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Aak Daar, Dovah, Fent Zu'u? Niid. Ch. 23

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Bro is gonna solve the Targaryen crisis by marrying the whole family lmao

Gorgrath177

This mother fucker. Is… is he mantling? Has he been mantling this entire time? I know doom driven heroes from Tamriel and it’s metaphysics tend to be able to assume any role with ease and grow stronger in them at a fast pace, and a Dragonborn one alone is much more interconnects with the cosmological aspects in a unique way, but is he literally growing and weaving a mantle this entire time? Is… is he growing his divine dragon soul, shard of akatosh, based on the mass perception of everyone who knows of him? This strengthening it and the magic within/near him?

Maleficarum

The lace that launched a thousand conspiracies. Several variations of 'Have that man killed' are being whispered into the ears of assassins, spy masters, mercenaries and various other unscrupulous shitbags throughout that city. I suspect MC is going to have a number of very interesting evenings. Hopefully Pentos guy ends up face down in an alley somewhere.

Pope Yoda I

LoL that was a funny development, looking forward to see if Aerea is really "Like her mother" and will also pay a visit to Ysmir tent, that will be absolute cinema

s0ra

Finally goddamn

Luis Z

Lmao, Aera found a man to give her attention to immediately after she needed one to get away from that prince of Pentos, lucky she. Can't wait for the Rhaena reaction and confrontation, I really like her dynamic with Ysmir.

Soft Fantasy Enjoyer

I know she's a Targaryen Princess who can have some random knights head chopped off for looking at her wrong, not to mention she rides the scariest motherfucker in the setting, but there is still something amusing about the idea of the MC bullying her.

ApologeticCanadian

Yeah, there's things like this that I see a lot (even in the books) because I know little details on the etymology of various words and when they emerged in time. Despite that they show up in ASOIAF sometimes, and you just have to shrug and do the "there's a reason for it somewhere" rule sometimes. Pyrrhus must have been a fabulous Valyrian warrior -- after all, he has a Valyrian style name! Jokes aside, since this stood out to you, I'll change it. When you are in the document, you can always click and drag (for instance over the word "pyrrhic" in this case), and then right click that, and mouse down the dropdown until "comment" and leave a comment of this, and it emails it to me with the exact location I can just click and grab and change(though I've already fixed it now). For future corrections. You don't have to say that part over here! :) As far as the awkward look around, yeah, that's exactly it. If you've never had a moment in your life where someone (which you could see the entirety of their face) waved at you, and you had a momentary confusion of like, who is that, do I know them, maybe even waved back in confusion, only to realize they were waving at someone behind you, you've lived a miraculous life truly. That's a near universal experience, I feel like.

Procrastination

Lmao I wonder if anyone is gonna point out to Aerea that Ysmir was not actually talking to her. That reaction would be hilarious.

o0_JustDusty_0o

Awesome chapter, but unless William knows of King Pyrrhus' battle against the Romans, the "pyrrhic victory" quote shouldn't exist. But that final act with Aerea was absolutely hilarious! It also brought back memories of those awkward moments when someone gestures in your general vicinity and you do that awkward look around, lol.

Ao Black

Ysmir is learning the dangers of playing the pronoun game. I suppose this will be another language lesson he will need from Coryanne.

TAtro

Thanks for the chapter! Here comes the consequence of wearing a helmet at all times, such that it obscures your true gaze. It is absolutely hilarious that the little lady was certain he was eyeing her when Ysmir was only making eyes at her mother. Awkwarddddd. Let us hope he eventually finds his way back into her good graces! I shall pray for him.

Valkryia

Forgive me for I am a filthy shipper. Team YsmirxRhaena all the way. Though teenage Aerea having a crush on Ysmir is both hilarious, and no doubt deeply, deeply troubling to Rhaena. She's gonna be on a fucking warpath, and I can't even blame her with the context she has. Hopefully Ysmir finds fire-breathing momma dragons hot instead of insulting, and hopefully him admitting the favor was meant for her will cool some of her ire and convince her he's not after her daughter.

ApologeticCanadian


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