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The Normandy's Bitch Storyboard + Script

I'm linking the storyboard in case anyone doesn't want to spoil all the scenes as I grouped them into one image. The script is uploaded as an attachment.

Storyboard

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Cut Content

The movie mostly has generic male crew, but there is also Jack and Grunt. I considered adding even more cameos but decided to cut them. Ultimately, they over complicated a project that's meant to be short.

Kasumi 1, Kasumi 2 

Kasumi is one of my personal favorites, and she now has a Daz4 model, so I liked to include her. I wanted to include flashes of some more girl on girl action with her, but I think it was a bit too ambitious for this short.

The intro. While I didn't pose any of the more complicated intros, I had considered a few. Namely, I wanted Shepard talking to EDI or Kelly asking about the crew. Casting multiple voice talents and animating a 20-30 second intro was too much for this project, so I simplified it down as much as possible.

But the idea of Kelly joining in was a juicy one, so I played around with it.

Kelly 1 

I still cut it from the movie as other scenes could've really used a bit more time. Despite the short cameo, Kelly basically doubles the workload for her scene as well.

EDIT: Updated the storyboard and script. Cut two short Grunt scenes, extended Jack's scene and the finale.

The Normandy's Bitch Storyboard + Script

Comments

Looking forward to it.

Supreme Overlord Llama

I'm considering it for the final scene. It depends if I can fit it within the time constraints.

BlueLight

This short is a good opportunity to get some cum animation practice in too

Derples

Looking great can't wait to see more

Riblit

Looking forward to it as always

Malgus26

Impressive. I am enticed.

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