Harry and older girl test chapter
Added 2025-10-31 12:19:40 +0000 UTC(A.N: This is the first of the other two test chapters I wanted to add to the poll)
Plot: Harry Potter wasn't sure what he was expecting when he came to Hogwarts. It definitely wasn't an older girl becoming obsessed with him. Follow his journey through Pairing will be voted on, there are three options for votes and three scenes below, one for each option.
Scene 1 - Pandora Malfoy (Older sister of Draco)
Harry couldn't help but smile as he sat in the train compartment, staring out of the window. It all seemed so amazing. One day, he was sleeping on a floor in an old lighthouse, but now he was sitting aboard a train that would take him to a magical school! One that was far, far away from the Dursleys! He couldn't wait; a whole year away from them sounded glorious, and the fact that he could learn magic as well was just icing on the cake.
'You might even be able to make friends,' A small voice whispered in his head.
The door to his compartment opened, and he turned his head away from the window to see who it was. Standing in his compartment was an older girl, who was quite pretty; she had silvery-blonde hair and grey eyes. She was staring at him with a look that Harry couldn't quite identify, something that made him more than a bit nervous. Had he done something wrong? Was this girl going to bully him out of the compartment?
"Do you mind if I join you?" She asked politely.
"Um, yeah, sure." He nodded without thinking. She rewarded him for his politeness with a smile that instantly made him straighten up slightly, as she sat opposite him.
"It's nice to meet you, Mr..." She trailed off, looking at him questioningly.
"I'm Harry, Harry Potter." He introduced himself. Her eyes flickered up to his forehead for the barest of moments, after seeing his small scar, she focused back on his face.
"So you are," A grin appeared on her face. "I wonder what my brother would say if he had realised that he had talked to THE Harry Potter."
"Your brother?" Harry frowned questioningly.
"You don't remember me, do you?" She asked knowingly, and Harry had to shake his head at that. "I was in Madam Malkins when you came to get your robes fitted. Remember? My stupid brother was next to you, chatting your ear off and acting like a spoiled brat?"
"Oh," Harry's nose wrinkled as he remembered exactly who she was talking about. "He's your brother?"
"Through no fault of my own, I assure you," She said, leaning forward. "We don't get along much. Not like how you and me probably would."
"Me? I-"
"I don't have many friends at Hogwarts," She revealed. "I was wondering, would you like to be my friend?"
"Yeah," Harry said without thinking. He couldn't believe it, he hadn't even made it to school and he had already made a friend! Things were starting to look up for him.
"I'm glad," She said coyly. "I think we're going to be great friends," She added, internally grinning.
Her mother had thought she was silly when she told her that she had intended to form a relationship with the boy that they saw in Diagon Alley. 'Don't be ridiculous,' Her mother had said. 'You know full well that your father won't approve of you mingling with some mudblood.' But now, things were different. The 'mudblood' was a half-blood, still less than ideal for her parents, but the Potter fortune and his fame might be enough to convince them. If worst comes to worst, then she'd just have to leave the family. It'd be worth it, in her eyes. Ever since she had seen him, she had fallen for him, thought of him every day. She'd do whatever it takes to keep him by her side.
"So," A drawling voice interrupted as the door opened. "Rumour is that Harry Potter is-"
"Draco!" Pandora interrupted, turning around to glare at her stupid brother. The last thing she wanted was for him to bother her future husband. "I swear to Merlin, if you don't turn around and march your butt out of here, then I'm going to kick you in the nuts...again!"
Scene 2 - Tonks (Aged down slightly from canon)
"So, Potter," Malfoy drawled as he walked up to Harry Potter. Tonight was the night of the Yule Ball, and Malfoy had easily got Pansy as his date (after being rejected by several others). He and his date had walked up to Harry who had been waiting in one of the hallways. "What's the matter? Haven't got a date for the Yule Ball?"
"I do, actually," Harry said with a bored sigh as he leaned against the wall. Not for the first time, he was left wondering exactly what it would take to get Draco to stay away from him. The boy seemed obsessed with him and it was bordering on creepy, to be honest.
"Oh yeah, who?" Pansy snorted disbelievingly.
"Had to go beg a first year to come, did you?" Malfoy chortled. "I bet nobody else would be desperate enough to go with a cheat like you. Did you have to pay her?"
"I didn't come with a first year, Malfoy," Harry said with another sigh.
"Oh yeah, who did you bring then?" Malfoy challenged. "Perhaps your Mum? Oh wait, she's dead." His grin got wider at his own comment, though it did start fading when Harry started laughing.
"Good one, Malfoy, but no," Harry chuckled. "You see, I didn't bring my mum. I brought yours."
"Hello Draco," Draco turned around in horror and found his mother walking, wearing a scandlous black dress with a slit that showed off her right leg and left her arms and shoulders exposed.
"Mother?" Draco squeaked.
"It's so good to see you, my baby dragon," Narcissa cooed as she wrapped an arm around Harry's shoudlers as he put his own around her waist. "I can't believe that we're both at the ball together. Oh, maybe we can have a dance together!" She gushed, Draco's face had shifted to one of horror. "Oh, but it'll have to be a quick one, dear. I plan to enjoy a long night with a real man." She purred as she leaned down and licked Harry's face before nibbling on his ear.
"Draco!" Pansy cried when Draco turned and ran off. "Draco!" She said, running off after him. No sooner than they had gone, Narcissa and Harry burst into laughter. 'Narcissa' slowly started changing in appearance until her hair was pink and her eyes were violet.
"Tonks, you are a legend," Harry grinned at her.
"I know," Tonks grinned back at him. Nobody messed with her future husband.
Scene 3 - Selina Snape (Snape's daughter)
"Where were you, Potter?" Snape snarled, staring down at Harry who was staring up at him with an unimpressed look.
"I told you, I was at Hogsmead," Harry repeated calmly, crossing his arms and staring up at the frankly pathetic man in front of him. So long Harry had been at Hogwarts and Snape still insisted on carrying out his stupid grudge from school.
"I know that it was you potioned my Slytherin's," Snape glared at him.
"Yeah, and knowing your history, you probably also supect me of starting cancer as well. You're hardly an unbiased person, everyone in the school knows that you hate me." Harry said while looking at the other Professor's in the room, all of which nodded in agreement.
"Do you have any witnesses to prove that you were in Hogsmead?" Snape snapped at him.
"I was there," Selina said, walking into the room.
"What?!" Snape's gaze snapped towards her. "What were you doing in Hogsmead with him?" Snape asked venomously.
"We were on a date, of course," Selina grinned as she leaned down and pecked Harry on the lips. "What else, Father?" She asked as she and Harry tried not to laugh at the look on Snape's face.
Comments
To be honest, all three options are very interesting)
Nikita
2025-11-10 14:30:23 +0000 UTCI feel like some good comedic moments alone for Harry with Draco's sister or Snape's daughter.
TheNinja
2025-11-06 18:30:15 +0000 UTCYeah I am always a fan of like a female Malfoy involved with Harry, read couple in the past and they were not bad honestly. PLus an older sister at that makes it all the more interesting especially to see how amusing it would be to see how Draco would react to Harry being close to his sister and older one at that. So do this one for sure!
TheNinja
2025-11-01 02:43:50 +0000 UTCOh love this but I love the idea of lile JayFireblood said all three you can even do that all three older girls are same year and into harry. We already know why Pandora wants harry Tonks can want harry as he be the only one who respects her powers And selene can be part of the group just to spit her father and becuase she likes harry who isnt intimidate by her father being snape Yes it be long but it be fun also But overall I agree with others the Pandora one sounds fun Can't wait to see what will be chosen.
Darth Reven
2025-10-31 22:11:29 +0000 UTC