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Zenith of Sorcery Chapter 13: Mysterious Powers

The new chapter is out!

Links:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/71045/zenith-of-sorcery/chapter/1717773/13-mysterious-powers
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3368346/13/Zenith-of-Sorcery

Late as usual, but I think it's good. Hope you enjoy.

Comments

You could do a little list of the characters that appeared at the end of the chapter, like in Ave Xia Rem Y. Fans of that story, which is quite good, appreciate the character roll.

Mr R

I sense a dusty slap heading towards Marcus quite soon

Mr R

He wants to fix up the tower and get to know his students before he does that. He isn't in a hurry, but he will do it eventually.

Domagoj Kurmaic

I thought celer wanted to be summoned when Marcus chose his students. So why didn't he call her?

Mr R

Hmm. I'll have to think about that, though I'm reluctant to change much in previous chapters. Maybe there is some simple change to indicate that Cricket's real name is Livia, at least in some of the mentions...

Domagoj Kurmaic

Yup, took me a while to figure that out. I kept wondering if she had been selected or not.

giom

Thanks for the chapter. I personally am conflicted whether the headmaster setting will Take agency away from The Mc but we shall see where it goes '!

Tim Deral

I also had to check this. May be good to insert a few more reminders (use both names to refer to her).

Andrew Browne

It's Livia from Black Spruce Village. She'll probably be called Cricket in most interactions with her though.

DiabolicalGenius

Thanks for the chapter. It was rather enlightening. Now we know what makes Renatus special and it looks like him and Julia are likely to be the problem students for now. Him because he's got sticky fingers and is too clever for his own good and her because she seems a bit shallow and self-important. Probably thinks she too good to be there with a bunch of orphans and doesn't quite get how powerful Marcus is as he isn't playing to her expectations of what a great mage should look and act like, no matter what the academy told her. She'll probably get a shock when the other three students arrive and either barely see her as any better than the orphans due to their powerful backgrounds, or think she's an idiot for not getting how lucky she is to be a student of THE Marcus King. Also, I'm quite sure the kids feel he mentioned the bit about "dire centipedes" in the basement waaaaaaaay too casually.

DiabolicalGenius

I'm sorry, which one of them is cricket again? I can't remember what her legal non insect name was. And I don't wanna get them mixed up. Almost threw my phone through the window because I thought she hadn't been picked.

Jeff Gault

Always love an update. Really feels like we're getting into it, now, so I'm very excited

Green0Photon

Thanks for the chapter! I don't keep track of your release schedule so all chapters are on time to me <3

Untellable

Thank you for the chapter and enjoy the well-deserved sleep!

Monotropa


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