Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Forty Nine
Added 2024-10-18 12:41:48 +0000 UTCWell, at least he doesn’t look like he’s about to keel over anymore, Piper thought as she followed her liege lord into his personal lab.
Indeed, after a shower and a nap, the young man seemed almost sheepish about the state he’d been in when he’d stumbled into her office.
Fortunately, for him, Piper was one of the few people whom he could have stumbled into that understood. Sure, his was definitely something of an extreme case, what with the crusted blood around his nose, but she herself was no stranger to pulling all-nighters while working on some new innovation.
So… she got it, even if she had little desire to see a repeat.
“Well, here we are,” William said as he turned to shut the heavy duty door to his lab closed behind them.
And while under different circumstances the dwarf might have considered it mildly scandalous to be locked into a room alone with an unmarried man, in this case that idea was about as far from her thoughts as a thing could be.
No, her attention was entirely on the sheets upon sheets of notes sprawled about on shelves and work surfaces or otherwise pinned to walls. Likewise, the boy’s tools were in little better condition, strewn about the floor like discarded play things.
Again, she’d seen worse. From senior alchemists and initiates alike. Which was why her gaze didn’t linger long there, instead pivoting up to the center of the room.
She recognized it as being made from parts the county’s workshops had spent the last two months working on instantly.
Only now they were assembled, forming an uneven circular shape. Which couldn’t have been a quick process given the evident complexity of the device.
How long did it take him to piece it together? She wondered – though not before wincing as her foot stepped into a small pool of some manner of viscous fluid.
A lubricant of some kind, given the way her foot had nearly slipped out from under her.
“Ah, sorry about that,” the boy said as he handed her a rag. “Had a bit of a spill in here the other night.”
“Quite fine,” Piper said honestly. “Stepping in strange fluids are something of an occupational hazard for an alchemist.”
Indeed, she was actually a little curious as to the makeup of the liquid she’d just stepped in and had to resist the urge to kneel down to inspect it. That could come later. For now, she kept her focus entirely on the… device in the center of the room.
And the parts connected to it.
Indeed, a small network of tubes and wires splayed out from the back of the machine, connecting to a vat and some other small trinkets.
It was an interesting sight. Not least of all because, while biology was hardly a main focus of hers, she had engaged in more than a few dissections in her time while seeking out greater insights into the alchemical processes behind the function of certain beasts.
To that end, she’d once had cause to remove a wyvern’s entire digestive tract, splaying it out on wire racks so that she might see how food traveled through the entire system. A display that ended up taking up an entire room at the time.
This reminded her of that.
The question now is, what kind of beast does this system belong to, she thought.
“Well, please do tell me if you see any start leaking out of this,” the boy said as he excitedly skipped over to one of the wire trinkets. “I’m pretty sure there aren’t any leaks in the lines I’ve set up, but you never know.”
He paused. “And suffice to say, a leak would probably be bad right about now.”
“The dangers of unknown leaking fluids are also something I’m quite familiar with as an alchemist,” Piper said. “I’ll be sure to keep you informed if I see anything… untoward.”
As he said, even if she didn’t know what she was looking at, she could at least be reasonably certain that stuff leaking out of it would be bad.
Grinning, the boy nodded before he flipped some kind of switch on the wire trinket he was holding and suddenly the close confines of the lab they were in was filled with the most unholy roar.
It seems my animal comparisons weren’t entirely off-base, she thought as she resisted the urge to cover her ears.
Hell, the ‘creature’ even breathed, as it belched forth a plume of black smoke. The origin of which she was quick to identify as the acrid smell pervaded her senses.
Earth-Blood. Burnt.
She thought she’d smelled it when she walked in, but the odor had been hidden under too many other chemical stenches to be easily identified. Now though, she knew. Whatever this device was, it burned earth-blood as a byproduct.
This was the more refined version. Not the base product. Her dwarvish sense of smell confirmed it.
Which made sense. It was barely a few weeks ago that he’d asked her to provide him with a variant of earth-blood that was ‘hardier’. Less prone to igniting as a result of pressure. Fortunately for her some research on that topic had already been conducted by the alchemists guild while attempting to create a kraken killing poison. An attempt they’d failed in, naturally. But at least they kept the recipe regardless – and in doing so had saved her from having to create a mixture from scratch.
‘Deep-Glow.’
A fairly uninspired name, but one that fit given that it, well, glowed. More importantly though, the creation of the substance wasn’t all that expensive; only truly requiring earth-blood, silver and the pulped remains of a species of deep sea bioluminescent worm.
The boy had requested they stockpile a vat of it in addition to the crude earth-blood and bear-blood they were already amassing. At the time, she’d not thought much of it. Just one more seemingly nonsensical request amongst a myriad he made daily.
Only now, as she watched with awe as the propellor that had been affixed to the front of the massive ‘disk’ start to spin with unnatural speed and power, did she realize that said request was perhaps less nonsensical than she’d thought.
For in her mind’s eye, she’d already replaced the tiny fan with the propellors of a shard.
“This is a mithril core,” she realized, uncaring of the notes that new blew wildly around her as a result of the machine’s backdraft. “An artificial mithril core.”
The holy grail of magic, stood right in front of her, inside a tiny little shed in the middle of some backwater county.
The boy – no, the man – hadn’t heard her words. Stone, she could barely hear herself over the roar of the rushing wind and growling of the artificial core.
But given the way he smiled, he clearly understood her amazement.
Flicking the switch in his hands again, the core’s growl cut faded to nothing near instantly, the spinning of the propellors losing their intensity as they too started to slow.
Piper almost protested.
She’d wanted to see more. To investigate. To see how it could possibly do what she was seeing.
Instead, she turned to her liege. “How?”
“Explosions.” His grin turned positively devilish. “Little ones, admittedly. Hell, more short-lived fires than anything else, but explosions all the same.”
“…Contained explosions?” she breathed. “Little ones? Using the Earth-Blood?”
“Yep.”
The idea boggled the mind. Moreso as she realized that said explosions had just been happening less than a meter from a container filled with the same substance that was supposedly being used as fuel for said explosions.
A substance prone to igniting when placed near an open flame. Or even just sparks. Of which an explosion produced both.
And her employer was stood right next to it.
As if it were normal.
“You’re harrowed,” the words slipped out of her before she could stop them, her tone colored by both horror and awe. “This… all of this. It’s too much. Too different. Too complete.”
“Ah,” he said, his features twisting into an expression of resigned yet wry amusement. “I assumed you’d figure it out once you saw this.”
He didn’t deny it, she noted. And how could he. This… system. It was too complex. Too complete. She’d seen the parts that made up this ‘fake core’ and even with all of them laid out before her she’d not been able to see the end result.
Because it was too much of a paradigm shift from what she knew. The idea of using earth-blood to create a… contained explosion...
Truth be told, she still had a little trouble envisioning it – even though the evidence of its efficacy had been twirling merrily away in front of her but moments ago.
…She wanted to understand though. More than anything. She’d dedicated her whole life to alchemy. Because she honestly believed it was alchemy, not enchanting or elementalism, that which would propel mortal-kind into a new golden age of innovation.
And here in front of her was evidence of such. A substance made from alchemy being used to power a fake core.
Provided to her, wholesale, by a madman that wasn’t mad.
She understood, in that moment, the mindset behind the mad magisters of the old imperium. Why they’d dragged common-born mages kicking and screaming into the divination chambers by their dozens. Why they rebuilt those same divination chambers over and over again each time one of those common mages asked the fae not what they’d been told to ask by those selfsame magisters, but how to make those that had consigned them to a fate worse than death suffer.
Piper had never had cause to see it, but word was that some of the locations that had once housed said buildings were as of yet unlivable to this day. Lifeless barren patches of land where nothing grew.
…Because despite knowing that, Piper still found herself tempted.
Because the answers to her every question were out there. They weren’t even far away. One only needed to dream. To ask. To make a deal.
And while William was no fae, given his harrowed nature he was the closest thing one might find to one on this plane of reality.
“To be fair though,” he continued. “I think we can both agree that I carry my burden with more grace than most?”
Piper just said, nothing. She just stared. At the – no, two – impossibilities that stood in front of her.
Because he wasn’t wrong. And she was interested, she’d admit. How he’d managed to retain his faculties where so many others hadn’t.
But the more she thought about it, the more she realized that was secondary to another question.
So it was, that she finally spoke. “I’ll swear a geass. Any geass. I’ll get my people to sign geass too. As binding as you like. All you have to do in return is tell me everything you know about Earth-Blood. And this ‘artificial core’ of yours.”
She was surprised, but not too surprised, to find she didn’t care about anything else.
What his plans were.
Why he’d kept this all a secret.
Why he was building so many ‘fake cores’.
What he intended to do with the many pilots she now realized he was training to fly his… alchemy-shards.
Those were passing worldly concerns. Politics and ambition. Transient things. She’d ignored them all her life.
Because they would ultimately be made moot with the flow of time. Queens and Empires faded and died. Knowledge though? The ideas used to facilitate those schemes? Well, that would last forever.
Still, transient or not, it was a little amusing to see a hint of surprise flit across her employer’s features at her words.
Then he laughed, a deep belly laugh that had almost had him keel over. Eventually though, he straightened, wiping a stray tear from his eye. “A woman after my own heart. And I’d be happy to tell you all I know - just as soon as you’ve sworn your geass.”
She nodded, even as she reached into her alchemy robes. “I’ve got a sleep drought with me. It should knock us out for an hour. We can take it now.”
Once more he paused, before his smile widened. “Yep, definitely after my own heart. Let me grab a blanket.”
It was amusing, the thought of ‘sleeping’ with a boy William’s age might have titillated her but a few minutes ago.
Now she didn’t give a fuck.
There were greater things at play here.
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“Depths, are you ok, boss?” Anya whispered quietly during a conversational lull.
Piper glanced blearily over at her second in command, turning her attention away from the ongoing argument occurring in her office.
“I’m fine, I promise,” she muttered, whispering just loud enough to be heard over the other department heads, but not so loud that they’d hear her. “Just… a late night.”
One she didn’t regret for a moment. Of course, given the bloodshot nature of her eyes and unkempt hair, she realized the irony of mentally chastising William for showing up in her office in a similar state barely a day ago.
How times change, she thought.
Because right now she didn’t much care how she looked. She’d strode into this meeting feeling like she was walking on air – though exhaust fumes might have been the more accurate descriptor.
Indeed, she was still feeling downright chipper as the department heads across from her, finally stopped muttering to each other and turned to her.
“So you’re saying the last two months were a giant waste of woman-hours and resources?” Annie Hearthland, Redwater’s lead mage-smith, muttered.
Piper made a so-so gesture. “Wasted is a strong word. I’d say that our workshops learned a lot from the experience. As did our lord in regards to one of his more ambitious projects.”
“A project we still don’t know the details of, or even the purpose of the components we were creating for it. Even though it’s now being shut down,” another woman complained.
“Downsized. Not shut down,” Piper corrected. “A number of workshops will continue making the same components they are right now.”
Predictably, there was more complaining at that, but Piper shut it down with a wave of her hands. Most of them were just putting on airs. It wasn’t like they’d not been paid for their time, even if the work they’d been doing was ‘pointless’. It wasn’t like this was the first time a noble had invested a ton of gold into something useless. The Bloatwater’s flying castle still served as a cautionary tale to a lot of Lindholm on the dangers of investing too hard in unproven concepts.
“Ok, then, what does the lord want to transition to next? I don’t know how much stock I put in it, but I’ve heard that music box is of mundane-make?”
Around the woman that had spoken, a few faces perked up with interest.
Interest she quickly punctured.
“I’m afraid not. Though I can confirm that said music box is indeed entirely mundane in its construction, it’s not actually our lord’s invention. Rather it was created by the family of a teammate. A teammate that has access to their own production facilities.”
A sigh seemed to ring out across the room.
“What then?”
She grinned. “Air frames. A new design certainly, but one that is still well within our skillsets.”
Instantly, the mood of the room turned downright jubilant. And why wouldn’t it? Shard creation was about as prestigious a task as a smith could work on, perhaps below only that of creating a new airship. And even then, it was debatable.
“Well, I don’t know how much he lost over the last two months, but I could see creating new airframes as a way of recouping it quickly enough. Crown’s buying up all the frames it can get. Quality don’t matter. Not saying we won’t be making quality.” Annie grinned. “Either way, it’ll be damn good to be working on something that actually makes sense again. Something simple, ya know?”
Piper’s own smile twitch a little as she thought of the new blueprints even now sitting in her desk drawer.
“Yeah, simple,” she said slowly.
Though even as the other smiths in the room started debating what design they’d now be working on – and the merits of each therein – the dwarf was thinking about how she was going to explain why they were building shards with everything except internal aether piping.
Or maneuvering thrusters.
Or even a proper reinforced housing for the core.
At least the hollow voids in the wings and front of the craft will look like it still has ballasts, she thought.
Sighing, she glanced out the window to where work teams were already clambering over the exterior of the Jellyfish – the great airship’s frame covered in scaffolding where the new ‘flat top’ landing runway was being installed. Likewise, she knew for a fact that inside the massive craft, the transport elevator was being expanded to be able to traverse three more decks.
Via the cutting of holes through said decks.
And the less said about the expansion of new ‘water tanks’ the better. Finding space for them had been a nightmare. And while, sure, the gun decks being removed meant there was more space aboard, that space had pretty much been immediately set aside as ‘marine berthing’ by William.
And while some of it might actually be used as berthing for crew of some descriptor, I have a pretty good idea as to what most of that extra space is really being set aside for, she thought. Given, you know, the lack of internal bulkheads.
She’d had her suspicions before, but now she knew for a fact that said space was being set aside as hangar space.
Still…
She winced at the slapdash nature of the whole thing. Then again, that was a pretty good descriptor for just about everything William Redwater did. The man had a bad habit of trying to make his projects run when they really needed to crawl.
Here’s hoping that doesn’t come back to bite us all in the ass, she thought.
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Olivia couldn’t help but feel some small amount of betrayal as the door to her room remained stubbornly closed. It had gone dark hours ago, and yet her brother had yet to visit her. Indeed, he’d probably returned to the academy by now.
Leaving her here. A prisoner in his estate.
Oh sure, her aunt and mother had tried to dress it up differently, but everyone knew the truth. Olivia was now out of the running for duchess – before she’d even had a chance to actually fight for it.
The question was, was it a result of her brother’s actions?
In a hurried tone as she’d been loaded into a shard, her mother had told her that the Queen was now aware of Olivia’s father and her upcoming nuptials, and that she’d be living on her brother’s estate for a while for her protection…
Protection she needed to avoid the Queen’s wrath.
Because Olivia was a threat to her rule.
She’d wanted to fly North. To hide with the Blackstone’s until she had the opportunity to sally forth to claim her birthright.
Her requests had been denied. First by her mother and then by her aunt on the flight over. She was going to her brother’s estate, where she’d be held as a hostage until such time that the Summerfield succession was decided.
…And it wasn’t fair.
Was this her brother’s revenge, for usurping his birthright was he now denying her access to her own?
It was an unworthy thought. Her brother loved her. She knew that. He didn’t care about the fact she’d displaced him as heir. Or if he did, he’d never once taken it out on her. He loved her.
And she loved him.
Yet still… some part of her whispered vile theories as to just how the Queen had found out about their conspiracy.
She’d told no one but him.
That had been part of the reason why she’d stormed out when they reunited, even though part of her had been happy to see him again after so long.
That damn niggling doubt of hers…
She pulled her knees to her chest as she sat on her bed, her nighty keeping her warm while the mage-light on her bedside continued to flicker brightly.
Why? Why would he do it, when all he needed to do was remain quiet and we both could have inherited-
Her thoughts were interrupted by the door to her room exploding off its hinges and a trio of masked figures in black bursting into the room.
She screamed, even as one of the figures rushed forward to shove a rag into her mouth. With quick practiced movements, the young half-elf was tied and gagged, before being thrown over one of the figure’s shoulders.
And then they were moving out into the hall.
Aunt! Aunt Karla, she thought, wondering where her protector was.
And then she saw her, collapsed in the hall – void, there was so much blood! It pooled around the mage-knight, staining her night clothes. The woman’s sword lay nearby, the blade still in its sheathe.
She was so still. Her eyes closed, as if she was only sleeping.
Aunt Karla!
Olivia screamed, though it was muffled by her gag as she was carried through the halls and out of sight of her murdered aunt.
The girl tried to struggle, bashing her bound hands and knees against her captor’s chest, but the woman barely seemed to feel it. Indeed, all Olivia achieved was abrading her knees and hands on the rough scale-like black materials of the woman’s cuirass.
So it was that with each passing step, she cried out, hoping that some of her brother’s guards might hear her.
Yet none came, no matter how she howled, and soon enough they were out into the night, her captors’ boots crunching against the gravel path as they ran. Bare moments later, they came to a stop up against what Olivia realized was a black carriage.
“Get her in. Gentle now,” one of the other black clad figures instructed with an accent that sounded oddly familiar. “Watch her head.”
Olivia could care less for the woman’s concern, glaring hatefully at the trio that had murdered a member of her family in cold blood, as she was shoved onto the seat of the carriage.
Then the door was slammed shut and Olivia was left alone in the dark.
A few moments passed, the silence broken only by the sound of her labored breathing and the sound of a whip being cracked outside as the carriage started to move.
Then a voice spoke.
“Hello Olivia, I think it’s time we had a chat.”
Comments
Sorry, quick editorial for you: Flicking the switch in his hands again, the core’s growl cut faded to nothing near instantly, the spinning of the propellors losing their intensity as they too started to slow. Would be clearer as: ...the core’s growl cut, fading to nothing near instantly... Back to reading for me, TYFTC!
Dan M
2024-11-04 06:23:33 +0000 UTCThen the child shoots first, before the discipline starts, or they shoot later once they recover. I still don't see how a fair proportion of mage parents survive their offspring. It is just as if children walked around with pistols that could not be taken away from them. This does not seem like a stable process. I am not arguing with your points about how the child's magic can not be restricted. I am just trying to figure out how most mage parents survive raising their offspring.
Trevayne
2024-10-29 09:24:29 +0000 UTCMages within the setting have the same weakness as mages do in DnD. Someone in their face ready to pounce can finish delivering a debilitating strike faster than they can finish a chant. For example, in the above disciplining scene? If William for any reason tried getting a spell off, Sophia would have shattered the cane on him (and probably a few of his bones in the process) before he could finish half his chant; Even with William's rather speed-efficient way of casting spells. Meaning that in any instance of corporal punishment, the ones doing the punishing are in a good position to non-lethally disable or knock-out the one getting punished. And chances are, should a child so much as attempt to do something like that, said child would wake up without a tongue in less forgiving households. Something that, in a cramped carriage is far more difficult. "My guess is magical education is controlled and focuses on the basics and non-lethal applications." Considering how conact and contracts with the fae work? Not possible. How do you lucid dream your way into your child's one-on-one with their patron and tell the fae, mercurial and fickle through and through, that absolutely no dangerous spells? You just can't. Evidenced by the fact that William Ashfield has already had contact and a contract with his patron by the ripe old age of 2. Which we know from the fact that by the age of 2, George was already around. "I would also guess that children can have their spell selections checked" Again, due to the way spells seem to work, this is in the most literal sense impossible. I'd remind you of William repurposing his spells from Stoneskin, Flashbang, Gun to Create Makeshift Dispoasable Radio. Meaning that there is absolutely no way to "check" what someone has. On top of that, trauma-boost is still a thing. Even if through some way it was possible to restrict a child to non-lethal spells, a trauma-boost can do the impossible. Getting kidnapped and getting questioned by some unknown entity is as good a reason as any for the fae to give a little extra oomf to an otherwise nonlethal spell.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-29 00:35:59 +0000 UTCGood point. Here is William being disciplined in chapter 1. "The strike across his back was instant, the pain that flared out from where the cane struck him easily a dozen times more painful than the slap that had preceded it. Yep, that’s definitely Aunt Sophina, he thought. The woman was the Ashfield House’s marshal - and was built accordingly. With that said, the strike upon his back could have been harder. He’d seen the woman in the training fields. He knew for a fact it could have been a lot harder. It certainly could also have been softer too though, he thought as he bit down on a grunt that tried to escape his lips, what felt like white fire dancing across his back. A lot softer." If a child using a lightning bolt was a real possibility, I doubt they would be as cavalier about corporal punishment. We know that William would not have killed his mother for beating him, but that is because he has an adult's mind working towards specific goals. What about all of those actual mage children out there? My guess is magical education is controlled and focuses on the basics and non-lethal applications. I would also guess that children can have their spell selections checked, or otherwise parenting becomes much more difficult.
Trevayne
2024-10-26 22:29:13 +0000 UTCBeta readers have it :D
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-26 22:13:17 +0000 UTCSo straight to democracy seems unnecessary and hard. The people don’t have the basis for it.
David Hall
2024-10-26 20:44:20 +0000 UTCSo, sometime tonight or tomorrow? Honestly, no complaints because this next chapter is probably what sets up the conflict for the rest of the book.
Andrew Lechner
2024-10-26 20:06:38 +0000 UTCSo far, I get the feeling that the magic system is not quite fully crystalized, at the full mechanical level. It mostly functions like magic in DnD, but so far, it has been jumping between Wizard spell slots (memorized spells at certain levels) and Sorcerer spells slots (certain level charges with all known spells available). As for how discipline goes, since we're talking about nobility here, we can take a guess from William's disciplining from the early chapters.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-26 18:26:02 +0000 UTCGuards, especially the invisible ones, can very quickly put an end to an assassin. The issue here specifically? That Olivia is a special VIP where her death would cause almost as many problems as the Queen's herself. And might cause more in the long term. Which complicates the prior math of running a would-be assassin through with a sharpened piece of steel. As for children's tantrums, a fist to the gut likely is a quick solution; Which is once again an issue here specifcally, as a carriage doesn't give many good angles for a decisively disabling strike. And when the people in question are two VVIPs? Not something any reasonable individual would gamble on.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-26 18:17:51 +0000 UTCI say we take off, nuke the whole planet from orbit. It's the only way to be sure.
Dancingrage
2024-10-26 16:32:56 +0000 UTCThe plebian pilots are a relatively obvious pro-democracy development but literally just about everything he does except actual spells like the flash bang is going to help. The thing is, the uneven nature of society is due to mages having abilities non-mages don't have. That said, every piece of technology introduced that allows people, mage or plebian, to do more things, improves the relative power of the non-mages. To misquote a well known saying "God made man, but it took William Redwater to make them nearly equal".
Trevayne
2024-10-26 16:01:44 +0000 UTCYour funny words please me author man
Admiralthrawnbar
2024-10-26 12:10:19 +0000 UTCMight be a happy side-effect, he has mentioned that at some point he is likely to be opposing the queen, most likely in a bid for Democracy so getting peasants to think about just how different the nobles actually are could be a way to slowly get that ball rolling
Admiralthrawnbar
2024-10-26 12:09:30 +0000 UTCWith his plebian pilots idea, do you think he might be setting up a Tuskegee Airmen situation without realizing it? Those first pilots are gonna become heroes in their own right to the peasantry.
DMR1
2024-10-26 12:04:14 +0000 UTC'What the fuck?' and 'The enemy of my enemy is also my enemy'.
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-26 01:45:39 +0000 UTCWill we get an idea as to what the chapter will be about? Is this more of a double feature?
Conrad34xdsa
2024-10-26 00:31:13 +0000 UTCWhy can't we do white phosphorus, fire!
Borisoff72
2024-10-25 21:19:44 +0000 UTCI agree the Queen's agents are mostly there to spy on and safeguard William. Yelena knows that William is a font of ideas and she wants to know about them. She is also worried about something happening to him and taking away her access to his talents and ideas. Given that, I would not be at all surprised if they followed him at a distance from home to school and back again.
Trevayne
2024-10-25 18:59:15 +0000 UTCAh as long as it is semi regular I am happy. And communication is key.
andreas
2024-10-25 16:18:59 +0000 UTCDamn it, so close to being on track.
Andrew Lechner
2024-10-25 13:13:46 +0000 UTCProbably Saturday this week.
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-24 23:47:51 +0000 UTCEhh, the Manhattan project was comedically resource expensive… bat bombs, on the other hand…
GoshDarnYouPlucium
2024-10-24 13:43:28 +0000 UTCSome might say he will start a Man-hunt-tan project.
Conrad34xdsa
2024-10-23 03:31:42 +0000 UTCGrammar: And her employer was stood right next to it.
Mark
2024-10-22 23:29:52 +0000 UTCThe Manhattan Project has begun.
Luke Payne
2024-10-22 14:42:23 +0000 UTCLadies and gentlemen, someone is about to die, for the crime of killing Williams favourite aunt and kidnapping his sister.
Luke Payne
2024-10-22 14:41:39 +0000 UTCThat’s where you run into the timeline questions: 1. How long did it take for the Ashfield’s to double check the legitimacy of the message, debate amongst the higher-ups, make a decision, make preparations, pack up and get Olivia to Redwater County? It says in the chapter that Aunt Karla denied the possibility of flying to Blackstone territory during the flight. In my opinion, that suggests that she and Janet obviously had talked about it as an option and ruled it out before making any moves. 2. How long was the delay between the conversation with the Ashfords and Olivia arriving in Redwater? It’s hard to pinpoint, but William is dragged to see the Queen in chapter 46, then he is doing flight training in chapter 47, and not back in his county until chapter 48. My best guess is at least 3 days to a week as I don’t believe they’d start a new subject for a single day and then give a weekend immediately. 3 to 7 days. Thats more reasonable to slip a letter by ship or messenger bird or whatever other mundane means you have to get out of crown territory to a Blackstones ally. Once the message is at a Blackstone Ally, they need only have a reasonable excuse to visit to exchange the message. And we know that trading takes places between the houses since William’s marriage to Tala was ostensibly based on cementing the terms of a “grain for steel” exchange.
Drew Monney
2024-10-22 13:38:59 +0000 UTCThe range issue still exists. The spy could get the message out of the palace, but how does it get to the Blackstones in time to take action unless the Blackstones have their own orb network separate from the crown"s network?
Trevayne
2024-10-22 12:57:39 +0000 UTC36 hours plus however long it took The Family to make the decision to leave and to make the arrangements. Assuming the Blackstones have spies of their own in Williams county considering they know he invented the Kraken Slayer and as such would keep tabs on him, the layout of the Kraken County Castle (say that three times fast), what he has been working on (at least visible), etc… They would have plenty of time to formulate a strategy in that time. Plus it’s not like they don’t have a pony express system in place to get information out quickly and discreetly. Plus, when William unveiled the Core and threw down the gauntlet for the duel. When Tala spoke to her Mother, only a relatively short time had passed a hour or two at most, her mother mentioned that her spy already informed her that the Queen was surprised by the announcement before their meeting. This suggests that they already knew about the situation with Williams sister possibly before the Queen did as she was engaged in meetings at the time. Plenty of time to order agents to report what they know about the county, develop a plan, assign agents for the task, devise an exit strategy, transport said agents and do any final preparations. Assuming, of course, the Blackstones didn’t create some sort of contingency to keep their Ace firmly in their sleeve if things got leaked to the palace. I think since William spoke to his mother on the orb net, there would be a chain of command that somewhere down the line a Blackstone spy was informed, (A certain secretary, perhaps). Where as, since the news broke via Royal palace guards to the Queen who might have a second line of communication set aside for security reasons and William using the same line thus the secret was maintained. If the Blackstones learned at the same time the Queen did, they would have scooped up Williams Sister immediately before the Queen could take action.
Conrad34xdsa
2024-10-22 03:43:39 +0000 UTCPossibly, although I think they are mostly just there to spy on William directly. I think there was mention of them returning to the palace once the school year started and William went back to the academy.
Conrad34xdsa
2024-10-22 03:22:10 +0000 UTCDoesn't the queen have invisible agents in the Redwater estate?
Gregory Sampson
2024-10-21 23:57:55 +0000 UTCThe Blackstones have helmet to helmet direct Orb communication, bypassing the Orb Network. Made by shaving full size orbs to be small enough that they’re concealable in their armor. Tala uses it in the match at the end of book One. The weakness being they can only link to one other orb at a time, besides other general orb weaknesses like range and only being useful while mana is supplied. But a spy in the palace with an undiscovered, concealed, two-way orb that’s connected to one outside the walls could feasibly send a message via someone outside the Palace.
Drew Monney
2024-10-21 21:17:40 +0000 UTCI think we agree to disagree and we will see in a few days, who was right. Assuming your interpretation is correct, assassinations should either be common or senior individuals like the Queen can never meet non-vetted people because assassinations are almost trivially easy. Just one mage with one lightning bolt, so no royal celebrations or formal occasions. For that matter, how do parents survive trying to raise their offspring? When your 12-year-old says "I hate you", now he can follow it up with a lightning bolt and kill the one he hates. He might deeply regret it five minutes later, but I don't think this setting has resurrection magic.
Trevayne
2024-10-21 20:31:42 +0000 UTCNo problem.
Trevayne
2024-10-21 20:25:24 +0000 UTCPossibly, but the Duchess of Summerfield doesn't seem to be doing much. The whole issue could have been avoided if she had just designated an heir. Granted, she might have figured that designating someone would have probably led to their assassination.
Trevayne
2024-10-21 20:24:12 +0000 UTCI agree with several parts of this, but it is incomplete. I fully agree the Queen would not do this for real so I agree with part 2. However, I could see the queen being involved with Wiliam in this attempt to scare his sister straight. Call this version option 3.5. Regarding option 1, I agree the Blackstones have a spy or spies in the palace. The problem the Blackstones have is fast communications. Unless they have their own network of communications crystals, they have to rely on the Royal system or use couriers. I expect they have to use couriers because individuals often sending messages to the Northern duchies would start to stand out and risk detection. While they might well have the information and the spec ops types to do this, I don't know if they can put together a plot like this fast enough. Especially since the whole thing comes down within 36 hours of Olivia's arrival at Redwater. The other issue with the Blackstones is why would they want to have a chat with Olivia. If it is them, they might say we are rescuing you from your half-brother and the Queen, but they probably wouldn't be trying to have a conversation.
Trevayne
2024-10-21 20:22:15 +0000 UTCI'm reasonably confident that the only one who gets to dictate what spells a mage has a contract for are the mage and their patron, with essentially no way to know what spells they have until after they start firing it off. In fact, considering the way William's fight against Tala went? I'm pretty sure that the only thing truly locked in are the elements of a spell, if that; Which is why William could use his charges to make a radio instead of using it to fire his gun and throw out a few Flashbangs, which were his original plans for them, before he decided that real-time long distance communication was worth more than their best shot being ready to unload his gun. That and the fact that trauma boosts are so unpredictable as to be one of the main reasons spells are not allowed on the Floats or the Skeleton. And sure, the Queen's guards could be around in the carriage as well; Does anyone know what Olivia's activation phrases are? How fast she can fling off a lethal bolt? Or even a nonlethal one? Like, say, flashbang, that just so happens to recieve a trauma boost big enough to blow both the target and half the countryside off the planet? It is, simply put, not a risk worth taking. No; If the Queen ever intends to play along in William's little scheme here, it will be after Olivia is properly cuffed and gagged with probably magic-suppressing stuff around to ensure that such eventualities do not come to pass. However, that goes against the "I think it’s time we had a chat" part. Which is why my money is on William being the one there, simply illustrating a point he intends to make. Also, you're ignoring one thing - Specifically that William is about to talk about cloak and dagger politics, not warfare. It does not matter if Olivia continues to disregard William as a military threat, because the lesson William wants to hammer home is that is doesn't matter how great your armies are, if someone can sneak into your room and slit your throat. And as he is illustrating, that is always a very real possibility. PS - There is one other faction that picks at my mind, though I'm not sold on them. The Solites. We know that they want to push the Blackstone rebellion along to get the whole reconquista they have planned going, and they happen to know enough to see Olivia as valuable, without necessarily understanding the genuine threat William poses. And to them, things being bloody and violent is just perfect. Though the entire "I think it’s time we had a chat" part also happens to not apply to them.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-21 19:41:50 +0000 UTCThey don't, strictly speaking, need Olivia. Sure, that has been their move for nearly a decade, if not more, precisely because Olivia was a secret trump card for them, something that would have turned a potentially bloody conflict into a fairly simple win and was, again, hidden. But now? The cat's out of the bag. The Queen knows that they tried to pull shenanigans. At this point, they could just as easily try with another Summerfield heir, even a known one to achieve much the same results Olivia would grant them.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-21 18:06:20 +0000 UTCIt was just a fun star trek reference, not a serious reply
Jacob
2024-10-21 17:15:21 +0000 UTCgood stuff
Marius Petrauskas
2024-10-21 06:40:42 +0000 UTCNow, there are a few possibilities for the twist at the end. Possibility one, the Blackstones are behind this. We know that there is a spy in the palace, therefore, we know that the black stones are able to learn that the queen is aware of Williams sister and how important she is, they would know that she would be flown to his county (even though William said, he was going to tell them to explicitly not fly in order to not get her killed by the Royal palace guards, continuity check Blue?) They would believe that the Ashford are pulling out of the agreement, this can not happen. They have skilled fighters capable of pulling off this type of raid. Williams sister recognized the accent, not the voice directly. This can be a hint to duchies having regional accents. As for those who question why they would take out the Aunt, she was clearly guarding the area and she was in her night clothes, which did not indicate that she was a house Ashford knight. If they knew, they might not care as they would be seen as traitors t until proven otherwise. Possibility two, House Royal This is the least likely option as murdering one of his Aunts and then kidnapping his sister would alienate William significantly. Possibly three, William. This is a very interesting method for William to scare straight his sister into keep taking all this seriously. I don’t know if he’s going to pull this type of extremity. If this is then his Aunt would also need to go along with this in order to keep the ruse going. Unknown 4th party As far as we know, there are no other spies in the palace and no one else outside of those already part of the conspiracy along with those part of the communication orb net work, and people inside the palace know about. They might be willing to pull such a stunt. If they believed they can get rid of a potential political rival. Williams importance and power is greatly understated to the general public. One of the Rival factions for the Summerfield Scuffle might take a swing if they think they can get away with it against a relatively new, inexperienced and untested house. So, will this be the prelude to personal war between Blackstone and Redwater?
Conrad34xdsa
2024-10-21 05:27:00 +0000 UTCAgain, I think you are overestimating the threat Olivia could pose. I doubt very much teenagers are allowed to walk around with contracted lightning bolts. It would be like OTL teenagers being allowed to walk around with drawn .44 magnums with only 1-2 chambers loaded. I think we can all agree that that would tend to lead to dead parents and/or siblings. For that matter, who says Olivia is alone with the voice? Rather than rely on a thrown knife, a Queen's guard sitting next to Olivia could easily just knock her out. Olivia thinks she is alone in the dark. The voice indicates that she isn't but it is a dark carriage and there could be a person next to her and three on the seat across from her. As for Olivia's assessment of her brother, his political and intrigue skills seem to be better than she thought. His military force, both in reality, and in her opinion is still nearly negliable. One cruiser/carrier is just not that much compared to a 36 ship Royal Navy and the 60-70 plus ships the Blackstones and New Havens possess. We know his military potential is about to grow significantly, especially if he can come up with good anti-airship weapons for his Corsairs. Olivia has no way to know that. From her perspective, he has invented the spellbolt, the flashbang, and the krakenslayer. The first increases the effectiveness of marine boarders, but will not turn a naval battle by itself. The second is an amusing trick that really works best at the academy. The third has the most potential, but so far it has just demonstrated its ability against krakens and not airships or other military targets.
Trevayne
2024-10-20 23:00:26 +0000 UTCYa know, we haven't seen anyone from the Summerfield duchy show any agency so far. They might be the dark horse pick for what's going on.
MaybeASquid
2024-10-20 15:46:28 +0000 UTCThat's not a statement on the actual cost of the materials - just their cost relative to 'normal' alchemy :D
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-20 12:59:10 +0000 UTCI wasn't talking about a lecture through the gramophone, but rather William going full Saw on Olivia using the darkness and something that even in the worst case scenarion would be a relatively minor loss for him. Granted, he could just as easily pull out a radio for that. Point being, the worst that could happen with the gramophone playing back some villanous monologue from William is a gramophone getting roasted. Meanwhile, with the Queen, the worst case scenario is Yelena having to decide if she dies as a favour to William or if she puts a knife in Olivia before she finishes whatever chant she got started on. The tinies chance of this happening makes putting her there a non-starter. On top of that, after the ruse is up and Olivia is informed that this was simply a harsh lesson, she'll very quickly start mathing out that William is a much bigger player on the scene than anyone has given him credit for so far. And Olivia's loyalty to the Crown is tenuous at best. Not to mention that she could accidentally reveal something about how much of a key piece William is on the board. So no; They have nothing to gain that some random schmuck pulled from the royal troops wouldn't also achieve, but risk giving up a lot, even in the best case. Also, no; It was not the siblings that almost lost the Queen the civil war. It was the Blackstones and Ashfields colluding in secret and the Royal spies not catching it in time that did that. The two siblings in question? Mostly just pawns for the two actual minds behind the scheming. Still, my gut feeling tells me that this is simply going to be William giving Olivia a practical demonstration of how simple it is for anyone to kidnap her, even if those people in question are complete amateours without any form of invisibility or the like. Then proceed to have a one-on-one talk in near complete secrecy where he can talk about the things he wants freely without risking an invisible royal guard overhearing him. Also, I just realized why you keep thinking that Olivia doesn't take William seriously. You misread the reason why Olivia dismissed William when she told him that the thing with the Blackstones is still on. At the time, William was a freshly titled count that didn't even have an airship. In a civil war where three duchies would go against the Royal Navy and maybe one actually loyal duchy? William was a non-factor. No ship to speak of and it's not like Olivia knows that if William REALLY wanted to he could jumpstart anime in two months flat. So from an outside perspective, William really was a non-factor in a military sense. But no; I'm reasonably certain that Olivia takes William seriously both as a person and as a political force, considering just how thoroughly and precisely he handled the Blackstone-Ashfield alliance. It's just that, at the time, William and Redwater county were not a military presence worth talking about.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-20 04:29:08 +0000 UTCI think it depends on how common the worms are and if they are found all over. I don't see anyone trying for worms near a known kraken nest, but if there is a reason away from them, why not? Although the real question is how deep do they mean by deep sea? I have no idea how they get anything from several thousand feet down. I expect to the locals the deep sea is anything over a hundred feet.
Trevayne
2024-10-20 04:11:11 +0000 UTCErr, how do bolts seal a fuel tank? They need a double-walled tank with something like foam rubber between the layers so that it expands into any new holes and seals them off.
Trevayne
2024-10-20 02:41:43 +0000 UTCDropping them out the bottom is how regular shards launch from their shard bays. They may still use that for the Corsairs, but they are going to need a flight deck to land. It is probably faster and easier to move shards from the hangars to the flight deck via an elevator than it is to get Corsairs positioned for launch in individual shard bays.
Trevayne
2024-10-20 02:36:40 +0000 UTCIt is well documented that you can easily measure how far into "mad scientist" territory a Redwater-county alchemist is by counting their fingers...or lack thereof
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:54:33 +0000 UTCObviously they use self-sealing stembolts
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:47:01 +0000 UTCThe twist is that Team 7's "spymaster/intel chief" is actually Olzenya
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:42:29 +0000 UTCBut he already has a reason to stay involved in this succession crisis that was mentioned: make sure whoever wins stays on the Queen's side against Blackstone and gain their allegiance for when he democratizes the monarchy later
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:30:00 +0000 UTCFrom the earlier chapters I think the plan for takeoff is "drop them out of the bottom of the airship"
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:21:15 +0000 UTCI’m thinking Queen too, with William possible given permission as he hasn’t visited his sister that I find suspicious. If she sees first hand how capable her agents are it’ll give Olivia second thoughts
MASC
2024-10-19 22:19:15 +0000 UTCI'm going with "Yes"
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:16:04 +0000 UTCMy money is that the voice is either the queen (for pure intimidation factor), William to make a point, or Tala
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:14:31 +0000 UTCI think that reasoning makes a lot of sense
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:11:55 +0000 UTCActually, it being the Blackstone's as a way to preserve their ability to get the Summerfield duchy makes perfect sense. They need Olivia to do that but that's doesn't mean they need her willing cooperation.
Jacob
2024-10-19 22:07:17 +0000 UTC"the creation of the substance wasn’t all that expensive; only truly requiring earth-blood, silver and the pulped remains of a species of deep sea bioluminescent worm." I would have guessed that any deep-sea sourced materials would be quite expensive given the existence of the friendly animals known as Krakens
Jacob
2024-10-19 21:22:31 +0000 UTCIt could be, but I think it would be more likely if it is later on. Right now, Olivia has only just arrived and I suspect nobody aside from the Ashfields, the Crown, the Blackstones, and William's people, know that Olivia is here. It is just too early for word to have spread out. That is another reason why I think this is a plot by William ( probably with the Crown's involvement) to get Olivia to understand the dangers of her situation.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 20:37:08 +0000 UTCMaybe by the family of the other party (not the twins) that still have claims to the duchy. Maybe Olivia will be used to force a bethroval between their heir and William?
Jason Dortch
2024-10-19 19:20:15 +0000 UTCGood point. Most medieval societies had religion as a major element, but I don't recall any significant religious mentions in this story. The society seems like a mix with medieval/renaissance feudalism, technology ranging from sailing ships to flying ships, and magic. The impression I get is that they have some kind of deism, like the US founding fathers, but it doesn't seem to be that strict. Maybe the elves of the empire were agnostic and depressed religious sentiment?
Trevayne
2024-10-19 18:37:50 +0000 UTCJust thought of another question to that. Back in medieval times, royal family was belived to br God's chosen. Is that similar here?
O
2024-10-19 18:02:29 +0000 UTCA separate question, related to the Iast one, what is the literacy rate in Lindholm? We know it is a feudal society that has had some magic tech added so it resembles an odd cross between the 14th and 19th centuries. However, how has that affected education? AFIAK most people in the Medieval period were illiterate. Most people in the 19th century could at least manage the basics of reading and writing. This is important, because if William wants to try to move Lindholm towards democracy, it will be very difficult with a mostly illiterate population. He is more likely to get something like the French Revolution rather than the American Revolution. Ideally, I think he would want a peaceful transition because all the damage Lindholm inflicts on itself makes it that much easier for the Solites or Lunites to take over.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 15:02:11 +0000 UTCInteresting political thought, is the Queen completely opposed to democracy? We think she is, because what near absolute monarch wants to reduce her power? That said, she opposes slavery be cause it is wasting the potential of Lindholm's population. All the orc slaves working in the fields that could contribute far more as mage-smiths or mage-knights are the obvious examples. William could point out that the aristocracy has a vested interest in keeping the people below them in their place and the society could use a boost to its social mobility that would make it stronger. A constitutional monarchy resembling Georgian England would keep Yelena effectively in charge, but would also get the rest of society more involved.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 14:53:12 +0000 UTCMaybe, but I doubt it. There just hasn't been that much time to arrange it. We don't know just how far into the semester this is but it probably isn't more than a month. Also, if this was just to kidnap her, why talk to her this early in the process. They just got her out of the manor house and into a carriage. As for motivation, William knows he hasn't stopped the civil war just delayed it a few years. He has the same motivation, ending slavery, that he has always had. Granted, he may also want to install democracy, but I am pretty sure ending slavery comes first.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 14:43:12 +0000 UTCPossible, but doubtful. Somebody wanted to talk to Olivia. To me that makes it more likely that this is a fake done to scare her and get her to realize that Lindholmian politics is not an abstract game but something that can and will get people killed. As for not using the Queen's invisible agents, why reveal that secret to Olivia? Also, apparently unstoppable figures in black are scarier. If necessary, they can always reveal the capability later, by having agents appear next to her.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 14:36:24 +0000 UTCA thought occurred to me: It was not unheard of for an ambitious party to go to war "on the behalf" of a child with some kind of birth right before, maybe that's what they plan now. I assumed this probably wasn't the Blackstones because they killed Aunt Karla which would turn Olivia against them, and they would need her cooperation to seize the Dutchy. However, if they can hold a shotgun wedding and then hide her away they might just roll up to the succession crisis without her and say "Oh yeah we're totally here on behalf of Olivia Ashfield, she's on her honeymoon and couldn't make it, surrender or die." Loyalists would call bullshit, but short of jumpstarting the Civil War what could you do about it? I think a lot of people would see through it, but if you already supported the rebels why not pretend to believe it? I imagine its a small fraction of fence sitters who would be pushed into the Queen's camp by the move. Also they were masked figures in black. There could be an explanation as to why the Queen's women weren't invisible, but its a mark against that theory.
22junk
2024-10-19 12:48:39 +0000 UTCWe might need a poll of which faction we believe it is.
MASC
2024-10-19 09:54:02 +0000 UTCThe other option is that its the Blackstones with how badly they are getting dicked by the Ashfields/Redwaters. Now they have come to collect her and keep her hostage until she can legally marry. Forcing William to his own marriage,and fight his former fiancée. I could be wrong as Blue is equal parts entertaining and unpredictable. Now to wait for next Friday.
Gjim
2024-10-19 09:39:26 +0000 UTCRemind me, did the F4U have the same torque issues as the F8F Bearcat?
JackPlague
2024-10-19 09:28:02 +0000 UTCFrom a writer's point of view, I think the kidnapping is real. Things have been going too good for William, he needs a plot reason to be invested in the succession crisis.
Oreo-belt25
2024-10-19 07:00:28 +0000 UTCI think the kidnapping is real. Perhaps by the blackstones or one of the mainland nations. See, things have been going too good for William. He needs some motivation to be invested in the succession crisis.
Oreo-belt25
2024-10-19 06:55:58 +0000 UTCA discussion on this chapter mentioned that the Queen would not meet with Olivia because she might cast a lightning bolt and kill Yelena. While unlikely, it would be an unacceptable risk. My question is how early does magical training begin, and at what age can children cast lethal spells? In other words, when do mages get to run around with the equivalent of a loaded .44 magnum in their pockets. Granted, it may only have 1-2 loaded chambers, but that is still more than enough to kill somebody. My guess is mages are not taught lethal spells until they are known to be responsible with them. In general at least 15-16. It is different from giving a child a rifle in OTL. The parent can ensure it is only used with supervision and can keep it locked up when they can't supervise. Any mage who has been taught lightning bolt or has figured it out on their own can always be carrying at least one use of lightning bolt. They might have more than one depending on their spell slot capacity. Just how do parents discipline mage children?
Trevayne
2024-10-19 06:52:26 +0000 UTCYou are assuming that his aunt is actually dead. If this was a scheme by William to scare his sister into realizing that things have gotten real and people will die because of their mother's political choices, he enlisted Karla and she was playing dead with lots of fake blood.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 06:39:59 +0000 UTCGood point and takeoff is gonna be super easy with an elevated platform they just need to roll off the deck and dive. Only problem i can think of is he'll still need an arrestor wire.
CrabbyCranberry
2024-10-19 06:29:24 +0000 UTCIt may be, but honestly, I doubt it. Playing around with his sister's life, not to mention ending his aunts, seem to be a bit beyond the pale, even for William.
Kaywye
2024-10-19 05:28:48 +0000 UTCI just hope Aunt Karla isn’t dead. If it’s a fake kidnapping to scare Olivia the line ‘She was so still. Her eyes closed, as if she was only sleeping.’ referring to Karla could mean she is actually sleeping having been knocked out or just playing dead for the act. Plus getting fake blood to cover her in to fake her death would have Olivia consider the safety of her family regarding her claim as she is acting selfish and bratty.
MASC
2024-10-19 05:04:45 +0000 UTCHe didn't know that before he was harrowed. He did, or at least knew how to find the info afterwards. The harrowing brought George's memories and a boost. I suspect he has to use the dream sequences just to retrieve the information he needs, but the information arrived when he did. He probably can't consciously access all of it because that too would drive him nuts.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 04:13:45 +0000 UTCI am pretty sure a gramophone lecture doesn't count as a conversation and William doing it by himself would just be seen as a really sick practical joke on his sister. He needs someone outside his own county to impress on her that this is absolutely serious. While I doubt Olivia poses any real threat, the Queen could use a representative if she was worried. As for this being "stupid sibling stuff", these stupid siblings nearly ended the Queen's rule by causing her to lose the civil war before it even started.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 02:08:24 +0000 UTCHe is going to get more than 8 because he is gutting the interior for a bigger hangar deck. He he is also putting on a flight deck on top so his Corsair can land.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 01:36:13 +0000 UTCVery powerful engine, very fast (given the sorts of speeds we’ve heard shards can do, this thing is about 20-50% faster, depending on which model William’s making) and pretty tough. Climbs well, handles speed well, and can handle carrier landings (though it’s not easy, and if William doesn’t know how to land on a carrier that’ll be an obstacle)
Jake the L
2024-10-19 01:19:51 +0000 UTCI agree with that but it also had visibility issues due to the long nose which kept it out of USN carrier use for most of the war. There were reasons why the F6F Hellcat was the main USN carrier fighter during the later part of the war.
Trevayne
2024-10-19 01:11:11 +0000 UTC6 .50 cals in the wings, 2000 horsepower engine, very fast top speed, gains speed very quickly in a dive and has a good roll rate... Not the best turn fighter though which means it should be used to dive upon an enemy and climb away using the speed it gained before they can be shot in return, subsequently setting up the enemy for their wingmate to dive upon as well.
Skonnchy
2024-10-18 23:49:48 +0000 UTCWell, Piper is celibate cause she doesn't give William a fuck 🤣.How amazed will she be, if William will share with her something REALLY precious: scientific instrumentation and scientific procedures to make design and discoveries in BOTH physics, alchemy and magics? That might be arguably more precious than alien harrowed khowledge: something produced locally, more efficient and having reduced unforeseen consequences/effects.
Vlad Cold
2024-10-18 23:37:31 +0000 UTCPiper had never had cause to see it, but word was that some of the locations that had once housed said buildings were as of yet unlivable to this day. Lifeless barren patches of land where nothing grew. Radioactive? Or just contaminated?
Borisoff72
2024-10-18 23:31:26 +0000 UTCThere are actually 5 possibilities: The Queen (unlikely), the Blackstones (a strong possibilty), New Haven (unlikely, they'd just have the Blackstones do it), the Solutes (outside chance), Lunites (same). If nothing else that makes the Queen unlikely, the Queen might try to do it without killing Aunt Karla.
Borisoff72
2024-10-18 23:15:53 +0000 UTCF4U-4 Corsair? I honestly thought he'd build a mustang, spitfire, or wildcat if he was going carrier based. Good choice though. Folded wings means he might be able to fit 6 on his carrier instead of the 4 its supposed to hold if i remember right. Edit: Honestly looking it up those wings fold really tight he might even be able to get 8 if he's really modeling the whole thing after the Corsair even more if he's expanding hanger space.
CrabbyCranberry
2024-10-18 23:14:39 +0000 UTCLightning bolt in the general direction of the voice is enough I think. And even a small chance of a hit landing is too great to expose Yelena to it. No, she is way too valuable to risk on something that can be summed up as "stupid sibling stuff". It also tips the hand of the Royalist faction that William is far more important than they have spent the last 9 months showing. And since they have no guarantees that Olivia will remain completely silent on the matter, that's just pointless risk-taking. On the off-chance that the person in the carriage IS Queen-facing, it will either be one of the royal guard or Griffith; And the more I'm thinking on the matter, the more likely it being a member of the guard is. Relatively disposable, yet immediately recognizable as part of the Royalists. Though I'm still leaning towards it being William alone there. Actually, he has a gramophone. Nothing stops him from putting a distorted voice on a record and simply have it play to a gagged Olivia as an empty carriage drags her around on a little trip. Only to, at the very end have William's (up to that point distorted voice) drop the act, have the carriage stop and Karla and William taking her off the carriage, the former laughing at her baffled face and the latter going full "what have we learned today" on her.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 22:15:55 +0000 UTC“Well, please do tell me if you see any start leaking out of this,” phrasing. "leaking start" or "anything start leaking" or something would be better.
Morpheus
2024-10-18 21:48:40 +0000 UTCFor a second I forgot what you had said it was he was making and thought he had made radar which would be equally impactful of an invention lol
Lanze
2024-10-18 20:35:07 +0000 UTCI think it is the Queen and William trying to get Olivia to understand that this is serious. I doubt the Queen would do this without William's agreement and I really doubt she would kill William's people.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 20:04:46 +0000 UTCWasn’t there a Lunite/Solite ambassadress who left the capital for very urgent news?
Szulczyn
2024-10-18 20:02:03 +0000 UTCbut George wouldn't know every nut and bolt of an engine, or every word on wiki page, or any of the other extreme detail of his harrows
COR
2024-10-18 19:56:26 +0000 UTCI was assuming it's a fan for cooling the engine, which wouldn't produce enough unidirectional airflow to produce thrust, just enough to keep the cooling apparatus operating. Vibration, certainly a thing.
Jonathan Gibbons
2024-10-18 19:44:25 +0000 UTCI'm not actually sure if the notion is that he's harrowing over again, or if he's just using the dream-state to organize the information he's _already_ harrowed as part of downloading all the things George knew and extra background information on everything he had encountered already.
Jonathan Gibbons
2024-10-18 19:36:18 +0000 UTCAlright for all the geeks out there, I need help. While I know the bare bones about the corsair, it's not enough. Give me info
O
2024-10-18 19:29:10 +0000 UTCTrue. Second guess would be the queen wanting to prove a point. Queens agents seem to act in groups of threes per earlier chapters. And if the queen is about to show Olivia that she and her agents can go invisible, that would be good insintive, to who is still a child, not to mess with the crown. Something that failed with William due to him having his own strengths and counter.
JR9364
2024-10-18 19:28:03 +0000 UTCI don't think he is repeatedly harrowing. I thought his dream sessions were just how he accesses all the information he has access to. I expect the reason he functions as well as he does is that the arrival of his memories effectively erased the toddler William Ashfield so there wasn't an ongoing clash between the mind of a normal person and the alien memories and concepts.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 19:26:54 +0000 UTCI already got caught with the name
O
2024-10-18 19:24:41 +0000 UTCPossible, but pretty doubtful. The last we saw of Tala was serving on a Blackstone airship. I think she does want revenge, but is willing to let it be served cold. Also, how does she get the information to pull this off? I doubt her mother is still letting her direct Blackstone spies.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 19:23:01 +0000 UTCAgreed, and that should be one of his County's responsibilities. I doubt he has time to be his own spymaster, but he should certainly talk to Xela about it. Piper probably doesn't have anyone with those skills, but she might know people or groups that do. The best choice would probably be the Queen, but he certainly doesn't want his intel chief to have divided loyalties. Maybe he could ask Yelena for a security trainer to improve his own people?
Trevayne
2024-10-18 19:21:02 +0000 UTCHuh, up till now I had thought that his harrowing again and again for earth knowledge was "safe" due to him being able to use the context of George be super specific in what he was asking for preventing overloads. But it just now occurred to me that this alone wouldn't be enough, as other harrowers have surely asked for their rivals specific secrets on stuff that already exists. So I theorize that another reason he can "carry my burden with more grace than most" is that not being able to ever forget harrowed knowledge gives him a baseline of 90 years of memories that cannot be drowned out by any new harrowing he does.
COR
2024-10-18 19:17:33 +0000 UTCAssuming of course that it wasn't his idea in the first place.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 19:16:51 +0000 UTCI disagree. I don't see Olivia being able to get off a spell unless it is a fireball directed at herself and I doubt she is suicidal. All the point-target spells we have seen are visually targeted and she only hears a voice. She is tied and bound in a dark carriage. Given that most of the spells are voice-activated, it is not clear that she can cast anything, unless she specifically prepared herself to do so that day. It could be William, but that is unlikely because Olivia would know his voice and it is a clumsy cliffhanger that relies on specifically restricting obvious information. If it is Yelena, Olivia certainly would not recognize her voice.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 19:15:54 +0000 UTCHe usually just copies from the designs in his head, but I imagine this time he’ll be inventing new torture methods just for them.
Moonlightwind
2024-10-18 19:15:04 +0000 UTCJesus. I refuse to speculate on the identity of the group that kidnapped Olivia. I will say however, that if William ever finds out who it is, he will dedicate a significant amount of time, effort and brainpower to making the entire faction regret any plans that they've ever had.
Kaywye
2024-10-18 18:27:44 +0000 UTCWilliam should think about developing some sort of intelligence network for situations like this or for planning for any possible preemptive strikes or enemy capabilities
Brandon
2024-10-18 18:23:30 +0000 UTCMy gut says Tala has gone rouge for her own personal revenge on William.
JR9364
2024-10-18 18:20:50 +0000 UTCWhile there is some merit to that, the Queen would absolutely not show up herself for this; And anyone other than William would be at risk of Olivia finding a way to fling off a spell which would have fatal results, either for Olivia or for the "interrogator"; Which is a risk too great for a casual lesson. William however would be enough of a shock factor to flabbergast her into not making rational moves until well after William is done getting his point accross.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 18:01:18 +0000 UTC"Though even as the other smiths in the room started debating what design they’d now be working on – and the merits of each therein – the dwarf was thinking about how she was going to explain why they were building shards with everything except internal aether piping. Or maneuvering thrusters. Or even a proper reinforced housing for the core. At least the hollow voids in the wings and front of the craft will look like it still has ballasts, she thought." This part leads to an interesting thought. Piper and William need to decide quickly who is getting a geas and how this is going to work. Unless they are all geased to William, the ones who are not are going to quickly see that these shard frames have major differences from normal frames. I wonder how much those components add to the frame's weight and if they can get repurposed? For example, a shard without aetherlines and thrusters would be very odd, but maybe they can use the aether lines as fuel lines and just replace the thrusters with fairings during final assembly. The hollow "ballast" voids are presumably going to be fuel tanks, although it will be interesting to see how they can be made self-sealing. Aviation fuel is flammable and incendiaries are common normal weapons for airship and shard combat.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 17:29:19 +0000 UTCThanks for the explanation. I am really looking forward to the twins seeing a Corsair (or just the engine) for the first time. William had better ensure they are not alone or they will jump him then and there.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 17:18:05 +0000 UTCAgreed, but it could be both. William and the Queen could be colluding on this. I agree the Queen would not want to harm Olivia for the listed reasons, but colluding with William to scare Olivia would not be harming her and it would happen with William's knowledge and consent. William's problem is that anything he tells Olivia about the perils of her situation will be discounted by Olivia because he is her older brother. She is too familiar with him. On the other hand, having the Queen provide an informal audience in the carriage and explain just how and why it would be convenient for Yelena if Olivia turned up dead might well convince her. At the same time, she can tell Olivia that she has no intention of harming her if she stays out of the Blackstone's clutches.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 17:15:48 +0000 UTCFully agree that Piper is becoming the mad scientist she was meant to be. It will be interesting to see if her ideals have spread to the Alchemists Guild under he leadership. I just have this image from a few centuries in the future. A tour group in the capital hears "Now we are passing Lindholm's Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency, which traces its lineage back to the Alchemist's Guild led by Guildmaster Piper, the original mad scientists inspired by their idol, the legendary William Redwater."
Trevayne
2024-10-18 17:05:01 +0000 UTCIt's the weekend. William doesn't need to maintain the same pace as the first year so weekends are actually free. The others are visiting their own family (Bonnlyn and Verity) or practicing at the academy (Marline and Olzenya). With that said, I suppose I can go back and slip in a single line to that effect.
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-18 17:01:27 +0000 UTCI'm thinking much the same; Though my mind almost immediately jumped to William messing with his sister to give her the scare she sorely needs. The Queen already is careful when stepping around William and she absolutely would not want to give him a reason to stop favouring her. And kidnapping his sister and killing his aunt would go a long way to do just that. Because, while having Olivia as a hostage would very much secure his loyalty for the immediate future, she already has that; The issue is that having her as a hostage would ensure that William would betray her at the first opportune moment, which with their current alliance is far from certain. Meanwhile, the Blackstones risk too much by kidnapping Olivia. Not to mention, in this case, the Blackstones have time on their side. It will take another 3 years at minimum before Olivia is of marriable age, which means that for the time being, they can take their sweet time planning out any extraction attempts of her; And that's assuming that they don't simply go after another candidate instead. William, however, has every incentive to spook his sister. All we know of Karla was that a panicked Olivia saw a lot of blood and her slumped over. Which is far from a reliable statement that she's dead; Just as likely to be her playing along to teach the little bloodthirsty warmonger an abjkect lesson in politics.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 16:56:57 +0000 UTCOh hoho, now this is an amazing chapter. Someone finally definitively knowing he’s harrowed, and what appears to be a kidnapping of Olivia. I’m glad to see William finally letting some people in on things, though I’m now worried that Piper may become an enabler to see all the cool new shit his harrowed brain can make. As for Olivia, I’m curious to see how it turns out. The blackstones and the queen are the obvious options, but it doesn’t quite fit with what we know. It’s too damn risky for both those parties for various reasons. The queen because she has no motive to do it because it’d damage her reputation with other loyal houses and royally piss of William. Blackstones can’t do it because it’d also contribute to alienating their allies and be damn risky thanks to to how deep William’s territory is supposed to be in Royal territory, plus given that the Ashfields and the Blackstones were allies until recently I doubt that they’d kill Karla, or at least do it without trying to talk to her first. I am torn on the idea of it being a ruse by William to get through to her. I can definitely see him pulling something *like* this, he is admittedly pretty dramatic after all, but I’d expect it after at least a token attempt to talk some sense into her. Either way, I am very eager to see how next chapter goes.
Bookwyrm
2024-10-18 16:39:50 +0000 UTCThinking about it, another interesting question about this chapter and the immediately previous ones is just when are they happening? Chapter 43 showed they were back at the Academy and really busy, as this quote shows: "The team had been back at the Academy for all of two days and in that time they’d been thoroughly disabused of the notion that they were ‘ready’ for the frantic routine that so characterized the first few weeks of any given year." I assume William has gone back to Redwater over a weekend break or are we already at the mid-year break? Does Blickland have any shorter, week-long breaks during the semesters? Did he bring any of team 7 with him, or are they all at the academy?
Trevayne
2024-10-18 15:56:28 +0000 UTCA few moments passed, the silence broken only by the sound of her labored breathing and the sound of a whip being cracked outside as the carriage started to move. Then a voice spoke. “Hello Olivia, I think it’s time we had a chat.” This part is one of the things that makes it look less likely as a conventional kidnapping. Who would want to have a talk with Olivia and be willing to travel that close to William's lab? I could see the Queen or Duchess Blackstone wanting to have a talk with Olivia, but of the two of them, I don't see Blackstone as willing to go that far into opposition territory. Especially since Tala is still Blackstone's heir.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 15:49:54 +0000 UTCIf it isn't secured firmly to a heavy test stand, it is going to start moving, fan or no fan. Even a vastly less powerful household fan will move if it is not secured to an object or has a heavy base. A Pratt&Whitney R-2800 Double Wasp weighs about a ton and produces a minimum of 1,800 horsepower. If it is not firmly secured, it is going to move. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pratt_%26_Whitney_R-2800_Double_Wasp
Trevayne
2024-10-18 15:40:59 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed Piper's reaction ti the reveal. Need more of that; locals wowed by boomsticks.
Oreo-belt25
2024-10-18 15:30:08 +0000 UTCWell, I was certainly caught off-guard by that sudden dramatic ending! Although, I can't help but wonder if there's more to this kidnapping than initially seems... Remember, Blue is quite willing and able to throw curveballs at us... On the plus side, though, Piper is now a big step closer to becoming the mad scientist she was clearly born to be! 😂
Baron Von Mott
2024-10-18 15:29:11 +0000 UTCI think the kidnapping is the Blackstones. Also, the engine was hooked up to a fan, not a propellor. It's possible it was little more than a shaft spinning crazy fast
Oreo-belt25
2024-10-18 15:28:33 +0000 UTCGood update and like everybody I am curious about the kidnapping. As an additional possibility, I wonder if it is the Queen and William working together to scare Olivia into realizing that the politics are real. On a separate note, I think Piper should have been wondering about why the stand the device was mounted on looked so strong. A Corsair's engine puts out 2,000 horsepower. If it it started and not in an aircraft or very securely mounted to a heavy test stand, it is going to start moving. At a minimum, that will tear the fuel lines and start a fire. Another interesting question is whether this was the first time it was started. If this was the first time, that was more evidence that William is pushing his luck. You never conduct the first use of any new invention in front of outside witnesses. On the other hand, if this wasn't the first time it was started, that suggests that William has figured out how to do insanely good soundproofing. Those engines are really loud and everybody would be wondering just what was going on in that lab, even if they had no idea why.
Trevayne
2024-10-18 15:19:20 +0000 UTCAh. I had thought it was perhaps going a bit too well. To quote another franchise: “Good men don’t need rules and today is not a good day to find out why I have so many.”
Sea Wolf
2024-10-18 15:10:43 +0000 UTCI'm guessing Solite to take her to Blackstone to keep the whole game on.
Dancingrage
2024-10-18 15:00:18 +0000 UTCTala is still busy spending her years of exile. And it's far more likely that we'll see a bunch of orks and a traitor Blackstone show up to William's doorstep in a submarine asking for assistance, trying to "manipulate" him against the Blackstones than Tala herself. In fact, that will likely be the event that signals Tala's return. On the flip side, William should not be discounted as him trying to teach Olivia a lesson in a roundabout way.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 14:54:07 +0000 UTC"My Sister or Both Your Capitals?" *assuming it was the Solites and Lunites*
MarakEvans
2024-10-18 14:51:56 +0000 UTCTHE DRAMA!!!
MarakEvans
2024-10-18 14:50:43 +0000 UTCOh man,I liked Karla. I do wonder who took her. The most obvious would be the Blackstone's, although for what purpose? Do they still want to use her to be a Duchess? If so, killing Karla was not the best move. Which leaves the using her as a hostage against William. Maybe using her as leverage so he turns on the queen. Fuck, all a bummer. Here's to hoping William invents nuclear weaponry. Because someone is going to need it.
SmallTownBo
2024-10-18 14:42:19 +0000 UTCSomebody is about to have their entire family lineage OBLITERATED.
Jairo Enrique Quevedo
2024-10-18 14:35:28 +0000 UTCGod I can’t stand the cliff hangers!!! I need to know what happens!!!
Hunter
2024-10-18 14:35:03 +0000 UTCWell someone just made a very poor life choice.
Oneofmanynames385
2024-10-18 14:34:39 +0000 UTCThe Queen is hardly a fool. She would not want a lucid harrowed capable of mounting the entirety of the mundane population against her as an enemy; She didn't want that when she learned of his 300+ meter ranged guns, she definitely didn't want it after finding out that he can build bombs that flatlined the "fucking Al'Hundra" and she absolutely would not want that mind arrayed against her over something as mundane as "exrta security". Their cooperation against the Blackstones, while important to William is not so precious to him that he wouldn't turn the Royal palace into a royal pain in the ass to clean up if Yelena kidnapped his sister. The Blackstones, while likely able to play with invisibility themselves, would likely not risk tipping their hand in such an obvious manner. Because if they kidnapped a sister sent to foster with her brother, right in the heart of the Queen's territory, that would pop things off in ways they can't predict properly. Because kidnapping the guests of a count? So blatantly? That might get a few North-leaning counties to start leaning South all of a sudden. And while the Blackstones are definitely formidable, they are not SO formidable as to be able to tackle the entirety of the counrty on their own. And such blatant moves would turn a lot of their nominal allies against them. Well, that and the fact that the Blackstones would not open with “Hello Olivia, I think it’s time we had a chat.”. The Blackstones and Olivia have been keeping in contact in several ways for quite some time. However, I adore how most people discount the most likely candidate here. Who? I'd have thought it obvious. William, of course. He has every incentive to rattle his bloodthirsty little gremlin of a sister. It explains why his guards are not around. It explains why he "forgot" about their talk that night. And let's not beat around the bush... William is a drama queen (well, "drama king"). Playing things up well beyond what they had to be played up to. Him pulling a false flag on his sister just to make her understand how deep of a mess she was in, all while able to have a nice chat with her in complete privacy? To the point of being able to share with her details like ""I had to trade the Kraken Killer's design to the Queen just to make sure she doesn't have a knife in your back by the end of the day she found out about it. You little shit. That was expensive."" and the like. You know... The kind of talk you can only share with your most loved sibling. And maybe take her on a flight in his new Corsair just to make it up to her; And make her realize that maybe, just maybe, William would have had the means to stick it to the two duchies after all. As for Karla, telling her "listen, Olivia needs a bit of a wake-up call here. She needs to understand how narrowly she dodged that knife. So I know you like this shirt, but please put the fake blood on" would probably get her in on the whole thing in no small part because the look on Olivias face as she clambers in to the carriage after a while would be hilarious. Well, that and maybe letting her try out his new shard design. And the fact that I don't think BFC would kill Karla off just like that. Not in his style.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 14:34:22 +0000 UTCOh, I’d love to see the self righteous asshole elves kingdom leveled by Williams forces as he gives a death stare at the black stones across the way who are also trying to “retrieve” his sister.
Hunter
2024-10-18 14:33:41 +0000 UTC!
MarakEvans
2024-10-18 14:25:26 +0000 UTCI’m sure this won’t end poorly for anyone.
Alex Woll
2024-10-18 14:23:40 +0000 UTCI highly doubt the queen would want to have someone talk to her. Blackstone seems more likely. Tala is out for william after all.
Morpheus
2024-10-18 14:00:44 +0000 UTCAgreed on it being Tala, although William will probably first storm into the Queen’s offices demanding she return Olivia… then things get spicy when they both realize what happened
ZBTmaniac
2024-10-18 13:54:03 +0000 UTCWhispering to Karla to put the fake blood on and sprawl out before putting on some black masks, obviously.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 13:45:08 +0000 UTCMy gut feeling tells me it's William pulling a little stunt to rattle his sister to sense. Remind her that she got herself balls deep in cloak and dagger shit and maybe, just maybe she should realize that she put herself quite deep in harms way. And why his moves were more than necessary. Though if it's the Blackstones, I'm expecting an irradiated duchy within the month.
Lurkemancer
2024-10-18 13:44:30 +0000 UTCThe moment William hears what happened, "The Only Thing They Fear is You" starts playing.
Carlos Torres
2024-10-18 13:36:18 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2024-10-18 13:32:05 +0000 UTCWell, I think we know what the final fight in this book will be about. He's already on the warpath, he's already most of the way through the same sort of battlecruiser -> carrier conversion Lexington and Saratoga went through, now all he needs it enough napalm to make the firebombing of Tokyo look like a fucking joke and whoever kidnapped his sister is going to regret being born
Admiralthrawnbar
2024-10-18 13:29:05 +0000 UTCHuh.. them cliffs...
werotan
2024-10-18 13:25:15 +0000 UTCWell seems like the war with the Blackstones or New Haven is kicking off early
MaybeASquid
2024-10-18 13:24:31 +0000 UTCI wouldn’t discount the Queen. You’d think the Queen’s security would be tighter around William’s estate than the Blackstones could manage, and she understands better than them the importance of William Redwater. The last time they spoke, William openly defied her then rubbed her face in it. Not to mention William didn’t do his normal aether check when he revealed that he’s harrowed. If an invisible guard was listening that could be the final straw to push the queen into seizing control.
22junk
2024-10-18 13:13:15 +0000 UTCoO. Either the queen or blackstone... Both is bad. Always with these cliffhangers! (Even if I know that ... you know ... they work ...)
andreas
2024-10-18 13:09:11 +0000 UTCArrghhhh... The cliffhanger is killing me! Betting time! Blackstones or the queen?! I bet it's Tala!
Loganlee20
2024-10-18 13:04:26 +0000 UTCI think it's the Blackstones. The queen... I think the queen would just inform William that she desired an audience with his sister and that would be that. All this cloak and dagger shit is unnecessary for the queen
Nicholas Roberts
2024-10-18 13:02:13 +0000 UTCWhere the hell were William's guards?
Hikaraka
2024-10-18 13:01:08 +0000 UTCThere's no chance this was the queen right? Having a hostage would keep both the house in line and keep William subservient, but at the same time she must know how dangerous this is. This has to be misdirection. Either way seeing the aftermath is going to be fun. His aunt was murdered and his sister was kidnapped under his protection. He won't just feel guilty and angry, it'll also ruffle feathers with his mother.
MockingBird
2024-10-18 12:59:43 +0000 UTCOh fuck. Someone is about to die messily
Found&Lost
2024-10-18 12:56:30 +0000 UTCIt's a stupid name, but I love it :D
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-18 12:56:09 +0000 UTCI think if my work is eighty percent cliffhanger by weight :D
Blue Fishcake
2024-10-18 12:55:25 +0000 UTCSo? Queen or discarded fiance? Edit: wait,third option. Solites?
nemo1986
2024-10-18 12:54:16 +0000 UTCSo, is it the Royals that are talking to Olivia, or have the Blackstones come by for a chat? More cliffhangers, shame. Good chapter.
Andrew Lechner
2024-10-18 12:53:03 +0000 UTCMaybe I should disable email notifications for Patreon, "Sexy Steampunk Babes" as a subject line isn't going to be fun to explain
Admiralthrawnbar
2024-10-18 12:43:36 +0000 UTCWoooob woooob! A nice Friday afternoon surprise!
andreas
2024-10-18 12:42:41 +0000 UTC