Price for Freedom p413
Added 2024-07-24 11:21:47 +0000 UTCTastes like ogre
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Hello, sorry I know it's been a minute. I've started work and I figured I'd ask questions here instead of clogging up the discord if the conversation gets long. Two questions: First, I do intend to go through the whole comic, and I'm finding it might be worth it to have a way to send a mass note instead of individual line notes. Would it work to make a link-can-view google drive document, fill that with necessary edits, and then send that to either an individual or toss the link into the discord? (I only mention individual as sending it to a single person might just keep a bit more privacy on both ends) Secondly, I'm currently listing through with edits that are 'necessary', like spelling errors and grammar errors, things that could actually make the comic difficult to understand. I'm also happy to try to toss in 'flow' fixes and such, if that's something you would appreciate. For example, there are some times early comic where characters don't use contractions in places where most english speakers probably would. This isn't going to make someone misunderstand a scene, but it does change the flow of the scene. Obviously with any situation feel free to ignore an edit you think is unnecessary, but I figured I'd mention it as an option as I noticed some odd phrasing and flow towards the beginning.
Elor Yosnak
2024-08-15 04:39:36 +0000 UTCNo worries at all! Glad to be of some help.
Elor Yosnak
2024-07-28 02:29:40 +0000 UTCYes you can start from the start if you want, or backward. It will just take a while for us to edit the pages.
Team Dead Deer
2024-07-27 08:46:23 +0000 UTCSounds good to me! Can I ask, how far back should I go? I know frequently webcomics are sorta unalterable after a certain point, but if that's not the case I'm happy to go through the whole thing again and post anything I find
Elor Yosnak
2024-07-27 02:09:02 +0000 UTCYes some additional proofreading wouldn't hurt. You can post any typo you find on the #pff-comic channel of our discord: https://discord.gg/P3T4Spew Any help is appreciated.
Team Dead Deer
2024-07-25 08:11:10 +0000 UTCHey, this is an odd thing to say, but I'll say it. I would be happy to proofread pages of the webcomic to correct english grammar, if that's something TDD is interested in / worried about (things like 'first time you make those sounds' to 'first time you've made those sounds') I know it's not a big deal, and prob some is intentional, but if it's something that would be helpful I'd be happy to help. Either way, loving your work.
Elor Yosnak
2024-07-25 04:09:46 +0000 UTCPlease more erotic content in the comic, I can find many wonderful comics with great stories and interesting characters, but finding porn ones that aren't godawful is very hard.
Gabe
2024-07-24 20:50:12 +0000 UTCGetting warmer... hoping for a futa scene!
Freedom2044
2024-07-24 14:44:13 +0000 UTCThe power gap is crazy, she's used to throwing her weight around to get booty. Now she's the booty, and she knows it.
Jawn
2024-07-24 13:12:13 +0000 UTCI hope they find/make her a prosthetic horn or something, feels like it's a big part of who she is.
Frankieo
2024-07-24 11:44:05 +0000 UTCLady Wolf right now is the equivalent of a trap that could crush you in any second.
Wings of Genesis
2024-07-24 11:35:45 +0000 UTC
