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Grrl Power #1363 - Luckily I'm still under warranty

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Panel three may not be quite how Scion usually acquires his DNA samples. Not that he hasn't considered it, but he kept ripping the stockings with his tentacle toes. 

I will cop to it. In that last word balloon, I don't know if I used the semicolon correctly. I'm partially admitting to it because this way someone will either affirm or correct me without me having to not only google it, but, like, comprehend the results, but also it gives the grammar nerds an opportunity to strut their stuff. Maybe there's an even more appropriate bit of punctuation, like three dots in a triangle that looks like the Predator is sighting in on you. I like interrobangs, personally. Not the right mark for that sentence in the last panel. I just like an excuse to say/type "interrobang." ‽ Also, as a comic writer, there's a lot of cases where people are shouting questions. Though I will say, in my head, there's a difference between "?!" and "!?" The former denoting incredulousness, (What are you doing?!) the latter being for exasperation or alarm. (What are you doing!?) An interrobang lacks that distinction. 

Grrl Power #1363 - Luckily I'm still under warranty

Comments

Hmm.. is the a difference between monologuing and "talking with a person who can't answer because you just gagged them"? I feel like there is. Or at least should be. In this case he is at least partially monologuing, but he is also telling our gal information that is necessary for the upcoming negotiations.

Thorbjørn Steen

Showing where Alari stand on the smart-to-dumb scale.

eddi_TBH

I'm just saying dude, you're monologuing and and every second you talk is another second for her to figure out how to kill you.

gaijin 99

Very eloquent for someone missing apparently 80% of their *brain*.

Tim


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