Dev Update - July 5
Added 2025-07-05 14:18:34 +0000 UTCHi everyone,
I wanted to share a quick progress update and let you know what I’ve been working on.
Over the past week, I’ve been focusing on Suzi’s subplot. I already had the story of the subplot worked out, but I’ve been developing the plot and started writing the dialogue. The subplot centres on Suzi’s role as the swim team captain and offers a deeper look into her character. It also ties into events later on during the Olympic trials.
So far, we mostly see Suzi in scenes with the MC, which can make her seem like she’s always angry—which isn’t the full picture. This new content should help her feel less one-dimensional.
In addition to the bigger issues I'm planning on tackling, there are also a lot of smaller things I want to address. One of those was the use of expressions like "LAUGH" or "CRYING" in the dialogue. I've now replaced all of them with more natural writing.
Progress updates might be a bit irregular until I begin work on V0.17, but I’ll do my best to keep you informed.
Thank you, as always, for your support!
DB
Comments
Thanks, Bo. Emma has a special place in my heart also. ❤
DarkBlue
2025-07-13 21:38:16 +0000 UTCBeen a great story. I'm always captivated by it. And looking forward to learning more about Suzi. It's all about Emma for me though. Out of the few VN that I love nobody pulls more on my heartstrings (and my shortstrings) more than Emma.
Bo Otto
2025-07-13 02:37:45 +0000 UTCThank you. Glad you're enjoying it, Metastatic Malady. ❤
DarkBlue
2025-07-06 05:28:52 +0000 UTCGreat to hear, I do like Suzi and can understand why she is the way she is, but it will be cool to dive deeper, pun intended? Any way, I love the story you have created and can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work!
Metastatic Malady
2025-07-05 22:13:37 +0000 UTC
