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Chapter 601 (Fixed)

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Cinder's on house arrest learning to be a magical girl.

Mustafa

Him singing Folsom Prison Blues is great.

Nicholas Frahm

Going to assume it's going to be like Canon and she gets killed by Cinder so will reincarnate her

Belly

I hope he brings in Sasaki just for an exhibition match. Prove that Sasaki is the best swordsman.

MKJ

You know, part of me is wondering what will happen when two events occur. The first is when the White Fang attacks Will for some stupid reason, and the second is when Jacques tries to threaten Will. Pyrra has a level of 9000. Thanks for the chapter.

savitar

Can't wait for the next part

:Dan the archer

WOOOO MORE RWBY! Honestly I just love the slow/medium pace we can take here. It always feels like a vacation and I love the reactions we get from the cast.

James

That assumes Pyrrha can bring out much of Will’s seriousness.

Sonata Fauns

Ooooo sasaki might come in and flex his swordsmanship to winter

Ravioli Stromboli

Pyrrha time!!

Raibeart TReiss

I can just imagine Winter and Weiss looking poleaxed to see their mom on a date or flirting with Wilhelm (bonus points if Salem, the literal Queen of the Grimm is there) lol

D

This is how you know a story is well written. We're 601 chapters in and it just gets better and better with the story still building on itself

D

Wow, this chapter just felt so nostalgic. ...Holy shit, this fic is now long enough that it has scenes that are nostalgic.

Silver W. King

Okay I sorta want will to save willow and she join the harem .. winter going crazy having an .."alleged" .. criminal as a step dad wld be so funny

krn

Swordman guy from the tournament, the one that has a 'danger sense' and could feel that Will was only playing around

Valkyen

Imma be honest Who the fuck is Rufus😭 It's been too long because I don't remember who that is

fireball77

Thanks for the chapter

Nazarickk

Now I really want Jeanne to meet Pyrrha. The 2 cinnamon rolls must meet

D

Man has taste

D

Winter's lucky all he did was break out a tin cup to sing his jailhouse blues, he could have taken out a harmonica and started playing too 🎶 😂

D

There's something about the RWBY sections, especially this chapter, that makes me really happy. I think it's because he gets to go hang around a bunch of friendly people without any of the baggage or social positions of his status elsewhere. He's just a weirdo friend of a friend that's strong

Einar Strandberg

I love cinnamon roll Pyrrha, but I'm kind of actually sad that that's not canon because that would be hilarious lol. I wonder if her yandere self would somehow join the harem? I could see it happening by her being jealous and violent until Artoria or one of the other girls showed her Invincible Girl is not the strongest in the pecking order and it's sharing or no Wilhelm at all

D

Blake is a princess and Weiss is an heiress, which is basically the same thing. They're basically a pair of Disney princesses lol

D

One of the guys at the tournament.

Zerak

Yay RWBY segment, always a nice treat.

Nisiris

Love it

Joshua Bradshaw

Who's Rufus? Thanks for the chapter.

Ototsu_Yume

Nice pyrrha bullying

oscar enrique sampedro lopez

The RWY of RWBY just got some prime teasing material against their kitty kat. Princess Blake indeed...

Genocidecles

Thank you for the great chapter, I enjoyed the Pyrrha bullying. Stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

Kz3838

I want to know what Yandere Pyrrha with the system Wilhelm rejected is up to, from that one Omake.

Green223

Huh, I guess Wilhelm did grow up a lot since he last visited RWBY world. Loved the jail song, very Wilhelm. Thanks for the chapter!

Scott

I like Blake being teased

giving33

At first, I read this and hoped he was bullying Maria hill and we were about to get a scene with Fury but I’ll take this.

Rake1810

Nice and fluffy, like Blake’s ears

Taylor Valentyne

Holy shit wilhelm is a Johnny cash fan?!?!?!? Goated

Mr. Cooki3s

Few differences in the world of Remnant I forgot about, but that just makes me want to re-read the story up to this point again so I'm not upset. Thanks for the chapter, always love some RWBY!

Eldr_Itch

Pyrrha is best girl from RWBY. I adore Ruby but the facts are facts

Orchamus

I fully support Wil just having sasaki just dip to seduce winter with his sword skills.

Bishop7053

“The store? Are you stupid?” God fucking damnit Wilhelm 😂😂😂 Winter is gonna be watching Wilhelm absolutely school Pyrrha, have him reaffirm that Sasaki kicks his ass in swordsmanship and suddenly not be so sure that Wil was saying empty words

thevolunteer

Depending on if its a somewhat public spar, seeing Will in action would definitley show Winter and Ironwood that he can do a lot worse if he felt like it and that he was basically sanbagging the whole tine

Nick Wen

Love it, feels kinda fillery but still good

Son-Of-Scorn

NICE

the gaming kids

👍

James

I really like Folsom prison blues

James

Nice

Joel Perez


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