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Added 2020-11-29 06:00:05 +0000 UTCIf you find a typo, throw it in the comments! Enjoy!
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From what I've been able to gather, it appears they continue reading because Delve is a fascinating case study in how to do things wrong, but still get paid for it. With particular focus being on how certain LITrpg factors scale significantly higher in gaining/keeping reader attention. All-in-all a pretty interesting discussion that current/future authors here can find some value in.
Starless
2020-12-02 22:17:54 +0000 UTCAt the beginning I imagined Ameliah lifting upTallheart who was lifting up Carten who was carrying Rain
Luke Preston
2020-11-30 02:10:10 +0000 UTCAh so Rain and Ameliah finally did the horizontal tango, good for them. By the way you ever read the posts at r/rational? of all the places that discuss Delve they are certainly the ones most critical, I went today just to check and goddam those guys, why are they even reading if they think it is so awful.
Carlos De Los Santos
2020-11-30 00:27:04 +0000 UTCReveille being described as aggressively peppy was absolutely perfect. Also I'm really enjoying the direction Rain's power growth is going in. Seeing him getting stronger by bending the rules of the system is exactly what I signed up for. Levels/stats are all so mundane to me at this point.
Starless
2020-11-29 21:45:31 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2020-11-29 20:11:05 +0000 UTCShould be fixed now! Thanks!
SenescentSoul
2020-11-29 19:20:52 +0000 UTCkettle ->Kettel
His Dad
2020-11-29 19:10:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Do you think youβll ever go back to writing two chapters a week? This is one of my favorite ongoing stories, and a single chapter a week is just barely enough to cut the itch haha
Noah
2020-11-29 16:53:35 +0000 UTCI got the sense that him and Rain would get along in this chapter. Was he acting crazy in a previous chapter, I donβt remember?
Noah
2020-11-29 16:52:34 +0000 UTCWow Brovose, look at you not being a crazy person!
Pyrefiend
2020-11-29 14:52:58 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Was Hole and Oats a reference to Hall and Oats? I am a Garfunkel and Oats man myself. Val getting spotted is great. Magic eyes, there watching you, magic eyes.
Michael Hughes
2020-11-29 14:47:04 +0000 UTCI love how this story is multi-dimensional, kinda like life. The delve is the story, and the tech is the story, as are the psycho-party conflict, the sex and the silly but uplifting blob.
Daniel Vainsencher
2020-11-29 14:42:49 +0000 UTCFor some reason this is how I imagined Hegar waking up Brovose: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HkRcxGEBap0
Erasmo Simo
2020-11-29 10:18:47 +0000 UTCOff cam lewds is best IMO. Plenty of stories elsewhere to get that sort of thing if you want it. Scribblehub is practically nothing but lewds and straight up porn of whatever sort you could want.
tibbish
2020-11-29 10:03:42 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
SenescentSoul
2020-11-29 09:44:53 +0000 UTCMFW I can't tell the difference anymore, and neither can my spellchecker:π€¦ββοΈ Fixed, thanks.
SenescentSoul
2020-11-29 09:44:25 +0000 UTCYour preferences about other people are not as important as their preferences about themselves. You say other people fornicating is bad, they say them fornicating is good. You are wrong and they are right. By all means make your own choices about sex in your own life, but I have no sympathy for your frustration over your inability to inflict your values on people who do not share them. Either keep your opinions to yourself, or be more amusing in your discomfort so we may all laugh harder at your impotent, poisonous attitude.
2020-11-29 09:37:33 +0000 UTCChapter's alright. Could use some more fornication.
yeeteris dedmeem
2020-11-29 08:26:44 +0000 UTCYeah this conflict feels like a distraction to the real plot. Not a bad idea just to soon after we finally get to the start of the real story
Chris Mantakounis
2020-11-29 07:58:33 +0000 UTCFornication still bad. Rest of chapter was great.
2020-11-29 07:35:18 +0000 UTCThis was an interesting chapter - I have to say, I'm not terribly interested in the looming conflict with the adventuring team. I recognize that the conflict with experienced adventurers will help Ascension grow, but Idk I'm just not so excited about it. What I'm more excited about is the expeditionary missions into the Depths and the potential Blues that await - and I'm also excited for the magitech developments and uses of aluminum that they can think up - the most obvious being in power transmission lines and industrial uses in engines, such as the one built in 1903 by the Wright brothers to power their first biplane. I can only imagine what a smith like Tallheart will think up with the assistance of magic. Surely, a Helicarrier is not too big a dream!!
Adrian Gorgey
2020-11-29 06:59:57 +0000 UTCreally good stuff, ty!
fbt
2020-11-29 06:59:55 +0000 UTC> Stint snorted. Love ducks. >>He<< gnawed off another chunk of jerky. Lucky bastard. Improper italicization.
Mason Bially
2020-11-29 06:46:43 +0000 UTCI think there's a typo. I thought you had Kettle's name as "Kettel" before now, but it's "Kettle" in this chapter several times. Brovose is actually decently intelligent. He's wrong about Rain being a hybrid build, but it's logical to assume it. He has some decent spellcasting metamagics, and even has mage sight. We already know it takes a LOT of mana to level up mana manipulation to 10 to unlock that. Also. He has a hidden skill called torpor? PFTT hahahahaha. You enjoyed adding that far too much. It's great though, I'm down.
Ziggy
2020-11-29 06:28:43 +0000 UTCOh-ho, what's this? Looks like someone has a decent head on their shoulders. Brovose seems to be coming to some proper conclusions here.
Empty Shelf
2020-11-29 06:26:07 +0000 UTC[[FILTH]] is the cutest exclamation Iβve ever read
Alexander Dupree
2020-11-29 06:25:16 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter!
Fabhar
2020-11-29 06:23:57 +0000 UTCClose!
Cgmcnama
2020-11-29 06:23:41 +0000 UTCThanks! Sleepy seems like he might be ascension material
Draugluir
2020-11-29 06:04:56 +0000 UTCFirst?
wanderer117
2020-11-29 06:00:47 +0000 UTCWelp, last chapter of the month...
Cgmcnama
2020-11-29 06:00:30 +0000 UTC
