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The Hero They Needed: Chapter 29

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Two questions come to mind after reading this chapter again. First, what happened to Mr. Crouch? Second, what happened to Hermione? Both echo what happened in the book but this is not the book and trusting it for answers could be very dangerous. The use of the broom underwater made perfect sense with all that's gone before and was a delightfully clever move by Mr. Potter. The bit at the end where Sirius notes how proud his parents would be of Harry worked very well. Thank you and might we hope for more?

Brian Jordan

This was INCREDIBLE!! I love the protective brother that Harry is to Jenna (and now Luna). I’m elated that Flitwick did his job! I’m also impressed with the idea of the broom underwater! , I loved it!! I cannot wait until your next update!!

Kristie Storie

I like that it sounds pretty much like 'Who do I kill?'

Saetil

Yyuuus

Gamerdood

“Who’s bullying you?” Harry asked calmly

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne


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