Family(42)_fixed
Added 2025-06-02 14:53:55 +0000 UTC..
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fixed some parts, added 1 page for better flow to the next episode.
The next update will be followed by the next story.
I can't reply the message during drawing because there are so many messages, please understand! ๐ญ
Thank you!
Comments
Cool, but here are the true, loyal, paying fans. And ultimately it doesn't matter what the fans think, it's about what the creator wants to draw.
Beepy
2025-06-14 01:55:51 +0000 UTCon other pages where he has posted the majority of it was against the old bastard.
satyriasis
2025-06-13 16:53:14 +0000 UTCOn page 6: "Shouldn't we probably get going soon?" is a little out of order, it should be either "Shouldn't we get going soon?" or "We should probably get going soon." Same thing for "Guess it's time for the finish as usual" slightly out of order, I'd put it as "Guess it's time for the usual finish" or "Guess it's time to finish as usual" Page 8 "Peaky" is a British word, so it might be more understood to just use "pale" or "flushed" --- As for the change itself, it doesn't really bother me personally, but isn't the entire series about everyone having sex? I don't really see how this is considered the only scene with NTR. The original gives it a bit of lore for Yuko's beginnings. But either way, really well done as always! :)
Ainsley
2025-06-13 13:12:14 +0000 UTCFew notes on the English translation: The translation is good, you don't need to change anything; there are just a few things I wanted to point out for more natural speaking. On panel 2 using 'just' multiple times feels awkward (though it is somewhat normal for people to do in regular speech, it's much more awkward to read it) I'd personally write it as "It's just, things have been so incredibly hectic, I haven't had a chance to come see you." adding 'see you' makes it flow a little more naturally, but without it has some slight sexual connotation if that's your style ^^ Also and page 2 and page 4 1:"It's been a while for here too" and 2:"Here's just the same as always" Again, this isn't wrong, it's just a little awkward. 1: There's no easy one word replacement, but I'd probably go with something like "It's been a while since our last time, hasn't it?" 2: I'd just replace it with something like - "You feel the same as always" again removing the 'just' for brevity / flow.
Ainsley
2025-06-13 13:01:39 +0000 UTCYou don't get to have a say in what Pepper draws.
Beepy
2025-06-05 00:13:02 +0000 UTCI don't like old people and ntr and I should just swallow it and keep quiet? Well then, I'm sorry, I forgot that his works are purely for jerking off.
AlmostCry19
2025-06-04 15:05:00 +0000 UTCI definitely prefer the original. But it's your art, so draw what you want. As for the people acting like it was a betrayal. No one betrayed anyone. It's fiction, just a drawing and story. Get a nut off, or not, and move on. If you don't like it, no big deal. As for the addition of dialog. Love it, especially the small exchanges in the middle, like how she marvels at th re strength of her dad.
blumpsie
2025-06-04 11:34:17 +0000 UTCNah, you can get stuffed and touch grass. People crying over her with the dad are hypocrites of the highest order and acting like entitled Chinese gacha spergs as if you were personally cuckolded in real life.
Dumbermancer
2025-06-04 04:49:01 +0000 UTCMaybe we can still see Yuko in a .5 update with the sons, could be good for the people who have to wait.
SageTheMage
2025-06-04 04:22:59 +0000 UTCPepper0 confirms in an earlier comment that they have had sex before. I would like to imagine it started quite early on, because it's hot and is another avenue to get a loli character.
Bxxo
2025-06-04 00:50:29 +0000 UTCI personally didn't have an issue with the first version. I actually kinda thought it explained the foundation of her experiences growing up and that's how it translated to her doing the same with the boys almost like tradition. That being said mom and the boys are by far my favorite so I do mirror others concerns when i say that it sucks knowing the rotation of this many characters means we sometimes have to wait multiple months for another illustration. I think this particular storyline has turned into a lot of drama and you'll never be satisfied if you listen to the vocal minority, so my recommendation to you is to try to get the general idea of how people feel overall, not just the loud ones. And at the end of the day it's your art so fuck everyone else.
pxiv_anon
2025-06-03 21:23:41 +0000 UTCForgot to say, adding dialogues and manga style is a very good decision (not with old man) . I can't wait for manga stories with the boys.
AlmostCry19
2025-06-03 18:58:56 +0000 UTCAnyway, the chapter had a very bad effect on the overall picture. As a fan of Yuko, I was very, very upset. Like, the whole mood got incredibly worse. And even now, after the changes, the effect of some kind of betrayal remains. And it's very sad. However, the change was quite good, although I would have preferred that this dream was dreamed by the grandfather. I pray that he never appears in the future and everything remains only between the boys. And that no one except the boys appears at all. And it's also very painful that we will have to wait a long time until the new update with Yuko, in order to see her with the boys. I respect your work, but this is very painful. In any case, thanks for the past works and, I hope, for your future ones..
AlmostCry19
2025-06-03 18:03:22 +0000 UTCMy headcanon: she didn't fuck her father, yet.
Shinzo
2025-06-03 05:16:51 +0000 UTCOkay. I'm glad it wasn't a case of people harassing you into changing your story. I'm a fan of incest, regardless of the age or gender of its participants, and I've been loving this series. Keep up the great work.
zeikcied
2025-06-03 04:12:04 +0000 UTCI like the original better. :(
urkel_berk
2025-06-03 03:52:20 +0000 UTCLook at the other comments, you're definitely not in the minority. Most of us liked the original better.
Beepy
2025-06-03 02:40:05 +0000 UTCMight be the minority here but I think the original is better. While I was neutral about the grandpa I think the fact that they actually fucked first thing seeing each other is infinitely more hot than her daydreaming about it. Still I respect it if that's the direction you want. Well done regardless. Love your work
SMTTSSS
2025-06-03 02:28:57 +0000 UTCWhile I had absolutely no issue at all with the original release, I have to say seeing Yuko's lusting for her dad in a daydream is insanely hot. And I like that you still kept the major theme of the episode intact. Very well done!
lolifren
2025-06-02 23:52:28 +0000 UTCthank you for the work you put in, please continue doing what you feel is right! I'll support you either way... but please don't let the negativity get to you!
Ponderosa
2025-06-02 23:11:22 +0000 UTCIf you want my opinion, personally I like this new character, it's a good addition to the plot and was never a big deal to fuss about. Hopefully we can move on. Another user here suggested that this could have been a .5 update, which is fair.
SageTheMage
2025-06-02 22:44:19 +0000 UTCHaven't seen this yet, going to class right now but hope you're satisfied with the result and doing well โค๏ธ. Keep doing what you love.
SageTheMage
2025-06-02 22:36:07 +0000 UTCAnd itโs your own work, your own space! Just because a few boring haters with their narrow-minded views piped up, you had to change the story. Iโm honestly kinda pissed for youโobviously at those idiot trolls, not you! ใใใซใใใใฃใฆๅใฎไฝๅในใใผในใใใ๏ผ ใคใพใใชใไบบ็ใง่ฆ้็ญใ้ ธๆฐใฎใใใงใในใใผใชใผๅคใใชใใใใใชใใฃใใชใใฆใใใธใงๅใฎใใจๆใใจ่ น็ซใคใใใใกใใใใฎใใซใช้ ธๆฐใซๅฏพใใฆใญ๏ผ ๊ฒ๋ค๊ฐ ์ด๊ฑด ๋น์ ์ ์ํ ๊ณต๊ฐ์ธ๋ฐ! ๋ฐ๋ถํ๊ณ ํธํํ ์ฌ๊ณ ๋ฐฉ์ ๊ฐ์ง ๋ช๋ช ๊น๊นํ ์ ๋ค ๋๋ฌธ์ ์คํ ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ๊ฟ์ผ ํ๋ค๋. ์ง์ง ๋น์ ์๊ฐํ๋๊น ํ๋์. ๋น์ฐํ ๊ทธ ๋ฉ์ฒญํ ํธ๋กค๋คํํ ํ๋ ๊ฑฐ์์!
hideinurheart
2025-06-02 21:56:58 +0000 UTCMan, I feel so bad for you, having to deal with all that hassle just โcause of some stubborn idiotsโ comments. Those ageist haters are seriously stuck-up and boring. Dad and daughter? Fine. Son and mom? Also fine. But dad with an adult daughter? Nope, apparently thatโs a problem. Itโs such a shame you had to redraw this piece, and it let down all the fans who were hyped for some older-character NTR. But hey, Iโm still your biggest fan! No matter what you draw, Iโll always have your back. Keep rocking it! ใใใผใใใธใงๆฎๅฟตใ ใใใใฃใกใๅคงๅคใ ใฃใใใญใ้ ญๅบใใใซใฉใใฎใณใกใณใใฎใใใงใใใใฎ่ไบบๅซใใฎ้ ธๆฐใใใธใง้ ๅบใงใคใพใใชใไบบ็้ใฃใฆใใใชใใใใจๅจ๏ผ OKใๆฏๅญใจใใ๏ผ ใใใOKใใชใฎใซใๆไบบใใๅจใจใใใฏใใกใฃใฆไฝ๏ผ ใใใงไฝๅๆใ็ดใใใใใใฆใ่ไบบNTRๅฅฝใใชใใกใณใฎๆๅพ ใ่ฃๅใใใกใใฃใใใใพใใไฟบใฏๅคใใใๅใฎ่ถ ใใกใณใ ใ๏ผ ไฝๆใใฆใใใใฃใจๅฟๆดใใใใใญใใฌใณใใฃใฆ๏ผ ~~~ ์, ์ง์ง ์ํ๊น๊ณ ๋น์ ์ด ๊ณ ์ ๋ง์์ ๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ์์. ์ตํต์ฑ ์๋ ๋ฉ์ฒญ์ด๋ค ๋๊ธ ๋๋ฌธ์. ๊ทธ ๋ ธ์ธ ์ซ์ดํ๋ ๊น๊นํ ์ ๋ค, ์ง์ง ๊ณ ์ง ์ธ๊ณ ์ถ์ด ๋ฐ๋ถํ ๊ฑฐ์์. ์๋น ๋ ๋ธ? ๊ด์ฐฎ์ฃ . ์๋ค์ด๋ ์๋ง? ๊ทธ๊ฒ๋ ๊ด์ฐฎ์ฃ . ๊ทผ๋ฐ ์ฑ์ธ ๋ธ์ด๋ ์๋น ๋ ์ ๋๋ค๋ ๋ญ์์? ๊ทธ๋์ ์ํ์ ๋ค์ ๊ทธ๋ ค์ผ ํ๊ณ , ๋ ธ์ธ NTR ์ข์ํ๋ ํฌ๋ค ๊ธฐ๋๋ ๋ฌด๋์ก์์์. ๊ทธ๋๋ ์ ์ฌ์ ํ ๋น์ ์ ์ดํ ํฌ์ด์์! ๋ญ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๋ ํญ์ ์์ํ ๊ฒ์. ํ๋ด์ธ์! ~~~
hideinurheart
2025-06-02 21:52:55 +0000 UTCThat's a seriously great statement.
BABaracus
2025-06-02 20:36:35 +0000 UTCThat's what I was thinking, thanks for confirming.
BABaracus
2025-06-02 20:34:33 +0000 UTCYou shouldn't have to censor yourself or change one of your illustrations just because of a few angry viewers - especially since it sounds like they were in the minority or there might have been some sneaky behavior with alt accounts. Above all else, you should draw things that make you happy! We (your REAL fans) will support you no matter what! ใ็ฒใๆงใงใใ๏ผ
madesomewaffles
2025-06-02 18:57:09 +0000 UTCIf this is really what you want, then I understand. I'm sorry for seeming unkind, and I'm sorry you had to go through all of this.
mattmccleary
2025-06-02 18:54:47 +0000 UTCThat was what I missed, and It'll be addressed in the upcoming update. Please wait!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 18:34:09 +0000 UTCThank you for your opinion! If my sole intention was to simply surrender to some fans, I would have deleted that episode. The actual reason I made some modifications to the story was to reduce the kind of presentation that might feel like 'netorare,' while keeping the relationship between Yuko and his father unchanged. (Perhaps it's more accurate to say I fell for a provocation rather than surrendered.) I trust that those who support me do so for my freedom in creative activities, and I'm always deeply grateful for that. With this recent matter, I feel a bit embarrassed for showing a side of myself that seemed too swayed by fan opinions, which is different from how I usually am. I will strive to create even more amazing art so as not to disappoint you. Thank you always for your support!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 18:26:22 +0000 UTCIt's pretty incredible that mom has become maybe even more popular than fumika
Birdie98
2025-06-02 18:20:39 +0000 UTCThank you for the comment! The revision was intended to subtly hint that Yuko and his father's relationship had a pre-existing history, while also paving the way for a smoother progression into the next mother-son episode.
หโผใ
2025-06-02 18:05:16 +0000 UTCIn my opinion the character should have just been part of the minor update, i don't think anyone would have cared that way. It's just that the mom i feel like is your most popular character, certainly my favourite and you get her only every 3 months, i was definitely disappointed, but yeah, if you kept it to a minor update, that would have been absolutely no problem. If anything, you should re-do the mom for this next major update again. But thankfully, the amount you charge for you art is so little, that it's no big deal.
Stabbar
2025-06-02 18:03:11 +0000 UTCI'm sorry that I'm modifying too often, but I think I've erased an important part so I've added it back. Thank you for reminding!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 17:53:23 +0000 UTCThank you!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 17:32:51 +0000 UTCI think there is an unnatural part of the production because I was revising it for a short time. Thanks for the comments!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 17:32:06 +0000 UTC๐
หโผใ
2025-06-02 17:29:27 +0000 UTCThank you for your opinion!
หโผใ
2025-06-02 17:28:26 +0000 UTCI'm sorry, but I'm pretty disappointed. Maybe you know something that we don't, like a bunch of people cancelled their support plans, but without that information it looks like you allowed yourself to be bullied by a bunch of people who aren't even supporting you. I don't like feeling like the voice of someone who's been supporting you for most of the past 3.5 years matters less than the voices of people who have probably never supported you. I don't think this will even make the bullies happy, to be honest. They'll probably keep adding unkind tags to this post over on pixiv.
mattmccleary
2025-06-02 17:22:18 +0000 UTCThis incident being a daydream doesn't necessarily mean that Yuko and Grandpa don't already have that kind of relationship, so it still may be canon. The dream dialogue is still hinting at that at least ("as usual", "as always" ..)
BABaracus
2025-06-02 17:19:20 +0000 UTCAw Should've kept the sex real
Legion92
2025-06-02 16:52:53 +0000 UTCI'm extremely disappointed that Yuko fucking her dad is apparently no longer canon. And I'm just sad that a couple angry "fans" launching a harassment campaign (one of them obviously created a dozen or more alts to flood the comments on the last post to make it seem like more people hated it than actually did) managed to make you compromise your vision. I don't blame you, I'm just sad it happened.
zeikcied
2025-06-02 16:50:43 +0000 UTCI was a bit confused as well. I thought the fluid was cum at first, but that would've made no sense with the daydream. If the panel of her daydreaming was above the one with Grandpa & Toru it would've made the order of events easier to understand.
BABaracus
2025-06-02 16:42:14 +0000 UTCIt took me way too long to understand why the grandpa was covering Toru's face, because I was so focused on the mom's cute sleeping face and the "Daddy..." to see she was going to town in her sleep. I was like "That's a lot of drool she's wiping with her hands" lol Even if she doesn't actually have sex with her dad now, the fact she fantasizes about it is still great. The look Toru gives her at the end makes me wonder so much about what he's thinking. You didn't need to make any changes, but I think your quick work turned out well!
Bxxo
2025-06-02 15:55:19 +0000 UTCidk how i feel about the change, feels off. glad i got the earlier copy before. guess ill see how it goes.
Paunch
2025-06-02 15:20:25 +0000 UTCSad to see the panel with her drinking the cum from cupped hands removed, I felt like her father is the reason for her fetish. But hey, itโs great either way!
ivandavy
2025-06-02 15:14:27 +0000 UTCI'm not sure why you changed it, but this is good too!
Cleveland Rock
2025-06-02 15:14:07 +0000 UTCI like this new version a lot better ! I don't think you need to satisfy everyone with every set, your the artist and you shoud draw thing you enjoy drawing but I still welcome the change nonetheless !
chatswaag
2025-06-02 15:12:45 +0000 UTCSo this time it was a daydream of Yuko?
BABaracus
2025-06-02 15:12:25 +0000 UTCLove both directions though. Lucky I managed to get the earlier version too xD
Tech
2025-06-02 15:11:50 +0000 UTCThank you for your hard work. Although, to be honest, you were not obliged to do it.
Birdie98
2025-06-02 15:10:00 +0000 UTCwell its also a nice decision :D personally i hope its true :D, what if produce some scene like when mom is young enough and maybe mom and dad is also family members
ๅฐๅฐพๅทด
2025-06-02 15:08:10 +0000 UTC
