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DRAG*NBALL Z Silver Age - Chapter 3 - First Day - COMPLETE

Synopsis: Gohan goes through his first day at highschool. How will it end?

Synopsis: Gohan has started his first day and it's off to an interesting start. After foiling an armed bank robbery as the mysterious Gold Fighter, he has fallen under the suspicious gaze of Videl- daughter of Hercule and part-time crime fighter- who has also taken a more keen interest in his look.

Her best friend Erasa has also taken an immediate liking to Gohan.

How will Gohan's first day differ from canon, especially with his classes? And how will it end?

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Silver Age CHAPTERS

Chapter 1 & 2 - Prologue + Gohan Goes to Highschool - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-126569118

Chapter 3 - First Day - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127964449

Chapter 3.5 - First Night - https://www.patreon.com/posts/drag-nball-z-age-131072048

Chapter 4 - A New Hero - https://www.patreon.com/posts/133976351

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Silver Age Omakes

Omake #1 - Birthday Surprise - https://www.patreon.com/posts/128101053

Omake #2 - Lost Prince - https://www.patreon.com/posts/136932253

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Silver Age PDF List - https://www.patreon.com/posts/dragonball-z-age-127897170

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Comments

Hopefully he can restrain himself a little better during some of the clubs. Lol

Super Lombax

Thanks. I used panels from the existing manga and anime to frame some of the shots, so thats it's as close to the OG source material as possible, but with some changes I believe should've been made.

TheWriteFiction

I must say, I really like just how well-drawn everything is here. It's like the actual anime.

Super Lombax

😄 easy now tiger

GamerLegend09

Now this chapter is done I hope Naruto gets love and focus now?

Omar DeLaHoz

Sorry, those are two separate panels. Gohan is looking down at both of them.

TheWriteFiction

Yeah!!!! It is indeed cinema!!! God level panels 😏😛😛

Reizeropein

*Pg. 36 & 37* 😄 mymymy how Scandalous, 🤨 wait… I see two extra hands here 🙌🏻 ……the right looks more masculine though

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 35* 😁👍🏻 Solid Wingman Support Zangya, 🤩 cool Capsule Corp. Phone too (🧐 looks like an IPhone model)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 34* “To do what” she says 😂😂😂

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 33* 😜😜😜 B-B-B-BUSTEEEEED

GamerLegend09

Ah, okay. I was kinda thinking, "Oh, Gohan's gonna have some explaining to do to Chichi when he gets back home," but it looks like Zangya's got it covered. Lol And wow, Chapter 3's over. Definitely looking forward to what happens next with all these new developments already.

Super Lombax

I Absolutely Love This, Threesomes are Always The Greatest💖😍💖

TopSuperDave64

It's about to get hot and wet for gohan and the girls 👧 🤪 😏 😋 😌.

Joseph c guillory

*Pg. 32* **Top 2 Panels** 😏 go in and find out **Middle 2 Panels** 😏😏 that’s cause you are and you should go in and find out **Bottom 2 Panels** 😩 sweet Dende PLEASE let it be an Orgasm Shriek or a Shriek of surprise from his 13-14 inch C%%%

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 31* 😬😬😬 yuuussssss so much better in color

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 30* 😃😃😃 oh my Dende yes

GamerLegend09

Videl is here to save the day! ...and become completely red from head to toe after seeing what her friend's been getting up to.

Super Lombax

😜VIDEL, HE GETTING IT IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😜

The Jonizuka

🥰Mmhmm🥰 Erasa taking command and hoping on GIGACHAD’s lap

The Jonizuka

*Pg. 29* Ohh you sweet summer Child she hasn’t fully “Thanked” you just yet😈😈😈

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 28* Wow she’s an expert in Fighting but not too Witty in putting 2 an 2 together to spell out the obvious…..😌 oh right, Tomboy

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 27* Mmmmm😌😌😌😏😏😏😏

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 26* **Top 2 Panels** I love seeing oc depictions of Erasa’s Parents **Middle 2 Panels** …you know what, that career feels fitting for her….in a sexy T.V. Reporter type way. **Bottom 2 Panels** Wow that book looks Thicker in her hand up close 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 25* **Top 4 Panels** 😅😅😅 Bulma & Zangya should’ve warned him about this too **Bottom 3 Panels** 😅😅😅😅😅 Sweet-pea you’re worrying about the wrong person in this Scenario

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 24* **Top 2 panels** Damn, I wonder how fast that bike can go in miles per hour…also Cool building complex **Bottom 5 Panels** 😏😏😏 ohh this Thirsty Bitch

GamerLegend09

Hahaha

TheWriteFiction

Oohh! I update the panels, uhhmm Yamamoto? is that you? 😂😂

Reizeropein

Well, looks like we're getting to a peak climax moment in this chapter: Erasa has invited Gohan into her apartment and Videl is tailing them. Should this chapter end with A) Erasa bedding Gohan while Videl just watches from the cold not suspecting a thing or B) Erasa roping Videl into a threeway to surprise the freshman and get her best friend to admit her feelings? I can go either way. (And before anyone asks, NO, I'm not including any other girls outside of these equations, cause that would make no sense)

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 23* **Top 3 Panels** 🫩 Videl Sweetie, your Jealousy’s showing **Bottom 3 Panels** 😏 yeahh, you hold onto that hunk nice and tight rasa Sweetie

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 22* **Top Right 3 Panels** 🤨 whoa hold up what? **Top Left Panel** 😲 Sweet Super Kami Dende why couldn’t Gohan own one of these in the Canon Series?!! **Bottom 4 Panels** …😬 again I ask, why!? This is Screaming Fan-service Gold right here!!

GamerLegend09

😊 it’s taking a backseat for a while longer

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21* **Top Right Panel** 😆 yeow!!! 😄 this Blondie’s on the Prowl! **Top Left Upper Panel** 😍😍😍 oolala are we sure she’s not trying to post some moves of her own right here **Top Left Lower Panel** 😅 ohhh that poor naive little country bumpkin **Bottom Right Panel** 🙂Like a Predator 🙃 Catching their prey **Bottom Left Panel** She needs to show more Backbone here if she doesn’t want to end up dead Last (then again there could be some potential for a possible Throuple……😏😏😏 not sorry, Reese’s)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 20* 😌 I love the change in this scene, 😉 maybe this time around Gohan and Sharpener can be good buddies

GamerLegend09

Oh, he's gonna join some clubs this time around? Should be interesting.

Super Lombax

How goes Naruto Rogue?

Omar DeLaHoz

*Pg. 19* ok videl staying suspicious was expected but seeing all the men (🙂 minus Sharpener surprisingly 🙃) being jealous of Gohan getting lovestruck attention towards him makes me wanna say to em… “it’s not our boys fault he’s hot! Get good Scrubs and get on his level ya lazy bitches”….😛 and I didn’t studder

GamerLegend09

Both the bat and the ball might just explode to dust.

Julian Fratzscher

*Pg. 18* 😂 Imagine the crater he’d make with a full-on swing while shattering that bat to pieces.

GamerLegend09

In a way, yes.

TheWriteFiction

Okay, Gohan seems to be lacking a little when it comes to restraining his power.

Julian Fratzscher

*Pg. 17* **Top 4 Panels** 😑😑😑…🤦🏻‍♂️, I PRAY that he didn’t singe some that hair off her Pigtail **Bottom 3 Panels** 😒 well, even if videl’s more suspicious at Least Rasa’s Too loveStruck 💘 to notice

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* **Top 3 Panels** 😆 NICE SAVE!!! **Middle Right & Center Panel** just look at that face on her, lost in awe…. 🤔 or am I mistaking that for thirstful lust **Middle Left Panel & Bottom two Panels** Easy now you have eyes on you here

GamerLegend09

Write ✍🏻…. 😌 this feels so much better than the 30 ft Jump

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* 😶…. 😊 welp this will definitely make a damn good first impression, 😅 I mean hey maybe they won’t even notice in all the excitement right?…….😅😅😅 right?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* 😳 ya know…I almost saw this one coming

GamerLegend09

The panel of Gohan catching the baseball just before it hits Erasa... probably one of my most favourite panels to draw recently. Not gonna lie. I wanted it to have a similar impact to how everyone reacted to Gohan's 30 ft jump in the anime. What do you guys think?

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** 😄 come now Rasa tone down the Sex Drive and focus Girl **Bottom Right 2 Panels** Here Comes The Wind-up **Bottom Left 2 Panels** 🤩 AND ITS A HIT!!! 💥⚾️

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* **Top 2 Panels** The key is while putting what you learned into practice, “not” to Overthink it **Middle Right & Center Panel** Looks like the his Physique levels not strong enough to distract her suspicions…😑 damn **Middle Left Panel** 😆 HEY BATTABATTA!! **Bottom 3 Panels** 🙃 You could cut the Tension Between these 2 with a knife!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* **Top Right Panel** 😅 after all those years of homeschooling, I’d be surprised if she wasn’t **Top Left Panel** they’ll treat him very hospitable 😏😏😏 **Middle Right Panel** 😍Oolala 😍😍😍 Lady Zangya so Bold **Middle Left Panel** 😀 uhhh….😀😀 Miss Zangya Miss Zangya…..😀😀😀 what seems to be uhh……😀😀😀😀going on there huh? **Bottom Right Panel** Ohhh she helped him alright🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 **Bottom Middle Panel** 😳 they even did “THAT” on the Battlefield?!!

GamerLegend09

Hehe. You'll see in the next page. Though I will say... am surprised you are calling Erasa Fash(a)? Is there a reason?

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 10* (Edited) **Top Right Panel** 😅 you should hear what his dad’s been through…..ayyo Fash (Edit: Rasa), 😏 you’ll drool at this rate **Top Left Panels** Stick with who you’re comfortable with, Amiright!? 🥴 **Bottom Right Panel** 🥰 Yup… still cute🥰🥰🥰 **Bottom Left 2 Panels** 😚 you’re gonna have a LOT to learn about Girls from this point on Mr. Bookworm

GamerLegend09

Thank you for writing these chapters and sorry i didn't thank you earlier.

Joseph c guillory

That's just him. He's naturally solid.

TheWriteFiction

Pg 9 Is Gohan flexing at that moment, or why are his muscles hard?

Julian Fratzscher

*Pg. 9* **Top Right Panel** 😂 the Gawking is real **Top Left Panel** Spikey even i’d ask if I was in her shoes **Middle Right Panel** Easy there Sharpener you’re almost Drooling **Middle Left Panel** 😑 not enough Hours in a Year Fanboy **Bottom Right Panel** Careful Fasha watch where you poke or you’ll accidentally find his 3rd Arm **Bottom Left Panel** 🥰🥰🥰 awww look at this Precious little Tomboy

GamerLegend09

Pg 8 Everyone wanting a piece of that beef.

Julian Fratzscher

*Pg. 8* 😆 HAH!! 😁 I knew it, 🙂 I love the change in clothes and color 😏 and the expressions on Fasha & V…😊 priceless

GamerLegend09

I'm hoping Naruto X Samui or Naruto X Kurotsuchi. Maybe both atst.

TheWriteFiction

By the way, any updates on your Naruto story? Was looking forward to how the next chapter goes.

MDD

Hahaha gotta love that reaction. Videl and Erasa are definitely smitten.

MDD

Any Naruto art or Doujin on the near horizon yet?

Omar DeLaHoz

*Pg. 7* **Top 2 Panels** 🙂 It’s nice to see in this universe. They let the boys and the girls play together for gym class, 😌 reminds me of my school years **Bottom Right 2 Panels** Wait… that Hercule Fanboys name is Pensil…… is that Canon or is you pulling my leg here? **Bottom Left Top Panel** See now you would “Think” that **Bottom Left Center & Lower Panel** 😯 oh?……😀 ahhh I think I know what’s coming next page… 😁 and it’s perfect

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* **Top 2 Panels** 😏😏😏 you’re Hot for Gohan **Middle Right & Center Panel** 😳 holdon! 😳😳😳WAITAMINUTE!! **Middle Left Panel** 🤦🏻‍♂️ damnit Son **Bottom Right Panel** 😬 heyheyhey the Teacher! **Bottom Middle Panel** 😑 tollld ya so **Bottom Left Panels** 👍🏻 nice save Pointdexter

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* **Top 2 Panels** 😅 boy can’t tell she’s onto him huh **Middle Right Panel** 😑 one of the few instances I appreciate Pencil Sharpeners help **Middle Center & Left Panel** 😶 okk, starting to drift the Focus a little **Bottom Right Panel** 🙃 yeeesss Videl drift faarrrther awayyy from the realm of possibility **Bottom Center & Left Panels** 😗…….😏 Wow Videl, you’re a perv.

GamerLegend09

This line was in the original DBZ chapter when Gohan was chatting with Erasa, so I'm guessing yes.

TheWriteFiction

Pg. 6 Gohan can even make that lie come true, thanks to Bulma. Also, is this a reference to how in the Super manga, Gohan told Goten to lie about where he actually lives?

Julian Fratzscher

Pg. 5 Videl seems to like big chests.

Julian Fratzscher

*Pg. 4* 😬😬😬 Shit, Forensics in the The Write Fictionverse’s DBZ Silver Age’s no joke

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 3* **Top Right Panel** 😊 this teacher is pretty much a staple in this universe by this point **Top Left Panel** 😍 Erasa Swaaaan! **Middle Right Panel** 😆 YOUNGER ERASA 😆😆😆 😊 I can’t wait to see her appear in Golden Age next **Middle Left Panel** 😳 ohh Shite **Bottom 2 Panels** 😑 Damn… he Gohan’d too hard

GamerLegend09

That's his new ones, but it's zipped up. I'm sure you can find the OG screenshot of these three online.

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 1&2/Cover* 🙂 heyy the Jacket’s new…. 😅 unless he wore that one from in an older illustration I’m not aware of

GamerLegend09

I could think of 100 ways this could go…. and half of them are Not Safe For Work 😏😏😈

GamerLegend09

Sorry. I'm just so overladen with work, I probably won't be accepting new commissions until next year.

TheWriteFiction

I apologize☹️

Tank Poe

Absolutely not.

TheWriteFiction

Are you doing Commissions right now?

Tank Poe


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