It's that time again.
Added 2024-12-14 10:59:06 +0000 UTCRewrite time. I figure I'm allowed one per book.
Specifically, I finished the chapter, sat back, looked at it, and it's... fine, but I don't love it. For a few reasons, some of which which are plot related.
More to the point, I've got a much better idea.
So I'm writing the chapter again. Even if it's killing me inside because I was kind of hoping to have this book finished by early to mid January - hence why I'm not taking my normal two week Christmas break - and this is likely going to push that back a week or so. Plus, you know, it's always fun throwing away a few days worth of work.
The question is, ya'll want me to post up the old version even though it's... well, a dud.
Comments
Take a break, see you in the new year. Enjoy your blistering hot chrimmas
Sid The Bear
2024-12-16 21:25:19 +0000 UTCbro, take your break, enjoy your christmas
Dankenobi1
2024-12-14 23:05:28 +0000 UTCIt's a shame, but stuff happens. As the US bizarro band Primus has as the title of their 'greatest hits' album, "They can't all be zingers..."
Dancingrage
2024-12-14 20:21:53 +0000 UTCNon canon chapters are powerful!
SteelWings
2024-12-14 18:31:05 +0000 UTCReaders: "Good, Blue. Kill it. KILL IT NOW." Chapter: "If you strike me down, I shall become more powerful than you can possibly imagine."
MarakEvans
2024-12-14 16:46:04 +0000 UTCI will not read non canon event. I like to keep myself imerged in stories and it breaks the flow. But some seems to enjoy this so...
Julien Fellegara
2024-12-14 16:35:02 +0000 UTCIt's good, but I think you can draw it out more.
Keenan Acosta
2024-12-14 16:24:53 +0000 UTCThese retconned chapters are kind of fun. Like the games that have a short bit of dialog after a Game Over. "Snake? Snaaaake!"
David Ellis
2024-12-14 15:49:18 +0000 UTCNah, nothing spoilerific.
Blue Fishcake
2024-12-14 12:30:09 +0000 UTCI’d like to read your rejects eventually, but could you advise on when it won’t contain spoilers? If it’s just a rewrite of the same plot I’ll wait until the next official chapter is out but if it contains elements you’re saving for months down the line I don’t want to read it till then. Also, at risk of sounding like a broken record, quality over speed.
22junk
2024-12-14 11:58:25 +0000 UTCBut then how will we force our money down your metaphorical Throat?
lord vauthry
2024-12-14 11:55:57 +0000 UTCThat's why I said 'reasonable". You deserve a fair amount of downtime considering the sheer amount of work you put in to give us weekly chapters. Take all the time you need. I, for one, will wait however long it takes.
Kaywye
2024-12-14 11:42:56 +0000 UTCIt will, though I am planning on taking a few weeks off between books to recharge my writing batteries. I figure I've earned it. I'll just switch off Patreon for that month.
Blue Fishcake
2024-12-14 11:41:01 +0000 UTCI also would love to read your misses and compare to what you are satisfied with. The end of this book is that close? Well I'd be panicking right now if I didn't believe in my heart that book three will follow in a reasonable amount of time. Lol
Kaywye
2024-12-14 11:39:38 +0000 UTCI would love to see what you think is a dud, and then compare it to the "actual" chapter when that comes out, so please post it anyway
Bas van Lissum
2024-12-14 11:18:58 +0000 UTCLove to see it, but put forward what you're happy with
justin
2024-12-14 11:17:57 +0000 UTCFrom everything I've seen, your "fine" is better than many people's "good"! I'm happy just to get more content. But don't you go working yourself to the bone on our account! Take the time your need! 👍
Baron Von Mott
2024-12-14 11:08:37 +0000 UTCEarly to mid January? One week is nothing. Do what you think is right.
Knockout
2024-12-14 11:06:16 +0000 UTCAnd for context meaning as long as you are good.. don't feel like you need to burden yourself for us. I feel pretty confident saying that as long as you were feeling healthy and are in a good place, we are more than happy for anything
Christopher Manoff
2024-12-14 11:04:30 +0000 UTCHey, as long as you keep yourself good, and are happy with what you feel like you want to give us.. I'm more than happy to receive whatever you want to give us :-)
Christopher Manoff
2024-12-14 11:03:49 +0000 UTCSo long as publishing the old version doesn't have any adverse effects on the rewrite I'm all good! Dont take it too hard wordsmith, we need you alive as long as possible!
PalindromeJoe
2024-12-14 11:01:19 +0000 UTCContent is content, Brexit is Breakfast
Marsharbour
2024-12-14 11:00:35 +0000 UTCId love to see it. its like looking behind the scenes
Ido Pazi
2024-12-14 11:00:24 +0000 UTC
