Shannon

9/14 UPDATE: PARTIAL SCRIPT READ/SEMI-ROUGH FOR FIRST SECTION

Added 2023-09-14 17:28:24 +0000 UTC

LINK HERE to video rough in case the above embed didn't work!

I had a bunch of the script in a polished format so I figured I'd do a read through of it real quick on OBS and explain my thought process and give notes as I went! Like a quick semi-rough for the introductory segment of the video, maybe the first couple sections.

But then I started adding clips to it (after it was recorded) and kept adding clips and kept adding clips... and now it's hours later and there are a ton of clips in there to where it feels more like a partial assembly cut or something?? A lot of pieces are missing, I just kind of threw stuff in to play around with it, and it's unlikely any of this VO recording will make the final cut. I may even cut/reorder/change all of it.

When I started adding clips in, though, I couldn't stop, because it was so fun to feel like I was actually working on the edit rather than still being mired in the reading/writing/research phase. I have to be careful on clip selection in this video because I don't want Curtis to come off as boring or for Lutsko or O'Malley to come off as grating. So anything in there now is subject to change.

But I am feeling really good about the video :) This was very fun to do, I'm glad I put it together for y'all! Cause now I have a pseudo rough cut I am having so much fun tinkering with even thought it only covers a small portion of the script.

I'm open to any notes or corrections on this as well if y'all have any!

Thanks as always!

Shannon