A Flawless Legacy (Naruto SI with WC)
Added 2024-03-16 03:35:19 +0000 UTCChapter 53 - 60
Comments
Fun chapter
shabbybook
2024-03-16 12:38:46 +0000 UTCQuality took a hit in 59 and 60 the dialog felt kinda stilted and awkward and there were a good number of grammatical errors especially in 60s Tsunade scene, alright chapters but they need work.
Jacob Malcolm
2024-03-16 07:41:27 +0000 UTCGreat chapters! Saw a mistake. Onii-san is for older brother. Onee-san is older sister. Also, wasn't Kaguya also sealed in the moon? I'm really fuzzy on everything that happened after Nagato died.
Xisaro
2024-03-16 04:42:15 +0000 UTC
