Undercover ASSignment: Omega Update
Added 2018-04-20 21:30:52 +0000 UTCThe restructure update. Thanks to your feedback last week, I've done some editing to the movie. For the most part, most scenes were only reduced by about 5-10 seconds. Longer scenes such as 2, 5, 8, 9, and 13 had reductions of about 20 seconds or more. The biggest change is that I think I will cut scenes 10 and 11 entirely as they were fairly redundant and got in the middle of the krogan scenes. Additionally, I think a shortened scene 13 will make more sense if it comes before scene 12.
The revision comes out to about 17 minutes 32 seconds. That's not including the intro. All in all, still quite a long movie, but more manageable. This could still change as it's animated, but this is probably about as short as it will go. ZeroDiamonds has a lot of lovely audio, and it would be difficult to cut any more.
Some dialogue has been cut, but I haven't revised the script. For now, here's a simple txt of the scene by scene breakdown.
Comments
Also, I had considered keeping the scenes but at only 10-20 seconds long, so they could function as filler. I figured it might be easier to cut them entirely now, and add them back later if all is going well.
BlueLight
2018-04-21 14:30:10 +0000 UTCI think it would be difficult to fuse the scenes since their pose and audio are quite different. One scene would effectively be cut anyway. Definitely some options to try.
BlueLight
2018-04-21 14:27:45 +0000 UTCIt's something I thought of too. But at the moment, the cuts are made to save time on the movie, so that content would have to be low priority.
BlueLight
2018-04-21 14:20:36 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback. Seems 11 was more of a favorite than I thought. I can definitely look in to keeping the scenes somehow.
BlueLight
2018-04-21 14:14:38 +0000 UTCAlso, maybe release the audio for the cut scenes (if you have it yet) for people that were maybe looking forward to those ones? Unless you're planning to use them as separate stand alone animations later
Damn Quixote
2018-04-21 06:51:59 +0000 UTCThink you made the right call cutting 10 & 11 (not that they were bad, but yeah, it felt weird to break up the Krogan scenes). Glad the Krogan and Elcor stuff made the cut! Looking forward to those the most
Damn Quixote
2018-04-21 06:49:53 +0000 UTCUrgh, that's disappointing if scenes get cut. If it really needs to happen, what about fusing scene 6 and 11 together or cutting scene 6 instead and 11. 11 stands out more since 6 is just Miranda getting fucked air tight which happens a lot in this film anyway.
Supreme Overlord Llama
2018-04-21 02:19:22 +0000 UTCsame here
Malgus26
2018-04-21 01:12:15 +0000 UTCI like the krogans scenes. The 3 way teaser video was awesome!
sheethead
2018-04-21 00:08:05 +0000 UTCI was actually looking forward to Miranda’s amazing ass getting double stuffed with cock
Derples
2018-04-20 22:45:44 +0000 UTC10 and 11 were kinda my favs too
Malgus26
2018-04-20 22:31:48 +0000 UTCScene 11 is one of my favourites. Maybe we'll get something like that in the sequel. There will be a sequel, right? Right?
UnprocessedCoalLump
2018-04-20 22:05:08 +0000 UTCI have a suggestion then.....since you cut out scenes 10 and 11 maybe you could release them as just single videos....just a thought...I was kinda hoping to see the vorcha triple team Miranda and the batarians double bang her ass...like i said tho just a thought
Malgus26
2018-04-20 22:04:00 +0000 UTCCool and anymore wips u can post soon would rock
Ladies Man 7777
2018-04-20 22:00:31 +0000 UTC
