Not sure if anyone will be into this, but thought it would be a neat patreon exclusive to post a script I wrote for a sequel to the bus ride comics, included above. The first image is updated designs for the heroes, I wanted to try something a little more realistic than usual. Maybe I will still draw this someday, but it would be a lot of effort, so on the dream pile for now.
The Script is below!
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RIDE HOME
Marcus and Alvin
Bus arrives
Boys on bus
Boys sitting in back
Tension
One boy
Other boy
A: So uh… how was class?
B: It was, ya know… fine I… hey can we talk?
A: About what?
B: The… the ride in this morning.
A: Oh uh… yeah.
B: Well…
A: Uh, sorry… that was kinda weird huh?
B: Y-yeah. Pretty weird to just pull out…
A: My dick.
B: Yeah, your dick.
A: I just wanted you to uh… believe me. About how… big it is.
B: Well… you were telling the truth.
A: Fucking right.
B: I don’t know why you think it’s a problem.
A: I get why you’d think that but uh… people get scared.
B: Scared?
A: Like that it’ll hurt, or not fit, ya know?
B: Oh… I guess that makes sense.
A: It didn’t scare you though.
B: Pff no way. Who’s scared… of a big dick.
A: Haven’t found the right person I guess.
B: Huh.
A: I’m pent up. Even now..
We see his bulge
B: Y.. you’re hard?
A: Chubbed up lol. Just thinking about it…
B: Looks uh.. Like you need bigger pants.
A: Would you mind if I… let it out?
B: Um…
A: Unless you’re scared?
B: I’m not. You can uh… do what you want. It’s cool.
A: Thanks Bro
He lets out his huge, pulsing cock
A: Ahh that’s better.
A: Fuck I’ve been horny all day… class was so boring…
Stare
A: You know before we got off this morning, I was gonna ask…
B: Ask what?
A: If you wanted to… try touching it.
B: Dude
A: I know, we’re bros… but uh, maybe you’d like it? I would like it.
B: Um…
A: Come on. (dick jump) Just for a second.
A: You can stop if you don’t like it. I’ll put it away, never ask again.
B: I don’t know…
A: Please, bro?
Gulp
B: Just… just for a second…
A: Thank you
He reaches over towards the dick… slowly putting his fingers on it
A: Mmm.
The dick pulses!
B: (it’s so warm… feels alive…)
He wraps his hand around it. It flexes
B: (holy shit
B’s dick pulses in his pants
A: Wow, that feels great bro.
B: Y-yeah..?
A: Stroke me a little?
B: O-okay…
He strokes up the length of the cock, the foreskin collecting, then back down
B: Wow…
A: Fuck yeah…
B: It’s amazing…
A: You like it huh?
B: Um
Bulge in B’s pants
A: Looks like you do
B: (blush)
A: Hey… can I see yours again?
A: I thought about it during class…
A: Did you think about mine?
B: N-no…
A: Let me see that dick bro
B: Fuck…
B takes out his throbbing dick
A: Nick cock
B: T-Thanks…
A: Can I touch it?
B: Uhh… don’t… don’t tell anyone…
A: That a yes?
B: Yeah…
A: Tell me direct. What do you want?
B: I want… I want you to touch my dick…
A reaches over and uses his large hand to carefully touch B’s dick
B: (oh my god oh my god oh my god)
A: Nice… really nice…feel good?
B: Yeah… damn.
A: Keep stroking mine too
B: Okay…
They stroke and stroke…
B: (Oh my god… I could cum right now…)
A: You close?
B: Ah?
A: You’re leaking a lot…
B: Yeah, s-stop I might…
A speeds up
B: Gah! Hey..
A: Stay quiet okay?
A speeds up, B puts a hand over his own mouth…
B’s eyes roll back
B CUMS
B: MMMmmph… !
Cum drips off the back of the seat in front of him
A: Damn bro…
Someone shoots them a dirty look
B: Fuck man you shoulda stopped… we’re gonna get in trouble…
A: Yeah… let’s get off at the next stop.
B: We’re too far from my place...
A: We could go to mine.
B: Uh. I…
A: We can have some more fun.
B: Uhhh…
The bus leaves and they’re off it
They leave the frame with the bus stop
Door opens into A’s room. It’s very dorm.
B: Are your roomates…
A: They don’t get back till late, they took those night classes.
B: Man that’s a bummer. I wanna get it all done early.
A: Same.
We got into A’s room and close the door.
A sits down on his bed. B is standing by the door.
A: What’s up?
B: This… this is super weird…
A: What do you mean?
B: You just… jerked me off. We’re like.. .friends?
A: Yeah, we’re friends.
B: I’ve known you since like middle school…
A: Yeah, we’ve been bros forever.
B: Normal people don’t do this with their friends…
A: Maybe not… I don’t think I’m normal though. I mean…
A: I’ve had a… crush on you for years.
B: Wh… what?!
A: Ah geeze… I thought like, haha, I’ll show him my dick and he’ll be like “gross dude put that away” but that uh… that didn’t happen.
B: Oh…
A: Um… I’m sorry I guess? I could have asked, you like uh… someone normal.
A: I feel like a creep. Also uh… man this is scary.
B: Scary?
A: I… like you dude. As a friend and uh… as more than that.
A: But I don’t wanna lose you… as a friend, if you don’t want more.
B: Fuck…
A: Yeah.
B: Now.. I feel like I made it weird.
A: Pff oh man. We’re a mess.
B: Ha… yeah.
A: Maybe it would be uh… LESS weird if we took our dicks out?
B: AHAHA
A: Haha…
B: Haha… well… let’s do it.
A: Really?
B: Let’s just… fucking do it.
B: If we regret it… we pretend it didn’t happen.
A: Okay.. snff
B: Are you crying?
A: No! Nope… emotionally secure. Ready to fuck.
B: Are we fucking?
A: Well let’s see where the night takes us huh?
A stands up and takes off his pants. His dick springs out, massive.
B: Were you hard while we had that talk?
A: What? I can be emotionally vulnerable and horny at the same time. I’m complicated.
B: You sure are…
A: If you want it… come get it.
B crosses the room. They’re standing facing each other. B reaches out and grabs A’s dick.
B: Fuck it’s big…
A: It’s all for you…
B: Wow…
He jerks it a little.
A: Take yours out.
B takes his pants off, his hard dick springing free.
Two hard dicks.
B: At least our dicks are honest…
A: It’s their first time meeting
A takes his hand and grabs both dicks, starts stroking them together
B: Ohhh
A: Oh fuck yeah bro
Stroke stroke stroke
B: Guhh… oh my god
A: Would you… suck me off?
B: Haa.. I’ll try…
A sits down on the bed. B goes down on his knees in front of him
A’s huge dick is eye level with B
B: Your dick looks so good…
A: Give it a taste. Might like it.
B gives it a little lick, then another. He finds the dollop of pre cum on top and puts his lips over it…
A: Ah bro that’s so good…
B: Yeah?
A: Mmhmm.
B: Fuck yeah…
B starts to suck properly, his lips going over the head.
A: Ahh..
He sucks for real, his head going up and down
B: (this… this is heaven…)
A puts his hands in B’s hair
A: That’s so good bro… fuuuck.. Keep going
Faster. Faster
B’s cock is twitching and leaking
A: Fuck!
B: (oh god..!)
A’s cock swells
A: I’m gonna, I’m gonna-
A CUMS in B’s mouth!
A: Auuuuugh fuck!
B (I’m gonna drown..)
A holds B’s head on his dick as he shoots, cum gushing down his throat and filling his mouth
A: Fuuuuck yeaaaahh
B’s cock cums, shooting onto A’s leg. B Pulls off the cock, coughing
B: hurk.. Blarg..
Cum drips out of B’s mouth down onto his shirt, near his still oozing dick
A: Did… did you cum too?
B gulps, swallowing some of the cum.
B: Blaaa… fuck. I guess I did…
A: And you swallowed…
B: You didn’t give me much choice…
A: Oh I’m sorry
B: No it uh… it was hot
A: It was really hot huh
B: Yeah…
A: Uh. Are we… still friends?
B: …yeah? Yeah I think so.
A: Cool.
B: Yeah.
A: Do you want… to do more?
B: …yeah.
A: Can I… fuck you?
B: With your dick that scares people off?
A: I was sort of half lying about that.
B: I figured.
B: Why do you think I bottom?
A: Well uh… that’s how I always pictured this going.
B: You… thought about me?
A: Yeah. Like… half the times when I jerk off.. I imagine you legs open, begging for my fat dick to push inside your tight little-
B: Okay! Okay I get the picture.
A: I’ll be really careful. I’ll do lots of prep. Eat you out and fingers and stuff.
B: Such a gentleman.
A smiles. B’s cock twitches.
B: Alright.. You can fuck me.
A’s cock twitches.
A: Hell yeah
A swiftly picks B up off the ground and plops him onto the bed
B: Woah!
A: Bottom’s up…
He lifts B’s legs up and comes face to face with B’s hole
B: f-fuck…
A starts licking, shoving his tounge in
B: Oh oh goood
A really gets in there. He comes up for air
A: Fuck man. Delicious.
He presses a finger against the hole… and slides it in
B: Fuuuuck
A presses in and out, then slips another finger inside
B: Oh god oh god
Then a third
B: Fuck!
A: There it is… that’s the spot.
He pushes against B’s prostate
B: Oh god Al, fuck…
A: There you go…
He’s almost fucking B with his hand
B: Aaaaahhh
A: We gotta get you relaxed… it’s gonna be a lot…
B: Oh man
A: Wow, you are so much more of a bottom than I hoped
B: Sh.. shut up…
A fuck with his hand faster
B: Gaaaahhh
A: That’s a good bottom… you fucking love that huh…
B’s dick is oozing
B: Fuck… feels incredible…
A pulls out his fingers. B’s hole is open
A: Okay… you’re nice and open now…
B: Nnn…
A: You look beautiful
B: Bro… that’s embarrassing…
A: I’m not hiding any feelings today man
He flops his dick on the hole
A: Today you’re gonna feel how I feel… inch by inch
B: Oh god…
He lines up his dick and presses into B’s hole
B: Oh fuck
A: Slowly… slowly..
Presses, presses…! Starting to slip inside
B: Oh god… I…
A: It’s okay… I’m not gonna hurt you
He grabs B’s dick and strokes it
A: I wanna make you feel so good
The dick presses in more, sliding past the opening
B: Uhhhh god! Oh god…
The dick is IN. A squirts a little more lube
A: Fucking hell you feel incredible…
B: F.. fuck…
A: I’ll let you get used to it… try clenching your hole…
B clenches. A’s dick flexes in response
B: Oh my god…
A: Fuck! You could milk me like that…
A’s dick slides in..
A: That’s it baby…
B: Aaah… ohhh..
B’s dick twitches in A’s hand
A: And… that’s all of it
B: Wuh…
A is up to the hilt inside B
B: Oh my god…
A: Fuck it feels good inside you
B: I… same but uh… you in mee… fuck
A: You’re so hard…
B: Fuck! Just.. do something…
A: Okay..
A slides out…
His dick pops out
B: Unf… holy shit
A pushes back in… and the whole thing slides right in
B: Holy fuck…!
A: Mhmmm damn Marky…
B: Ahhh. ahh… ahh..
A: Let’s do that again… faster…
A pulls almost all the way out… then shoves it back in with a SMACK
B: OH GOD
B’s dick oozes. He reaches for A…
B: Fuck! Al I need…
A moves forward and B pulls him hungrily into a kiss!
They start making out wildly
A keep pounding and pounding
B: Fwah… Al I’m gonna…!
A: Me too… cum for me!
B: Ohhh ohhh goddd…!
B shoots! His cum flying out over his body
A: Oh my god that’s so hot guhhhh
A shoot inside B! His cock pumps and pumps the cum into him
B: Ahhhh fuck… ahhh… ha…
They stare at each other, breathing hard, covered in cum
B raises a hand to A’s face, touching his cheek
B: …c’mere
A leans in and they kiss softly
A flops off B and they lay side by side on the bed
A moment
A: So uh… how was it?
B: I’m not gonna bullshit you man… that ruled.
A: Hell yeah.
B: That might be the best sex I’ve ever had…
A: I’m not your first?
B: Lol no. But you’re the one I like most.
A: Haa… I’m so glad. I can’t believe this is real…
B sits up.
A: So uh… are we still friends?
B: Well… no.
A: Huh?
B: We’re uh… boyfriends? I mean, if you wanna be…
A hugs B with his huge arms
A: Oh my god yes!
B: Haha. I mean, we’ve kind of been dating for years…
A: You have met my parents.
B: We just do all our usual stuff but with wild horny fucking in between I guess.
A: Lotta lost time to make up for.
B: Yeah…
B leans in for a kiss and they drop outta the frame
A: Lol we had our first kiss during anal sex
B: Please don’t tell people that