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A Dragon's Foolish Quest [P2]
Added 2021-08-16 22:58:59 +0000 UTCPage 2! This and the next couple pages will be prologue to the main thrust of the story to set up this dragon character's motives, power and personality.
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Oh damn, haha, thanks for catching that. I'll be doing some editing before public release in about a week or so. Unfortunately I have a form of dyspraxia so it's difficult to carch these things on my own
Spike Prime
2021-08-18 08:36:03 +0000 UTCThe perspective and dialogue here works wonderfully [obviously for the last four panels especially]. However shouldn't it say "In my Homeland" [remove "the"]? You're clearly exercising your passion here, beautifully. Look it over when you have time to come back to it.
FlayneX
2021-08-18 04:50:18 +0000 UTC
