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Xenosexual [Chapter 1 - AKRASIA]

Well that took a while.

Give it a read! Let me know what you think

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Comments

You did great, I loved it, I need more of this

Cesar Munguia Aragon

That's where the helmet inspiration came from, haha

Nyuunzi

Well damn, I'll have to give it a go! BTW love Strike-2s look, heavily reminds me of Titanfall

Lonely Scout

I think so too, watched a LOT of videos on youtube about character arcs and motivations and... generally how to write characters, took a while to get there, but i'm finally happy with this version

Nyuunzi

Thank you!

Nyuunzi

Just started it, 2 pages in atm, they're on my Discord, like everything else I do! The inner dialogue was based heavily on Disco Elysium, Natyss always was a bit mad, but having multiple voices in her head was an idea that came after playing that, adds to her character... and her madness

Nyuunzi

I like the inner dialog, makes Natyss feel relatable imo. How's the 2nd chapter coming along?

Lonely Scout

This was great

Pally Ganker

I like this so much more than your original draft. You spent more time developing the character’s personalities, relationships, and the setting of the world. Looking forward to where it goes from here.

Escafreya


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