal (delving) and institutionalizes Rain's democratic and social support interests.
Tim Crane
2020-07-08 01:48:52 +0000 UTCI actually like Uplift
Eliot Blane
2020-07-07 17:23:41 +0000 UTCMaybe name it something clearly Latin, that way it could be a beacon for other people from Rain's original Earth.
Starless
2020-07-07 15:36:47 +0000 UTCOr you could trigger everyone and name it "Murica," lol
Grevis165
2020-07-07 11:39:19 +0000 UTCAscension is too cheesy. Come on rain deal with your soul problems
icesharkk
2020-07-07 05:17:44 +0000 UTCI think the most appropiate name would be Delve bannermen. Being under a banner means that you pledge loyalty to it which is something reasonable to give to an organization who help you get stronger or awakened.
2020-07-07 01:53:25 +0000 UTCI mean he's not going on a crusade
Alexander Dupree
2020-07-07 00:02:01 +0000 UTCleeroy jenkins redneck factory Les Pieds Nickelés redneck nursery sea, sex and sun
Thenais
2020-07-06 13:22:06 +0000 UTCSmh this is why you dont let cooking implements learn fire magic
Sand Bear
2020-07-06 03:09:30 +0000 UTCName Suggestion: 'The Cooporative'. A Cooporative is an organization run by the people it provides its services to. I think it goes well with Rain's goals.
James Barlow
2020-07-06 02:17:44 +0000 UTCRain is a support. He requires a group in order to reach his full potential, and everything until now shows why the existing organisations can't fill that role. After everything that just happened he has the social influence to start his own organization to fill that role.
Moonspike
2020-07-06 01:53:30 +0000 UTCYou could call it the Union. Like as in worker's union. Stand up for the rights of the little guys, right? And it fits the naming scheme of the bank, the watch, and the guild.
Neisus
2020-07-06 01:50:41 +0000 UTCTempest
Neisus
2020-07-06 01:46:32 +0000 UTCI'm just waiting for the scene where Rain has to hack into his own soul. Just that scene alone could be the basis of an entire fantasy genre, and we're the ones who get to experiance it first.
Starless
2020-07-05 23:08:34 +0000 UTCIt still feels too hasty. It's easy to understand Rain's reasons for wanting to establish a mini-guild, but there are so many things that should've been established before this. Feels like a ham-fisted way to have Rain to go through the pain of not being strong enough to do the things he wants to do after figuring out what those things are. But we the readers know that, and Rain knows that, and we KNOW that Rain knows that so why?
2020-07-05 20:00:46 +0000 UTCHe kept the keyboard!! Oh, man. Please let this culminate in him building a POSIX compatibility layer for Majistraal technology. I would kill for a look at /dev :D
Robert Lavery
2020-07-05 16:34:30 +0000 UTCI would be happy with an ending of that story! ;-)
Pagemaster
2020-07-05 16:13:47 +0000 UTCVincere Profundo or maybe Vincere concitant
Adam Roundfield
2020-07-05 15:54:57 +0000 UTC"The Scientific Method"
Pyrefiend
2020-07-05 15:46:58 +0000 UTCOmg this is the best. I voted for delver's guild first because I like the connection to the name. But a working acronym is even better.
Lord Falco
2020-07-05 15:43:53 +0000 UTCBand of the Falcon, for an happy ending :)
Thenais
2020-07-05 15:40:17 +0000 UTCDedicated to Elevating the Levels of Virtually Everyone. D.E.L.V.E
Mundane
2020-07-05 15:33:32 +0000 UTCOne of the first things that I’m going to do is run a training course on how not to be a reckless jackass.” “I feel like you’re talking to me,” Val said. Lmao yes. This. Great line, and much needed after dealing with certain foolhardy guilders.
Ziggy
2020-07-05 14:29:33 +0000 UTCThe programmer finally gets his keyboard, now the real story begins. Was everything before this just the prologue...
Adam Roundfield
2020-07-05 14:18:21 +0000 UTCMurderhobos is a classic!
tibbish
2020-07-05 13:37:27 +0000 UTCThe Federation of Tallheart's Fans is obvioooously the perfect name!
tibbish
2020-07-05 13:35:59 +0000 UTCKettle is the new Val!
wanderer117
2020-07-05 13:19:01 +0000 UTCCap Breakers
Alex C
2020-07-05 13:17:16 +0000 UTCBronze Emblem: Awakening
Starless
2020-07-05 12:38:07 +0000 UTCYeah Delvers or Delving would be preferable to most of those. Alternatively you could go with Awakenings or something like that.
Findell
2020-07-05 12:36:22 +0000 UTCDarude Rainstorm
Erasmo Simo
2020-07-05 11:24:34 +0000 UTCWell they are going to be delving, that’s reckless in and of itself.
Orion Dye
2020-07-05 11:11:53 +0000 UTCAlso, the chapter title almost gave me a heart attack. I was pleasantly surprised by how engaging it turned out to be. On another note: fuck Kettle. Can't he just bleed out in the dungeon like a gentleman. Nooooooo. He has to make a whole thing out of it. Bah.
Heraclitus
2020-07-05 11:02:29 +0000 UTCHow about Rain and the rainettes?
Heraclitus
2020-07-05 11:00:10 +0000 UTCquidam viri ex spelunca societatis
Matthew B.
2020-07-05 10:31:12 +0000 UTCList of name ideas: - Workers Guild - The Historians - The Investigators - The Ascenders - The Murderhobos
Gio
2020-07-05 10:29:28 +0000 UTCI like the naming list. Twas amusing. And Kettle is, indeed, the new Val.
Imp
2020-07-05 10:12:00 +0000 UTCPreferential voting is good shit
Compendium
2020-07-05 10:03:06 +0000 UTCI actually like Delve as a name. It would make the title make a lot more sense. In this massive story, the main character has only ever 'delved' like twice. IDelving just hasn't been a big part of the story so far.
Al
2020-07-05 09:47:05 +0000 UTCMaybe Crystal Clarity? Just taking it out of my fatigued mind from working.
2020-07-05 09:19:09 +0000 UTCI really like this idea, except deer is a racial slur.
Michael son of Jacob
2020-07-05 09:15:05 +0000 UTCOr 1) the Magnanimities, 2) the Seekers, 3) Cultivators, 4) the Soil Tillers, 5) Growth Companions, 6) the Freelords, 7) the Anti-Arseholes, 8) the Royal (Blue) Farmers, 9) Refuge, 10) Soul Divers/Soul Programmers
Michael son of Jacob
2020-07-05 09:12:38 +0000 UTCI have a grape with this name it is basically the exact same thing as adventure guild, and I think a naming scheme that close to the Adventure Guild would be a mistake. He needs something a bit deflecting and not as obvious.
Ole Halvorsen
2020-07-05 09:11:47 +0000 UTCStupid puns always make for better guild names. They're memorable, make people underestimate you, and help select for people you'd want to hang out with who have a sense of humor. It lets your recruits/employers/associates know what they're getting into and adjust expectations accordingly. "Deer Friends"/"Dear Friends" - It's like Tallheart's Fan Club only more groan inducing as a pun, shows that it's a 'friends and family' sort of group, and announces their support for Cervidians while keeping it ambiguous due to mixed lingo.
2020-07-05 09:10:13 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks.
SenescentSoul
2020-07-05 09:08:08 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks.
SenescentSoul
2020-07-05 09:05:51 +0000 UTCwould also launch "Noblesse Oblige" from totally not gorm from discord. Also seems like a good name for the company
Ole Halvorsen
2020-07-05 09:03:44 +0000 UTCWhat about Loveband? Because they're not a warband that wars, but a band that spreads love.
Michael son of Jacob
2020-07-05 09:02:45 +0000 UTCwhat about "Manifest Destiny"
Ole Halvorsen
2020-07-05 08:59:15 +0000 UTCLiterally the first comment, someone gets it. *Sniff* I am so proud.
SenescentSoul
2020-07-05 08:57:39 +0000 UTCWhat about "Blue Sky"
Sanket More
2020-07-05 07:43:05 +0000 UTCI also like Cloud
Yshua
2020-07-05 07:36:35 +0000 UTCI liked just Delve, not with the guild or anything after. No need for a label, it's a nice shoutout to the title of the series and you don't have any adventures guild fiction cause it's not a "guild". Ascension in nice but seems a bit too self important for someone as self aware as Rain.
Thomasaurus Rex
2020-07-05 07:32:32 +0000 UTCWith macros being able to function at Soulspeed, Rain would theoretically be able to cast other people's skills. Provided he spends enough time observing/saving each skills mana movements to a macro in Soulspace.
Starless
2020-07-05 07:19:24 +0000 UTCWhy not name it cloud company after the dog?
Sunless
2020-07-05 07:07:44 +0000 UTCAscention is the best on the list, however if we are getting an airship, a puppy named cloud, and an MC named Rain, the group should be something weather related. Thunderclap? Forecasters? (Multi-level pun) Hurricane group? Tornado Inc.? Tsunami?
Eric Hartz
2020-07-05 06:58:32 +0000 UTCSolid. Thanks.
Alexander Dupree
2020-07-05 06:57:47 +0000 UTCnot "Delver’s Guild" just "Delvers"
Jeff091
2020-07-05 06:44:36 +0000 UTCin terms of the "how" for the groupchat, right now we don't have a lot of ideas on how it could be accomplished, but Rain does have experience with connecting his soul directly to something else with Majistraal artifact, so I think that after educating himself on souls and palings and that weird meditation thing he's been doing to sense his soul, maybe he can figure it out.
Adrian Gorgey
2020-07-05 06:41:52 +0000 UTCAs always, love seeing how weird Rain seems from another perspective. I like this new direction, it feels fun. I really hope he learns how to manipulate screens so that he can create a "groupchat" feature, that would really cement this group as unique and fits into the thematic of Rain's aura powers. Another thing is that I get that Rain wants things to be "democratic", and I respect that, but in times of crisis that often just muddies the water. In those sorts of times, people want someone they can respect and who makes them feel safe. They want a real leader. I hope that Rain can learn how to be a leader, without losing his current adorkableness.
Adrian Gorgey
2020-07-05 06:39:53 +0000 UTCI was going to comment about "She was had" but Newguy Roy beat me to it. Great chapter today. It was good to see just how strong uncertain savior could be when you went back to old builds. I am sure Rain would love to try out builds for her to use. Earthbending was always my favorite. See you next time.
Michael Hughes
2020-07-05 06:15:01 +0000 UTCWhat about crystallize? Making the talents of people crystallize into greatness! Also nods towards the slimes
Newguy Roy
2020-07-05 06:07:30 +0000 UTC"Clarity" would be cool. It would hint towards his build but at the same time, denotes a good quality to have when it comes to roaming around and keeping people safe.
ZaA
2020-07-05 06:06:36 +0000 UTCMaybe Rain should reconsider letting reckless people join; that should be a bigger no-no than not having the same values as a young 2020 Westerner
Blaublue
2020-07-05 06:06:09 +0000 UTCI think that the best name is simply Delvers or maybe just Delve to tie it into the story’s title. Delver’s Guild has too many problems starting with confusion with the guild.
Andrew
2020-07-05 06:05:57 +0000 UTCHow about 4th wall breaking "The Royal Road" for a name? Rising tide. Winds of Change (WOC) or call themselves Attention Deficit Disorder
Dragonkinn
2020-07-05 05:59:08 +0000 UTCHow about Delve?
Robert
2020-07-05 05:55:25 +0000 UTCShe /was/ had more power at her fingertips now than she’d had for years, “Face it, Val, [your] days of sneaking up on me are done.”
Newguy Roy
2020-07-05 05:50:38 +0000 UTCOn page 8 hight should be height. And when describing the skin of Vanna could just say light brown instead of repeating skin. Thx 4 the chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
2020-07-05 05:48:55 +0000 UTCMeh, i looked for 'constant vigilance' in the vote, pitty it wasnt in there. xD Liked amelias part. Shows she is pretty funny when she dosnt done the ice queen persona. =D
D
2020-07-05 05:46:06 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I would like to suggest "The Awakeners" or something similar to go with Rain's awaken the world plan.
Andrew Gardner
2020-07-05 05:45:23 +0000 UTCThat comment under delvers was great. Thanks for the chapter! Feels like the story is really picking up steam. I can't wait to see what those dungeon plates can do.
Yashakami
2020-07-05 05:45:14 +0000 UTCJust name their company 'Hello world!' and embrace the cringe
Sebastian Viller
2020-07-05 05:41:53 +0000 UTCGave Delvers Guild rank 1, but I do like the sound of just Delve, which works, even if it is just the title of the novel.
Signspace
2020-07-05 05:41:37 +0000 UTCOverclocked Core Delving hue hue hue
Sebastian Viller
2020-07-05 05:41:20 +0000 UTCThank you! I enjoyed this chapter quite a lot!
Gabriel
2020-07-05 05:38:27 +0000 UTCIntegrated Delving is my hat in the ring. It has that tech company nomenclature and fits will with his stated goals.
Thransk
2020-07-05 05:35:16 +0000 UTC"DelveCraft"?
His Dad
2020-07-05 05:29:15 +0000 UTCTrue hearts or the like
2020-07-05 05:28:59 +0000 UTCHow about "DelveSoft"??
His Dad
2020-07-05 05:28:39 +0000 UTCName three company after Tallhearts family
2020-07-05 05:28:33 +0000 UTCTank fortress before flying fortress. One step at a time
LEMON
2020-07-05 05:27:58 +0000 UTC>Nobody is going to get that Thermae Romae! Ha!
giant_snark
2020-07-05 05:18:12 +0000 UTC