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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 58

The start of something new.

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Bro you can’t be making masterpieces like this web comic bro you can’t you drag people in with just the right tug at the heart string that makes us so invested in the characters that you just can’t help but route for Lynn and Lincoln to succeed and be happy can’t wait for the next page cause it may be the last but if we all know great stories never truly end

Torio Higgs

There will be a sixth, seventh, and maybe eighth chapter.

UnderratedHero

No season 6? Underrated hero?

Bayr Jawhlan

Termina esta historia pero ya y yo estoy estoy haciendo un comic crossover de the loud x nicktoons united las páginas estan la pestaña de comunidad de Mi canal de YouTube míralo si quieres te gustarán

Carlos Goncalves

I can't wait for the final two pages...

Justin Sigler

Oh please tell me ther is another chapter after this one

BRICE MORRIS

Awww

TendingHealer13

Finaly a glimmer of happynes for the two🥰. But I'm verry intruigt what the next page will be (they will probably get a happy kis in the sunset)

Fabinator

The next page will be the final page of chapter 5.

UnderratedHero

Well see

TendingHealer13

What's going to happen next I'm so excited how many pages before the next chapter

BRICE MORRIS

Lo descubriremos juntos

UnderratedHero

It's sad that it's ending, but it's necessary to turn the page (ha! pun intended) for the next chapter in the story to begin (ha ha! pun intended)

UnderratedHero

Of course. Even though their actions might have hurt Lynn and Lincoln, the family only wanted the best for these two. They love them, and their departure will haunt them —on different levels— for the rest of their lives.

UnderratedHero

Theirs will prove that wrong!

UnderratedHero

Yeah, like, Messi isn't super common, but there are a bunch of them in Argentina at least lol

UnderratedHero

I looked up what IDs looked like in Scotland and they had a bunch of UK stamps and stuff, too hard to draw, so I just included a text disclaimer at the bottom lol

UnderratedHero

Exactly because there’s no way with them leaving that they weren’t affected by it. It would and will. Despite knowing about their secret relationship, they still love them and therefore they’ll feel guilty for driving them away.

Paul Hoon

Saldrá en la historia la hija del pecado Lacy ?

José Ángel Romero Rosales

😂

TendingHealer13

Welcome to the world Messi and Laudhart

SoulTy

Could've said it better myself, Paul Hoon.

David Mullins

Right

TendingHealer13

Holy cow, all these small details are really well considered in this panel. I like it. I hope you'll not get in trouble about... giving realistic ideas like that. Now things get REALLY interesting. I still have great concerns that the next comic's first page took quite time to process since you're also writing the story at the back there. So I kinda feel sad that RTS-V about to end :L

Teoman D.

Sad..ima cry with this🥲🥲🥲🥲

TendingHealer13

Oh, they're still in Scotland? No kidding. I guess my geography still isn't that great. I saw "Valid in the UK" on their new IDs and automatically thought that was the case. Hahaha!

I.O. Penner

Not gonna, I bet the Loud family feels really shitty right now. Think about it, once the truth came out they didn’t look at them the same way ever again. Not as family or as human beings but as freaks and pariahs. The worst part is that Lincoln and Lynn are forever gone and they didn’t even get a chance to say goodbye or tell them that they love them. The last thing spoken between them is probably going to hang over them like shroud for a long time. Maybe even the rest of their lives. Lola must feel terrible for pushing Lincoln away, Lisa must feel awful for making Lincoln believe that she thinks he’s a molester. And the rest of the sisters probably feel bad about Lincoln overhearing them saying he’s delusional and Lynn wanted him as prize. Yeah they tried to talk some sense into them but man . . . it’s hard to tell the difference of which is worse: them dead or gone forever. If you told me some of the Loud sisters got so depressed that they couldn’t get out of bed for months, I’d believe you.

Paul Hoon

They said that love will usually last for four years, but they've been waiting for each other for their entire childhood.

DarkHammer

No es la vida que querían, pero es la vida que merecen

UnderratedHero

I'm not.

David Mullins

Good summary of the page

UnderratedHero

You'll get to read the letter eventually

UnderratedHero

What do you mean "where"? You just saw their town, building and apartment lmao

UnderratedHero

I hope no one here is lactose intolerant

UnderratedHero

Well, they're still in Scotland, on a small town a few hours away from Loch Loud, but yes to everything else you just said! It's crazy how far away their love has gotten them.

UnderratedHero

Yeah but her last name?

Corey Peters

We'll find out soon enough!

UnderratedHero

Ha...my calculations where kinda right

TendingHealer13

That's a wonderful description of what happened so far, and a hopeful view of the future

UnderratedHero

Let's hope it lasts!

UnderratedHero

Exactly. He'll get his +18 card in 2023 when he turns 18 (he's 15 right now).

UnderratedHero

You'd be surprised how many people are named after celebrities.

UnderratedHero

If there's a lesson to be learned in this story, this is probably it.

UnderratedHero

Surprise GOAT of the story

UnderratedHero

This is where their new life begins!

UnderratedHero

Sure

TendingHealer13

A new beginning for them

Thuren Miller

Maybe we’ll see a few scenes showing a sad Loud family, Lincoln and Lynn’s friends devastated and Lincoln and Lynn getting married?

SreznoJIG07

Me too <3

TendingHealer13

Facts

TendingHealer13

Lol

TendingHealer13

Yeah..bc it takes place in 2020 so to 2023 and lincoln is 16, so 16 +3=19

TendingHealer13

Me too

TendingHealer13

Yeahhh

TendingHealer13

Who knows

TendingHealer13

Yeqh lol

TendingHealer13

Hehe

TendingHealer13

Move..but where

TendingHealer13

Me too

TendingHealer13

Yeah

TendingHealer13

En efecto mi estimado

TendingHealer13

Bruh

TendingHealer13

Agreed 👍

David Mullins

They have each other and that’s all they need. 😎👍🏻 Bless Angus and his kind heart.

Paul Hoon

Maybe because of the age groups? Like his expires on his legal 18th birthday while hers just expires after such and such period of time.

Muze Clark

No matter how bad things get you can always count on documents forgery to make things better

Jose Hernandez

I honestly don't know. I haven't even seen enough clips from the episode. Edit: okay, I've seen more clips from the episode and yes, that cheese

Muze Clark

And 'ass' is in bold...

Moss1998

Also Lynn O'Neil Messi I know the people in the UK are dumb. But even they will see right through such an obvious fake. I know Lynn looks Football ⚽ but come on.

Corey Peters

You mean that cheese that backed up Lily and Leni's pipes that time?

David Mullins

Lincolns card says it expires in 2023 compared to Lynn's

Corey Peters

Yay! Peace, love, and happiness 😊!

Muze Clark

If the next two words are "Each Other", it would make them both cheesier than all the parmesan Lynn-Sr received the one time.

Muze Clark

It wasn't easy at first, but little by little, it got better for them. Now Lincoln and Lynn can finally begin their new happy lives as lovers in the UK. In the end, all the sacrifices they made were worth it just so they could be together. They can start going back to school and make new friends; later, they'll get good jobs, and soon, they'll get married and have kids. But one day they'll visit the family they left behind just so they can show them how happy they are.

CipherRage0909

I’m glad to see them settling down somewhere else, with a new place, new ID’s, starting a whole new life together 🥰 What’s going to happen next, I wander? 🤔

SreznoJIG07

From Canada, to Scotland, and now to the UK…it sure seems like Lincoln and Lynn have been all around the world by this point! I’m just happy to see Lincoln and Lynn got to have a week to make up for lost time and just relax. From the looks of Lela, she enjoyed their company, as well! Thank God Angus was there to help them plan their next moves accordingly—he definitely came through in the end. Although, I would’ve never suspected that Lincoln and Lynn would end up in the UK of all places. However, I’m just as eager to see how the two of them begin the next chapter of their new lives together! It’ll definitely be something to look forward to!

I.O. Penner

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic!... ( 1 Minute Later ) Well, like Lincoln said, they can't stay in Loch Loud for long. But, the good news is that at least they've finally got their names changed and new ID cards, not to mention moving to the City of Woodbury and got their own student apartment. Huh, I've always wondered what Lynn Jr and Lincoln have that made it all worth it. Can't wait to find out what on the last page of the comic. Until then... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Last Page Of The Comic Comes Out In Excitement ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )

David Mullins

It's happening. New identities. New lives. New place. I wonder e what they're going to do.

C.E. Zim93

Things are settled well! But I was expecting to see the context in the letter they left to their family here. Only 1 page left for that now.

Moss1998

The Dragon That Remembers Lynn & Lincoln Saying Goodbye To Angus Got New ID Card’s Move To City Of Woodsburg Got A Student Apartment For Them & Move On With They Own Life’s.

Silvester Rodriguez

Heh, ass proof

Dynames67

Una nueva vida para los 2 comienza ahora 👍👌

Juan Carlos Juarez


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