Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve: CH_263
Added 2024-06-22 18:02:56 +0000 UTCTakuma felt as though his head was literally splitting. There was so much sweat and building plaster on his face from running through the wall along with the fire ninjutsu which had blown up right in front of him, that it hid the fact that he was literally tearing up from the pain. His teeth hurt from over-clenching to bear the pain coming from his head.
Not once in his life had he fought through the intensity of pain he was feeling now—and he had been brutalised several times during his Ring days. Even when he was almost killed by ROOT assassins, he had Sango's painkillers in his system, which, along with adrenaline, made him practically incapable of feeling pain. But nothing helped as he fought Kon and a ROOT agent trying to kill him. His reaction time was so slow because more than half of his mind was focused on the pain.
However, he was glad that he was able to clear Rikku and Kameko out of the room with a ROOT agent for information. The mission was technically over, and he could run away, but then he wouldn't get to know what was happening to him. He had to capture Kon to get some answers.
Takuma locked in on Kon, and his headache had a silver lining that it was so intense that the physical trauma from having a ninjutsu explode in his face paled in comparison. He rose up toward Kon as chakra flooded his arm for the highest power of augmentation he could manage without injuring his body—at that moment, he tested the limit of how much chakra he could pack into his arm.
It was an extremely dangerous choice to make when his ability to focus and think was compromised.
But he had to bet big to win big.
His sleeve and arm were still on fire as he cocked his arm back, ready to lash out a full contact strike, when all the pain in his head suddenly vanished like it never existed. It was the most wonderful feeling he had felt in his two lives. His entire body felt light and springy; he clenched the muscles in his arm taut, he was going to take out Kon with this strike.
The feeling of freedom from pain was short-lived because the pain returned just as quickly as it had vanished, and it returned with a vengeance. Vertigo, nausea, breathlessness—everything hit him all at once. The chakra in his arm slipped out of control and vanished/wasted away before he could react. He wasn't even aware that he had hopped away from Kon on instinct.
Takuma's vision turned completely white to the point he was blinded.
His sole thought that he managed to muster through the pain was as if he had been trapped in a genjutsu.
Click.
An intense feeling of fear invaded his heart when a memory he had never seen before flashed before his eyes. He was lying down on a cold, hard metal table with a blinding white glaring down at him. In his peripheral vision, he saw the shadows of multiple men wearing scrub caps and masks.
Split.
The memory shifted to him sitting in a room with white walls, floors, and ceilings. There were only three pieces of grey furniture in the room—a bed, table, and chair. Posters stuck to the wall had writing on them that Takuma couldn't make out as the memory blurred them out. The him in the memory looked down and saw pairs of child's arms and legs covered in bandages stained with yellow medicine and red blood. The feel of the memory was calm, with a hint of tension ever present in the background. The door to the white room opened, and the memory began to shift as a figure stepped in. He couldn't make out who the figure was.
Pop.
The fear and panic returned to the front in full blast as Takuma felt his back pressed against the wall. His chest was rising faster and faster—and standing in front of him was undoubtedly a much younger Kon, who seemed to yelling something at him. The sound was garbled, but the more he yelled, the more dread Takuma felt—to the point that he could neither breathe nor see properly—making it feel like he was being drowned underwater.
Crack.
Takuma jerked back out of the memory into the present to find Kon's sword blade being thrust towards his heart. He barely had the time to react with his hand. The sword stabbed through his palm and then cut just below his armpit.
"Argh!"
Takuma tried to pull back, but Kon jerked the sword, which hooked onto his palm. Takuma screamed and continued to pull his palm free of the sword as it sliced through his flesh. He turned his head back and caught the ROOT agent snuck behind him from his right side; Takuma couldn't defend himself as his right hand was locked in with the sword
Takuma screamed again and continued to pull his palm free of the sword—and heard the other ROOT agent snuck behind him from his right side, Takuma couldn't defend himself as his right hand was locked in with the sword. He raised his shoulder at the last second and received a kunai to its hilt in his back.
He was going to die, thought Takuma.
He didn't think of death often during battles because there was no use thinking, and it was more beneficial to think about the things to help him survive— but he was now trapped, surrounded, alone, and not in his best form even before he was stabbed in two parts of his body. He didn't even have time to process the mind-breaking memories he had just seen—the first memories of the boy he had ever seen.
'Fuck it,' Takuma cursed.
He had been trying to tone down trading damage in his combat for a while now—but it was clear to him that way of fighting just didn't fit him. He couldn't be an elegant fighter; he had to get in there and get dirty if he wanted to win tough fights.
He was Scars, and he would always be him.
He took a deep breath before pushing all of his power into his feet. Instead of trying to pull his hand free from the sword, Takuma stepped in close to Kon, who didn't expect it. Takuma charged his arm and slammed a palm augmented to the limit into his chest. He felt Kon's ribs beneath his palm and channelled all his negativity—rage, fear, hatred—all into that strike. Kon spurted blood into Takuma's face before he flew back like a cannonball into the wall.
Kon let go of his sword, but Takuma had no time to pull it out as he turned around and spin-kicked the other ROOT agent. His form was busted, and the kick had no real power behind it, but the agent jumped back to avoid getting hit and gave Takuma time and space. He took out the kunai from his back and threw it at the agent with chakra behind it. The kunai was parried, but the agent stumbled back because of the force behind the kunai.
Takuma finally pulled the sword of palm with an ugly scream and ran out of the room through a side entrance.
Perhaps taking out the kunai from his back was a bad move. He was leaking blood from two spots at a worrying pace. The state of his breathing resembled someone who was in the last stretch of an ultra-marathon, even though it had been less than fifteen minutes since he had killed the Hidden Frost shinobi outside the manor house. His condition was worsening by the minute and extending the fight was not in his favour.
He half-stumbled into the hallway and tripped on his own feet as he made a split-second decision to change the location. He threw a shuriken to shatter a nearby window, jumped out, and then climbed up to the floor above and used Kon's sword to shatter a window to enter.
Hiding was impossible because the floor was stained by the blood dripping from his hand. So he stabbed the sword into the ground beside him and stood in front of the shattered window. He looked down at his mangled right hand and somehow began to weave hand seals. Ignoring the pain, the fingers in his right hand resisted his commands, but he managed even if barely.
Water Release: Spirit Water Wave
A football-sized orb of water with some of his blood mixed in formed before his fingers. His arms trembled as he took aim at the shattered window. The wait was less than ten seconds, but it felt like an eternity as his arms grew heavier.
The ROOT agent poked his head above the window pane, and Takuma took a shot that missed when the agent ducked down. The shot itself was a smidge to the right. Takuma looked down at the water orb, which still held the shape that had scantly happened during practice and never on-field. However, Takuma didn't get to shoot another shot at a human because a kunai with an explosive tag flew in from the window, and he shot through it before it could blow up. The water orb collapsed, and three shots worth of chakra were wasted.
The window next to the one Takuma was standing before shattered and Kon rushed towards him.
"Free!" Kon yelled.
That message was for the other ROOT agent, who immediately climbed up and launched a pincer attack.
Takuma pulled the sword from the floor, swung it at the agent, and then ran across the hallway to keep both of them in front of him. His right hand was useless from the damage, and he truly wished that he had the time to create water tentacles, but he didn't have the water or time for it.
He was sure that Kon understood that as well and was giving him no time or space to remedy his injury. But he had Kon's sword that he switched to his mangled hand. He had no genuine experience with a sword, and it felt heavier in his hand because of his weakened grip; he would've been able to handle a lighter kunai much better—but he didn't want his opponents close to him because of his injuries, and the longer sword helped him accomplish that.
The ROOT agent rushed in, and Takuma responded by swinging his sword at him. Kon tried to use that time as an opening and even threw in a curve by bouncing off the ceiling, but Takuma was expecting that and punched a second-form augmentation at him. Kon crossed his hands as the chakra hit him and was thrown several feet back, temporarily knocked away from the fight, easing Takuma's load as he now only had the ROOT agent to contend against.
Takuma stopped backing away and slashed at the agent with the sword, and it was not only easily parried but also knocked out of his hand. He didn't panic and moved in closer and threw an elbow of the mangled hand at the agent—while the hand was useless, the rest of the arm still worked—the agent blocked with his arm, but Takuma augmented his elbow, and it knocked the wind out of the agent. Takuma followed up with a kick to the knee, knocking to the floor—and then smashed in his face with a second-form augmentation that bloodied the agent's face.
In a few seconds, he had made both time and space to create an advantage for himself.
Seeing that he was fighting alone, Hidden Mist Jutsu was the obvious and perfect choice. He would flood the floor with mist and then use the opportunity to first cast Wild Water Wave jutsu to create water for the Eight Tentacle jutsu. And then use the cover of the mist to mount himself a comeback.
He raised his hands to weave hand seals for the Hidden Mist Jutsu when he suddenly heard something move behind him.
"Takuma!"
Takuma was already turning when he registered the voice that called his name.
All the pain, the chaotic emotions stemming from the new memories, the cold spreading through his body from blood loss, the fatigue that was beginning to set in—everything came to a stop when he saw Rikku standing before him. She was facing him and gazed up at him with a shocked expression that matched his—neither of them expected what had just happened.
"My body just moved," she said, her voice just above a whimper as blood dribbled down the side of her lips.
Takuma looked down and saw a bloody sword sticking out of her body, a little bit too close to her chest. He recognised the sword because it belonged to the ROOT agent Rikku and Kameko had taken away. He watched as the bloodstain grew out from the place where the sword exited her body. He looked up and felt a jolt shudder his body when he Kon behind her with a hateful smirk on his face that grew as he watched the shock set in on Takuma's face.
"You're not the only one who can use clones," he said.
But Takuma wasn't listening.
Kon's clone pulled his sword out of Rikku, and she collapsed forward into Takuma's embrace, who grabbed her out of pure instinct.
"Huh?"
Comments
It wasn't a spur-of-the-moment decision. I knew this was going to happen before I started writing the fight, so her leaving and then coming back wasn't put in because I thought about killing Rikku in the moment. However, I'll say that I agree with your point about meaningful death. I still think her death was meaningful, but I do think it would've been better if she had been able to injure an agent in someway.
FictionOnlyReader
2024-07-09 18:54:26 +0000 UTCDid you really bring Rikku back just to kill her? You couldn't have her die taking out the extra root ninja? You know, make it even a little bit meaningful. I already know this is gonna be a point of trauma in the future for Takuma and it really didn't need to be.
Smiling Reader
2024-07-09 16:50:59 +0000 UTCIt seems mc was part of root. I can't imagine it would make him much stronger than he is now (like he is soloed couple root agent and won)but perhaps it would add some depth to his skills that are not just 2 or 3 years old( like in wrestling there is difference between beginning at the age of 5 or at 10) and it would also increase his skills.
Bookworm bibliophile
2024-06-23 23:02:29 +0000 UTCTakuma has used most of his trump cards and is on his last leg here, the only effective things I can see here are the clone bomb from early on, a new or interesting application of genjutsu (what im hoping for), or the timely intervention of root. Of course there's always the possibility of stuff from takumas time at root (can't tell atm if he was a recruit or expirement) or higher development of Takuma's Chakra enhancement but those feel a bit shallow atm.
RiverusRomurus
2024-06-23 10:21:11 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter, quite a surprise at the end, I quite like this point of the story where we start seeing Takuma isn’t actually weak or slow progressing in any way but actually quite above average, for me it was one of the more difficult things in the beginning to get over but really glad I held through
Kelevra
2024-06-23 09:06:54 +0000 UTCIt's expected, or at the very least, makes sense when you consider the nature of the story so far. Takumas basically been training Day-In Day-Out in far worse conditions than the others, not letting up at all. I wouldn't say it's a matter of them being weak, they're *genin*, if anything they are STRONG for Genin. Takumas just reached a level comparable to Chuunin, meanwhile they're good Genin, fighting against Good Chuunin level agents.
Just Kab
2024-06-22 23:57:05 +0000 UTCEverything about the chapter(s)was good but I’m surprised at how weak the rest of the team(Rikki, Kameko) are in this scenario.
GN
2024-06-22 22:31:06 +0000 UTCNo! Not best girl Rikki 😭
SunGear
2024-06-22 22:21:43 +0000 UTCYeah figured at least 1 of the team had to die during this whole thing
Astral Aion
2024-06-22 19:01:56 +0000 UTCDamn
Dillon Zepeda
2024-06-22 18:21:49 +0000 UTCPoor rikku
Navdeep Sugandhi
2024-06-22 18:15:11 +0000 UTC