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Sexy Steampunk Babes: Chapter Fifty Nine

Marinna grinned fiercely, her flight goggles reflecting the flames below as she banked her airship over the smoldering wreckage of an enemy vessel. The ship in question was still afloat, even as it burned, the mithril core within still performing its function. Though it was only a matter of time until the aether ballasts or pipes within burst, at which point the blazing inferno would drop down to the city below, further adding to the confusion and fires already present.

The veteran pilot had seen such scenes before, but they never lost their grim majesty. She wasn’t driven by cruelty, not really, but by the satisfaction of flawless execution. Every maneuver, every shot from her aether-cannons, had culminated in this night’s grim symphony of destruction.

She took a deep breath, savoring the acrid scent of scorched metal and coal-tainted air as her gloved fingers danced over the brass controls of her craft as she changed course again, swooping over the bow of the ‘undership’ she was escorting.

It was an ugly beast. All-patchwork welds and hasty mage-smithing. So much so that it was hard to believe that it and others like it had been responsible for tonight’s victory.

She wasn’t alone in her initial skepticism about the Underships. The very concept of descending beneath the ocean’s surface in an airship – practically kraken bait - had felt like tempting fate.

And as for emerging at sea level, directly into a live combat zone?

The tactical disadvantages were glaring.

Altitude was life after all  - every shard pilot and airship captain knew that. Whether you soared across the skies in a nimble fighter craft or commanded the bulk of an airship, altitude was both your sanctuary and your weapon.

A fact she’d spent the last two hours driving home to any colonial beatnick that was foolish enough to try and tangle with her sisters in the sky. After clearing up the initial fleet launches in short order, she and her colleagues had turned on any foe that dared to launch from the beleaguered airfields that dotted the city’s outskirts – reducing them to shrapnel within moments before sending their mangled remains tumbling back to the ground in showers of sparks and aether.

It had been a slaughter – and not because the enemy pilots were entirely incompetent. What few had managed to survive long enough to engage in something that might have been called a fight by the charitable had been decent enough.

At least half-life standards, she thought as she glanced over at a small chip in her craft’s paint where one of those craft had in fact managed to clip her with a fire-bolt before being savaged by Marinna’s wingmate.

Now, either the enemy were out of shards, or they were biding their time for reinforcements. It mattered little either way. Marinna and the fleet would be long gone by the time the latter showed up.  Already, she could see figures descending from airships hovering over both the ‘palace’ and the ‘academy’.

Dark Elf Stormtroopers. Elites who would make short work of any enemy opposition and swiftly claim whatever it was they’d traveled all this way for.

Though what that objective was, Marinna couldn’t say - and didn’t particularly care. It wasn’t her concern. Her mission was simple; keep the skies clear for the commandos’ insertion and extraction. Yet as she hovered at altitude, watching streaks of vibrant spellfire whip out from the palace grounds at the descending mage-commandos, frustration gnawed at her at her inability to perform her role to the fullest.

“Wing Two still not resupplied yet?” she muttered under her breath.

Casting a glance toward The Merciful, its massive bulk cutting an imposing silhouette against the star-dappled night sky, she clicked her tongue irritably at the ongoing presence of the “Maintain Operations” lights above her launch bay.

By all appearances, the enemy had exhausted their flight assets, but Marinna knew better than to assume the skies were hers. The Lunite Empire hadn’t thrived for centuries by embracing complacency. Fleet doctrine demanded unbroken aerial coverage, with shards cycling back to their carriers for resupply in carefully calculated shifts.

Any lapse in cover, no matter how brief, was a risk the Empire wasn’t willing to take.

Unfortunately, that left her hovering here with guns that were near empty after the last two hours spent savaging enemy shards, which meant she couldn’t afford to waste any striking ground assets until she’d been resupplied, lest she end up being caught without ammo against a real threat.

“Probably Ahmada and her damned Firebolt,” she muttered.

The Firebolt, damn thing was a hangar prince, its once-proud legacy as a frontline shard reduced to that of a second-line burden. Sure, its bolt-cannons packed a punch, but their feed mechanisms jammed often enough to be a nightmare in protracted battles or even while resupplying.

Ahmada swore by it, claiming its quirks were manageable, but Marinna suspected the woman loved the shard more for its rarity than its reliability – given the interest it tended to generate from young men with an above average interest in shards.

She paused, her muttering cut short by a distant sound.

A low, ominous droning, barely audible against the sound of cannon fire and the rushing wind. Her eyes narrowed as she scanned the murky skies, searching for any sign of a new threat. The fires below offered some visibility, their flickering glow casting long, dancing shadows across the fractured cityscape, but little beyond that. The world beyond the city limits was filled with little more than darkness.

Worse still, she knew the flames below meant that the fleet and her own shard would be all too visible for an outside force looming in the darkness. Unfortunately, she couldn’t risk repositioning to the outskirts of the city to take advantage of that self-same darkness. Abandoning her current post would leave the ships offloading commandos below dangerously exposed.

And still, as her thoughts raced, the droning grew louder.

Something was closing in.

Marinna’s pulse quickened, her grip tightening on the controls ever further. She wasn’t unwomaned by the unknown, but her nerves stood on a razor’s edge, ready for anything.

Unbidden, a memory surfaced. As a child, she’d once thrown a rock at a wasp’s nest, spurred on by a mix of bravado and a desperate desire to impress a watching servant boy as much as her friends with her ‘bravery’. Unfortunately for her younger self, the rock struck true. However, instead of the admiration of her friends and the attention of a cute boy for her bravado, she earned for herself a swarm of ticker-nats.

Fortunately, they’d been near a lake at the time, and as such, she, the boy, her friends, and a number of her mother’s dinner guests for that particular outing, managed to escape said swarm by leaping into a nearby lake.

Naturally, her mother had been rather unimpressed with the whole ordeal.

With that said, as great as the punishment after had been, she never forgot the sound of all those insects bearing down on her. The terror as they swarmed about her like a singular living being.

The sound of that enraged swarm? It had been a lot like this.

She shook her head, ignoring the way the hairs on the back of her neck raised as the droning swelled, the low hum turning into a layered, resonant thrum that set her teeth on edge. It wasn’t just sound now - it was vibration, a palpable pulse in the air, rattling her shard’s cockpit.

Glancing over at her wingmates, she was relieved to see that she wasn’t alone in noticing the oncoming threat – whatever it was.

‘Climb’ the raised flag on her squadron leader’s shard indicated.

“Thank the Fae,” Marinna muttered, her voice low and tight.

Sure, they’d be leaving the commandos a little more exposed, but they’d also be better positioned to engage whatever it was that was making that noise.

She adjusted the shard’s altitude slightly, her stomach sinking slightly as the craft entered an incline. Her eyes flicked to the skies overhead, but no threat presented itself just yet. Merely the clouds and the stars beyond.

“Wait, is that-”

Then it happened.

From the skies above, she had but a moment to see it as something flashes and nearly a dozen peculiarly shaped shards illuminated themselves against the darkness as their wing mounted guns flung hot death at the enemy below them.

Enemies that included her.

“Fuck,” she barely had time to hiss, yanking hard on the controls, but it was too late.

She watched, the world seemingly coming to a half for just a moment, as one of those lines of fire lanced towards her – and then the air was filled with the shriek of tearing metal as a rapid staccato of bangs erupted all around her, vibrating through the frame. Each one sent brutal shocks through the elf and her and the controls as the world tilted violently.

Controls aren’t responding, she thought as she wrestled with the now limp control stick. I need to-

Something slammed into her chest, a brutal, numbing force that stole the air from her lungs. She gasped, her fingers scrabbling weakly at her harness as her vision blurred. She was dimly aware of the world spinning, but it all seemed so distant now, muffled by the roaring in her ears.

And then… nothing.

Darkness claimed her, swift and merciless.

 

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This new variant of the Corsair was a beast, and Xela was barely holding it together. It was absurdly fast, almost like it wanted to break free of her control, and the guns - stone, the guns- were something else entirely. The first time she squeezed the trigger, the violent kick from them had rattled her entire frame, sending a jolt of adrenaline through her.

They were loud. Louder than even this new false core.

She continued to hold down the trigger though, watching as a streak of tracers tore through the night, cutting a blazing line straight into the target she’d been aiming for – silhouetted against the city behind it. The enemy craft buckled under the assault as it spun out of control, aether bleeding from it as it tumbled toward the city below.

There were no attempts by it to stabilize as it tumbled. No signs of an ejection either.

Xela blinked, her breathing heavy in the tight confines of the cockpit. It seemed she’d just gotten the first ‘kill’ of the engagement in more ways than once.

Around her, the rest of the twenty-shard formation had not been idle, filling the sky with blazing lines of tracer fire as they picked their own targets from the formation below. To Xela’s eyes, it was as if the heavens themselves had opened up to unleash fury upon the enemy fleet, caught off guard as they were beneath the concealing veil of cloud cover.

Xela’s eyes flicked across the chaotic scene, catching sight of plumes of aether as enemy ballasts exploded in brilliant flashes. Of course, it lasted for just a moment before the enemy scattered, the location of their new foe established as they broke off.

The moment of surprise had passed, and Xela knew any kills from this point forward wouldn’t come so easily. The enemy had been caught off guard initially, silhouetted against the burning city as her formation dove through the clouds to strike from above.

Now though, they’d be getting ready to strike back. Getting ready for Xela’s formation to break off and pursue, at which point the enemy shard’s superior agility and experience would allow them to quickly reverse said pursuit.

They’d downed what? Four craft in that initial attack? That meant there were still about nine left based on her rough count in that split second before she’d fired.

Based on what they’d already done to the city’s defenses, Xela would wager that was more than enough to tear apart her formation of green pilots – no matter what wonder machines they were piloting.

Fortunately, her people had come on from a very steep angle, this new corsair having a much higher max altitude ceiling than she was accustomed to. A feat that had likely played a role in why the enemy had been so caught off guard.

“Remember kids, don’t get lured into a dogfight. Do as we trained. Dive. Fire. Pull off. We have the energy advantage. Use it.”

Around her, some of the craft that looked like they were on the verge of pursuing their foes down to the deck, pulled back. The wood elf smiled.

Radio. Oh, what she wouldn’t have given to have had this when she was still in the navy.

“Corsair-5, I repeat, pull off. They’re luring you,” she stressed.

Once upon a time, she’d have been powerless to do anything but watch as a green pilot from her squadron fell into an enemy trap, outmaneuvered and cut down in the chaos. Now, with the comms system in place, she could intervene - at least to some extent.

“Aye, ma’am,” came the shaky reply, the pilot’s voice laced with the tension of her first battle but obedient.

Xela breathed a sigh of relief as her five plane squadron continued to climb, leaving their pursuers on the deck.

Of course, she knew the new communication system wasn’t being utilized to the fullest. How could it be when it had been sprung on the Instructors turned squadron leaders barely a few hours ago? And the cadets themselves less than an hour ago?

Theoretically, they could have been using the radio to allow each pilot to call targets and coordinate their attacks - but that wasn’t the kind of system that could be implemented in less than an hour. Instead, it had been limited to instructors only, to allow them to direct the fight better.

Of course, the moment she had that thought, she saw it - a break in the formation. Now hers. Someone from squadron one or three. One of the planes there had drifted out, nerves or bloodlust getting to the rookie pilot within, as rather than break off to climb, she continued her pursuit of her target, guns blazing away recklessly as the enemy craft danced around her crosshair. The girl’s squadron leader either hadn’t noticed or was too preoccupied with their own target to use their comms.

Xela wanted to bark a warning, to snap the pilot back into position as she saw, rising through the smoke another craft - but she couldn’t. Cursing, she started fiddling with the unfamiliar radio system as she desperately tried to recall how to tune into another squadron’s channel.

She wasn’t fast enough though.

Like the veterans they were, the first shard had seamlessly lured the pursuing corsair into the perfect position for one of her wingmates to take a shot. A shot the second shard did not miss.

The strike was almost surgical in its precision, barely a half a second squeeze of the trigger, the enemy pilot no doubt conscious of her flagging ammo reserves. Still, the half dozen bolts she unleashed was more than enough as they struck the corsair at the base of the wing.

Xela wondered idly if the enemy pilot was as surprised as the wood elf herself when rather than receiving a burst of aether from her target in response, the shard instead burst into flames in a brilliant flash of light.

Indeed, they must have been given the speed with which they broke off, no doubt fearing the now blazing craft was a result of some kind of new spell.

It wasn’t though. The pilot inside wasn’t capable of such.

But the alchemical concoction that held her craft aloft was.

Contained explosions, Xela absently recalled.

She hadn’t fully grasped how that might be a problem at the time. At least, not specifically. She could see it now though, as the craft burned merrily as it darted across the skies. Her hands tightened on the controls, as she held her breath, waiting for the faint, hopeful plume of a parachute.

None came.

As the plane began to dip, she realized she’d just watched one of her students die.

The weight of it settled heavily on her chest.

…She’d had the tools to prevent this, to warn them, to guide them - but the damned system, and the chaos of William springing it on her at the last moment, had tied her hands.

Her jaw clenched as she forced her focus back on the battle. Regret couldn’t help that young woman now.

She’d need to have a talk with William after this though. Changes needed to be made.

“Ma’am, should we-” one of her cadets began, their voice hesitant, no doubt having just seen the same thing Xela had.

“Keep climbing,” Xela snapped, her tone sharp as a blade. “Do not get suckered into a turn fight. And don’t use the radio for anything less than emergencies!”

“I’m being shot at, ma’am!” another voice squawked. “Permission to break formation!?”

Xela glanced out at her cockpit glass to where, sure enough, at the rear of the formation an enemy shard had turned its nose upwards and was taking potshots at them.

“Something just sparked!” Sela continued, the rising pitch of her voice betraying her nerves.

Xela clenched her jaw, suppressing the urge to bark back. Instead, she spoke as calmly as she could, “Move that stick an inch in the wrong direction, and I’ll make sure you’ll do more than catch a few sparks up your ass, cadet.”

The enemy’s tactics were painfully obvious. They weren’t just trying to bring Sela down outright. No, they were trying to rattle her, force her into a sudden maneuver that would bleed her speed and allow them to catch up. They only needed her to hesitate, to panic and bank too hard, just enough for them to close the gap and get within the optimal range of their weapons.

“Maintain your climb - don’t slow down! At this range, their guns will be lucky to do more than scratch your paintwork.”

Of course, even as she said the words, Xela knew she wasn’t being entirely honest. If the enemy did ‘get lucky’ at this distance, there was every chance they could clip the corsair's elevator, props or flaps - crippling the craft’s ability to maneuver.

It was unlikely, but possible.

The enemy’s shots served a dual purpose: keep her pilots on edge, while increasing the odds of a critical hit.

“Sela, listen to me,” she said firmly, forcing a calm tone into her voice. “Keep your nose up, stay on course, and don’t let them box you in. You’re faster if you keep climbing. They can’t keep this up forever.”

The Corsair had the energy advantage, having just come out of a dive, and a more powerful engine. It would out climb a craft that had been sitting on the deck. And that craft was taking greater and greater risks the longer it kept its nose up. The more speed it burned maintaining that position, the more it turned itself into a sitting duck for other corsairs in the area.

A beat of silence passed before Sela’s voice came through, still shaky but resolute. “Aye, ma’am.”

Sure enough, barely a second later, the enemy fire stopped. They were out of range – or their attacker had either stalled out or run out of ammo.

Hopefully the latter.

Still, with the altitude advantage firmly secured once more, they were effectively untouchable by anything beneath them. The enemy would have to claw their way up, losing precious speed and energy in the process. Meanwhile, her formation could dictate the terms of engagement, picking their targets at will. The enemy, by contrast, would be forced to take whatever engagement came at them.

William had called it ‘boom and zoom’. In Xela’s experience, the navy referred to it as ‘eagle striking’.

Different names, same principle: dive in fast, unleash a volley, and use your momentum to climb back out of weapon range before they could retaliate. It wasn’t an intricate strategy, and that simplicity made it all the more effective.

She glanced at her instruments, ensuring her shard was primed for the next pass. “Alright, Wing One,” she called through the comms, her tone cool and commanding. “Turn around and line up for another run. Now that the enemy knows we’re here, we’re going to go sequentially. Squadron-One will be acting as bait. Once the enemy locks onto them, we’ll have a clear window to take them out. Remember, we’re here to clear a path for the bomber wave, either by cutting down their numbers or draining their ammo. Remember to keep your speed up and your heads steady. You’ve got this.”

The formation shifted smoothly, each shard banking into position with practiced precision. Xela smiled faintly. It wasn’t perfect yet, but it was damn close for a group of rookies.

Her thoughts briefly flickered to the second wave that had likely already been launched from the Jellyfish’s hangars. She knew what payloads they’d be carrying. Even seen them in action, in a way, via the medium of William’s dreams.

She could only hope they would be half as effective in reality as they were there.

Because I have a feeling we’re going to need it, she thought as she stared down at the two disparate fleets hovering over both the palace and academy, their cannons occasionally roaring as they rained fire down on the defenders below.

That wasn’t her problem though. For the moment, that was the protective screen of shards that stood between the second wave and those ships.

Shards that needed to be gone before the second wave arrived.

Slowly, she pushed her insane reality defying corsair into a dive, the roar of its fake-core somehow more… comforting than it had been when she’d first started the great metal beast up.

Around her, the rest of the now nineteen shards that made up one half of the Jellyfish’s flight complement dived too.

She also knew that now the enemy knew they were coming, there’d be a lot more casualties on their side with this second clash.

The best she could do was make them pay for it.

 

 

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Willaim frowned as the woman on the other end of the orb repeated her command.

“I’m sorry ma’am, I must have misheard you,” he said slowly, his voice only slightly higher than normal to compensate for the ambient noise generated by the controlled chaos of the bridge. “You’re saying you don’t want me to move to support the palace’s defense, but the academy?”

“You’d be correct, Count Redwater,” the admiral on the other end said. “Her Majesty claims that while your support would be appreciated, it is also unneeded at this time. She has it well in hand. To that end, she’d rather you focus your efforts on safeguarding the future of Lindholm from these… aggressors.”

William’s nose twitched as he tried to read into that. Was that Yelena’s way of saying that the recipe for gunpowder was actually being held at the academy rather than the palace? Or was the tactical situation at the palace not as bad as it seemed?”

He didn’t know.

What he did know was that this new request wasn’t… undesirable.

After all, both Griffith and the twins were both located at the academy. At least, he hoped they were. He was very aware that it was entirely possible all three women had been part of the initial doomed defense of the capital.

Though he hoped that wasn’t the case.

“So be it,” he said. “The Jellyfish will focus her efforts on defending the Academy rather than the palace, ma’am.”

“Excellent. Good hunting to you, Lord Redwater,” the woman said crisply, before departing from the orb’s cone of vision, no doubt busy with a myriad other tasks.

Taking a breath, he turned around, coming face to face with the complicated emotions playing across the features of three of his teammates – Bonnlyn being downstairs preparing to launch as part of the second wave in one of the Jellyfish’s two remaining aether-driven craft. Of the three he could see now, confusion was most definitely the most predominant emotion. As had been the case from the moment they’d launched the first corsairs.

It didn’t help that none of them really had any duties to see to. Theoretically, they did, but those duties had been effectively superseded by the many other mages he had aboard. Even the role of captain, which Olzenya was slated to take up, had swiftly been robbed from her the moment it became clear that the capital was under an actual attack.

To that end, the ship was now being commanded by one of Marline’s aunts, while the other two served as both the ship’s saboteur and defender.

And while there was nothing saying that Marline, Olzenya and Verity couldn’t also take up those roles, they seemed to have universally ignored that option in favor of following him about like a gaggle of lost ducklings.

“Well,” he said slowly. “It seems we have a few minutes before I’ll be needed elsewhere for the dashing rescue of my fiancees, and I take it you all have questions?”

They did, though it was hard to answer any specifically when they all spoke at the same time.


Comments

Are these double wasp corsairs, or wasp major corsairs?

Michael Dale Vereen

Tell the beta readers to hurry up!

Found&Lost

are we going to get it tonight?

Ollie Fairweather

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I NEEEDS IT F5 intensifies

Vonbaron

Thanks, although part of me mourns my lost sleep.

Trevayne

Beta readers have it! Just under double length - I'm much happier for having added an extra section.

Blue Fishcake

Thanks for keeping us informed. You have seemed a little less engaged with the comments, but you were probably busy wrestling with the chapter. Good luck.

Trevayne

Nope, I haven't died since I said Saturday. I just finished it last night and felt it was... missing something. Maybe because these are mostly combat chapters? And description heavy - which eats up word count? Still working on it now.

Blue Fishcake

But but Blue is never late!

Found&Lost

Not gonna lie I may have set an early alarm today and ended up disappointed

DMR1

THE MISSILE KNOWS WHERE IT IS

DMR1

Certainly Sunday in Australia, but there are still 9 hours left of Saturday on the US East Coast and 12 hours in California. We will see.

Trevayne

The smell of sunday release is in noticeable the air

Mikołaj

Thanks for keeping us informed. Is it likely to be a couple of weeks or a month? I am not sure how a lot of editing takes.

Trevayne

It's Saturday!

Found&Lost

There'll be a poll :D With that said, I'm planning on taking a break between books to finally get Sect put up on Amazon. Which means editing. A lot of editing.

Blue Fishcake

Hey Blue, big question. Will there be a new poll on what the next Book will be or are we already on a set course?

Conrad34xdsa

Do you think he meant Saturday evening for the US?

Conrad34xdsa

Saturday believers almost in shambles

jkbscopes

I was concerned as you stated a while back you had 3-5 chapters left. I'm really hoping it's at least 5 more :P

Vonbaron

On the bright side, once this battle is over, the politics move back into high gear. Everybody has political decisions to make that may or may not lead to further warfare. Do the Lunites make a serious attempt to conquer LIndholm since the Royal fleet is now weaker? Does the North start the civil war to take advantage of weaker crown forces? Do the Solites and their New Haven allies make their own attempt on Lindholm? What does Yelena do to try to recover from this attack and while she definitely wants to retaliate, how? For that matter, what does William do? The Jellyfish might be 90% of the combat power of the surviving crown vassals. Does he press his new status with Yelena to do something and if so, what? One interesting possibility would be to offer Yelena revenge, especially if they find out that the orcs and Lunites were working together. He could offer her revenge on the Lunites in exchange for independence for the orcs. I don't think she would go for it, but she might counter by proposing an orc duchy. Then William has to do it. He doesn't even need to invent magical nukes. Just invent ammonium nitrate fertilizer and offer a large shipment to the farmers around the main Lunite airship construction facility.

Trevayne

Good point, although they certainly have been using their own napalm equivalents (earthblood, etc) for a while. I doubt they are just dropping napalm on an airship to get a fire going on the exterior. Unless it spreads inside, it will just burn out in 10-20 minutes and have little to no effect. They do use incendiaries, but generally in bombs. The fire lance mentioned a few times seems to be an armor-piercing napalm bomb. My suspicion is that it might instead be a reference to ready fuel supplies and napalm was used instead of earthblood. As for war crimes, the only one mentioned was a chemical weapons use which was IIRC blamed on ancient magic. Otherwise, it seems to be 19th-century rules (nearly anything goes). They certainly didn't seem to have much trouble in dropping wrecked skytowers and airships all over Lindholm's capital.

Trevayne

Thinking some more about this world, it looks like the weather is mild or can be controlled. The main thing that ended the use of dirigibles and zeppelins in OTL was their vulnerability to storms. The US built two cruiser airships, Akron and Macon, for example, and both were destroyed by storms within a few years after their construction. If you worry about weather, airships would be housed inside really big hangars. They would not be moored over cities using skytowers, except while loading and unloading. This suggests that this world either doesn't have really bad weather for some reason or the Elvish Empire built weather control magic that still works. Edit: One other thing, I don't think skytowers will ever be used in the future except for loading and unloading. Airships docked at them for prolonged periods are just too vulnerable. Maybe they can use nets or minefields to block off underwater stealth approaches, but what happens if somebody invents an invisible or stealthy airship? If they can get close enough to take out a skytower, they can still kill four airships with one attack. If they are just moored to individual towers outside the city, or just floating, only one airship can be killed by attacking any one target.

Trevayne

Looking forward to it. I am really interested in your choice of words. Who or what is under siege? Right now it looks like a battle between the Jellyfish and its shards on one side, joined by any surviving Lindholm shards that can try to launch now that the attacker shards are too busy to shoot them down as they try to take off. The other side is the surviving airships (seven, I think) and their shards (nine remaining plus any that went back to their airship for repair or reloading - Marinna mentioned Ahmada's Firebolt). I suppose the assault on the Palace could be viewed as a siege, or is something else going on?

Trevayne

I'm here for the "This is my boomstick you primitives!"

Oreo-belt25

I think they can figure out that the pilots are not mages, although it will take a while. The main observation is that the pilots of the new shards are rarely if ever seen using magic while normal mage pilots do cast things like lightning bolts in combat. I suppose things will be further confused by the limited number of leaders who are mages and do fly the Corsair-Cs like Xela.

Trevayne

I think napalm would be a poor choice to try to drop on an aircraft hovering over your capital city (also technically a war crime against yourself, in our times.) Concerned to see how it goes

astatine

And they definitely had the concept of artificial cores before William came along. The head of the alchemists guild remarked to herself how many failed efforts towards that goal there were in the past when Williams revealed the engine to her.

Jacob

Regardless of if they guess at there being an artificial core, anyone paying attention would assume there's *some* secret worth that level of protection regarding these new shards with new capabilities and how many of them William has been able to field so quickly. And if they did guess he'd come up with artificial cores, why *wouldn't* they assume it needs a mage just as much as a real core does?

Jacob

Personally I enjoy both the political intrigue and combat.

O

Truth be told, the same is true for me, with that said, this build up has been a long time coming and as such, it's going to be a lot of combat for a while. I can't exactly wrap up the entire siege and get all the key character's perspectives in just two chapters :D

Blue Fishcake

NoooooOOOO. Is there going to be more fighting scenes? I mean they're cool and all, but the political jostling is what I crave.

Katz

Saturday again :D

Blue Fishcake

For the same reason the Spell-Bolt needed a mage. The mage 'needs' to do something to keep the core going, artificial or not. This would certainly be the easiest assumption to make.

Katz

Thinking about William's upcoming conversation with Xela regarding the delay in telling them about the radios, I wonder if he will set up a tactics group. The idea is to have a small group of experienced people who can start thinking about ways to better use the tech. At a guess, it would probably be Xela, Griffith, Piper, and possibly Sveta Greygrass. They would be William's tactics group to hear about upcoming tech and figure out how to best use it. He would probably want to geas them all to not discuss the tactics group info outside the group. This way they can point out things like needing communications training to most effectively use the radios, for example. He can tell them what he thinks he can create and they can provide feedback based on experience as combat pilots and ship officers as to what is more useful and what needs training.

Trevayne

It's possible, but right now I don't think they even grasp the possibility of an artificial core. I expect it will start spreading soon, especially as spies from everywhere (the North, the Lunites, the Solites, and several random nobles not included above) try to figure out the secrets of these new shards. After all, if it is an artificial shard core, why does that need a mage?

Trevayne

Something I just realized is that no one outside of William's circle really knows about the Plebeian Pilots Program (PPP). Given how "absurd" the concept of plebeian pilots is, plus the fact that the enemy downing one of the Corsair-C's thought the resulting fireball was a new spell, I wonder if many will misinterpret that as a mage performing some sort of self-sacrifice spell for the sake of keeping the secret of William's artificial core.

Jacob

Good question. We don't know if there is anything on this world similar to the Admiralty courts on Earth that dealt with captured ships in the OTL 16th-20th centuries (I don't know if they still exist). The way it worked was if a warship captured another ship, the captured ship would be brought into a friendly port and an admiralty court would condemn it as a prize of war. If it was a warship, the government would probably try to put it into service and the capturing ship would be awarded prize money representing the part of the value of the captured prize ship. That money would be split up according to set rules among all those deemed responsible. The overall admiral gets some, the captain gets some, the officers as a group get some, and the enlisted get some.

Trevayne

While anti-shard airships would be useful, the only anti-shard weapon with any real range is another shard. I think escort carrier airships are more likely than destroyer-escort airships. The reason is that they don't currently have any anti-shard weapons with significant range. I suppose he could come up with something like a 40mm Bofors gun and mount that on airships as a longer-ranged anti-shard weapon, but until it exists there is not much point in airships to protect other airships from shards. The weapons to make them effective don't exist yet. Edit: As for wet-navy escorts, why bother? The only things they would fight are pirates. Any airship can easily kill them. The problem is that the only weapons for everybody but William are aethercannons of various types. These are basically big airguns and can hit hard, but have relatively short ranges. I doubt they can even reach an airship at 2,000 or 3,000 feet and the airship has no problems reaching them. Just look at the pirate's reaction to having six airships assigned to deal with 50 or so sailing ships. Her assumption was that they were probably all dead.

Trevayne

Another thing. If carrier doctrine is proven to work (Blackstones have a 20 shards light carrier, and now William with a 40 shard carrier), there will be countermeasures needed. Anyone taking bets on destroyers being developed? Wet-destroyers with AA guns, or even air-destroyers? Given the dire need of cores and airframes, it would be something if William sprung another surprise on his enemies in the form of a wet navy destroyer escort.

Katz

If William's forces take out or capture the Lunite ships, are they his? If he wants to keep expanding his airforce, he'll need another airship. Of course he probably can't afford to do this - wars and fleets are expensive.

Random Information

Blue, could you please clarify how many ships are in the Royal Navy? My understanding from chapter 57 was that there were about 35 airships. Admiral Tyana comments that her force outnumbers the 12 "pirate" airships by nearly 3-1. This fits with having 30-31 airships present with a few others on detached duty performing other missions. However, as @Katz points out, in chapter 29, the Royal fleet was 35 ships, 19 in the Royal Navy and 16 crown vassal ships. So how many ships were in the capital fleet that went to intercept the pirate force and how many crown vassal airships were called up to temporarily cover for the capital fleet as it intercepted the "pirate" force. Thanks.

Trevayne

Good point, but I think Blue is going to have to resolve this. I see your point about only 19 ships going out, but he also states the Royal Navy confronting the 12 Lunite ships out numbers them by nearly 3-1. There is no way 19 ships is nearly three times 12. I think one of those chapters is going to need a retcon. Also the Northern Duchies/Marcher Lords don't have 32 ships. It states clearly that they each have close to 30 ships so together they have nearly 60.

Trevayne

Well, We don't need to speculate, you can re-read that chapter. Maybe Yelena was lying to William. But it is explicitly Stated that the Royanl Navy has 19, The Crown Vassals 16 for a total of 35 for the Queendom. The Marcher ladies have another 32 between them. Itis stated so in Epilogue of book 1. Edit: I Suppose that the Royal Navy could have went buildup in these 9 months adding 15 hulls to it? But the vassal fleet woudn't have underwent the same buildup. Edit edit: Or the capital fleet is counted as being the Royal Fleet+Vassal fleet which would be 35, and she took the Royal Fleet out: 19, and left the 16 Vassal fleet for defense.

Katz

The nations Latrines are all a little more full lol but I'm SURE the queen isn't keeping them in one place and the locations are likely VERY secret

Morpheus

Maybe to avoid confusion that gunpowder reference could be changed to black powder. That way everybody knows what he meant.

Trevayne

Yes I also came to the same conclusion with your points on the story beats for why Yelena wouldn't have gunpowder, and why his corsairs do. I'm just saying from my admittedly American perspective that that specific wording at this crucial point of the story made it seem like he'd given smokeless powder to her seeing as it has been demonstrated his corsairs have a deadly payload even without a mithril shard, meaning as you said some variant of a .50 cal, magic or not.

PalindromeJoe

I think you are understating the forces significantly. The Royal Navy was described as having about 36 airships. The Northern Duchies had about 60-70 between them. I think the Crown vassals had about 30 ships, with Summerfield having another 20-30 airships. The big problem with the first Northern gambit is they were trying to flip the Summerfield Duchy fleet from pro-Crown to pro-Northern. That would have changed the force balance from about 90-70 against the North to about 60-100 in favor of the North. They expected to use Summerfield to keep the other vassals in check while the Northern Duchies took on the RN at 2-1 odds. Edit: I am not sure why you think the Royal Fleet is only 19 airships. We know from this quote from chapter 57 that they had nearly three times as many ships as the Lunite squadron. It wasn’t a small number - not by any stretch. Yet it was still dwarfed by the number of ships she had on hand. Even with parts of the Royal Fleet engaged in routine patrols, the capital fleet outnumbered the enemy nearly three times. Their superiority in firepower was unquestionable. A decisive victory for Lindholm was all-but assured. Given the Lunite squadron had 12 ships, that suggests the Capital fleet has about 30, or 36 over all minus some ships detached for other missions. Given that they called in the Crown vassals to cover the capital, why would they bring in only half as many ships? Especially since the Royal Navy is the highest quality part of Yelena's forces and most of the vassals are average to second or third rate. They just haven't seriously expected combat for too long. Some even have wooden hulls with some bolted-on armor.

Trevayne

The pirate liaison is nearly irrelevant to discovering the source of the attackers. The only way it would be important is if none of the attackers were shot down. The Lindholm forces haven't identified any of them yet, but the battle is still in progress. I would be very surprised if the Lunites managed to attack with ten airships and a ground element that were completely sterile with no proof of their origins. I agree that a fair amount of pirates are likely to get away because I think the Royal fleet will be heading back to the capital. Effectively they will wind up like the US TF34 battleships at Leyte Gulf. They were nearly in range to sink the Japanese diversionary carrier force when Halsey called them back to rescue the Taffys from Kurita. Naturally Kurita had already withdrawn so the fast battleships didn't really get to shoot at anybody.

Trevayne

Yes, I could see her saying something like "You mean we could have won all those matches, you bastard." William naturally responds by saying something like "We have known each other for over a year and a half and you are only realizing that now, Olzenya?"

Trevayne

Fair enough, but your colloquial usage is probably that of an American shooter. Bluefishcake AFIAK is an Australian and probably a non-shooter. I think he uses gunpowder and black powder interchangeably, the same way wiki does. I doubt very much that he has given Yelena any information about explosives beyond blackpowder/gunpowder. IIRC his original intention was to delay firearms (guns using chemical propellants, with either black powder or smokeless powder) until after the Northern Duchies were dealt with. The only reason the Corsair-C uses .50 caliber machineguns is that he couldn't use aethercannon, without draining too much engine power.

Trevayne

I think the entire crownland vassal force is 16 including William's. Maybe less, depending how the refit for the other two went. That would put the losses at 13-15, and uncertain how many of them are totaled. It's been established that in Epilogue 1. The royal navy of 19 is untouched. I don't think the Lunites can afford ANOTHER expeditionary force and just leave their lands undefended versus the Solites. But the civil war is now back on the table, since the marcher ladies now have 32 airships (+3 maybe captured from the orcs) versus 19+1 for the Queendom.

Katz

I am fairly sure that some of the pirates got away. The pirate captain is a massive Chekov's gun. The Lunites might have expected that their liason to the pirates would get killed and leave no trace of who was really behind the attack, but I don't think that this is where the story is headed.

Katz

I understand the historical significance of the term 'gunpowder' and it's roots as the catchall for the propellant used in gunnery, but in modern colloquial spaces it's generally understood that 'gunpowder' means the smokeless variant. Yes at some point in history all gun propellants used black powder, and at that point it was just gunpowder. But George was presumably of age when fighting in WW2 meaning at no point in his life was black powder ever more widespread than smokeless gunpowder ( the propellant of choice then being cordite). I'm saying this AS a black powder enthusiast, I own a repo Kentucky rifle and a Pietta 1851. If I told any of the guys at the black powder range I go to that I loaded them up with "gunpowder" they would think I have a bomb in my hand. (Black powder rifles are not built for the peak pressures modern guns can take)

PalindromeJoe

Err, no. You are assuming that gunpowder and smokeless powder are the same thing. That is not the normal definition. from wiki Gunpowder, also commonly known as black powder to distinguish it from modern smokeless powder, is the earliest known chemical explosive. It consists of a mixture of sulfur, charcoal (which is mostly carbon), and potassium nitrate (saltpeter). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gunpowder I think it is pretty clear that William gave the black powder formula to the Queen as part of the Krakenslayer. He probably hasn't provided any of the processed forms of blackpowder/gunpowder that include things like brown powder or blasting powder.

Trevayne

Another interesting question is what do the Lunites do next. They have mounted a very successful attack on Yelena's vassals. They have taken out around 25-30 airships vs maybe three losses. However now what? Do the Lunites press the war and try to militarily take Lindholm before the Solites can intervene or was this just a raid to try to get the Krakenslayer? Even if it was just a raid, the massive success achieved might lead them to try to take Lindholm completely, even if that wasn't their original intent. This is where the success William's force manages in the next chapter is so important. If, hypothetically, the Lunites report back that their remaining ships were shot to pieces and destroyed by new shards of an unknown type with unheard of performance, the Lunites are likely to stop and start negotiating. If it is a modest Lindholm victory or a draw, the Lunites might continue to press further. This raises the other question. Do all of the Lunite ships have communications orbs or just the flagship? If the latter and the flagship is destroyed, how do the Lunites react if they don't hear anything further after the initial success messages? For that matter, does anybody surrender? If they can force the remaining Lunites to surrender, what ever ships are surrendered help in going some way towards making up for the vassal losses.

Trevayne

Black powder and gunpowder are very much not the same thing. And yes the fouling issue is why I said 'gunpowder' and not black powder for the corsairs guns or the alternative of the reversed enchanted explosive bullet. The reason I bring up this distinction is because in the story so far William has had no need to give the Queen any gunpowder recipe, and she only got the black powder recipe because of her threat towards Williams sister. Why would he just suddenly give up his next biggest advantage of smokeless gunpowder for no apparent reason?

PalindromeJoe

I think black powder and gunpowder are the same thing. Granted, some gunpowder recipes are fancier (corned powder, etc), but they are still the same combination of potassium nitrate, sulfur, and charcoal. We know she has at least black powder because that was the essence of the Krakenslayer secret. We also know William has gone past that, since the Corsair-Cs are armed with mage-smithed AN/M2 Browning .50 cal machine guns. Those require smokeless powder propellants because black powder or gunpowder would have too much fouling and the guns would be jammed after a few shots.

Trevayne

Yes I'm more seeing it as a comical scene where the rest are asking William sensible questions and Olzenya is going "We could have won all those Academy matches!"

Random Information

I just realized while rereading, was there a mistake on the section where William reflects on Yelena's orders to protect the academy instead of the palace? He says the recipe for 'gunpowder' instead of 'black powder'. While I presume his corsairs do have in some way or form a gunpowder mix (or maybe even reversed enchanted bullets like he said he could do after his dogfight sim with Olzenya) I don't think he's given any gunpowder recipe to the Queen no?

PalindromeJoe

I wonder what the rest of the planet will make of William's new shards? What will they call them? My guess would be something like the Devil's Wasps, assuming there is a religion on this world that has a devil-like concept. The Corsair-Cs are faster, fly higher, and their guns hit harder than any other shard. They also make a unique sound like nothing else on the planet. It will also be interesting to see what they make of his new weapons. I am very much looking forward to seeing the shard vs airship combat in the next chapter. I am curious about this reference from chapter 56. A ruse he wasn’t too worried about being discovered. The technology behind his designs was so advanced compared to local standards that even if a spy managed to open up a completed shard, they’d have no idea what they were looking at. At best, they might assume the engine was a device intended to enhance mithril core aether output or was some kind of offensive mechanism. A theory supported by the ‘napalm’ that was being stockpiled nearby. Is the 'napalm' reference an indication that his shards use it as a weapon, or is it a reference to the shard fuel supplies? I suppose it could also be both. He is going to have to have lots of shard fuel and will also need anti-airship weapons. The inhabitants are all used to using incendiary-type weapons loaded with Earthblood, so napalm is not going to be that surprising. It might be available in greater quantities since it probably doesn't need rare alchemical ingredients to process.

Trevayne

I think she is annoyed at the situation, but can appreciate the need for secrecy. I expect it is more regret than anger. She is competitive and doesn't like to lose, but can appreciate William's need for keeping as long as possible to maximize the surprise when it is finally revealed. Olzenya is competitive, but she isn't a fool.

Trevayne

What happens to those ships is an interesting question. Yes, they are faster than the Royal fleet's airships, but I doubt very much that they are faster than the Lindholm shards. I expect they are running away quickly. Whether they will lose any airships depends mostly on when the capital's calls for help arrive. Their own shards might try to save them, but they will be seriously outnumbered by the RN shards. The Lunites have 12 ships. At two shards per ship, that is 24 shards. The RN has at least double that, and if any of their ships are converted shard carriers (these typically have around ten shards), maybe even more. Thus, if the Lunites want to live, they need to run away. Otherwise, the shards will catch them, slow them down, and leave them to be crushed by the Lindholm airships. What can mitigate this is that the capital is sending calls for help via communications orb and possibly radio that the RN will have to respond to. The Lunite airships can probably get away, minus a couple that are focused on by the shards. The really interesting question is whether they leave a few ships to kill the pirates. They might not do that if they think the Lunites might come back and attack their pirate disposal unit. I don't think the Lunite squadron would try to make a second wave for the capital. Yes, they are faster, but what are they going to accomplish? They might also run into additional reinforcements and most of the Royal Navy will be coming in behind them. Any Lunite ships that take damage and are slowed down will be dead.

Trevayne

In retrospect it certainly was dangerous, but there was no warning that a Pearl Harbor attack might happen and none of them had a clue about how it could be done. At least after OTL Pearl Harbor, the critics could point to the multiple exercises the USN did in peacetime that showed a carrier raid could happen. Here it was a force of regular airships that appeared from the water. As for summoning the vassals, she would only be summoning the ones she trusts. She expects the Northern Duchy fleets to be on the other side of the civil war. If they were present, and suddenly turned on her, she could lose quickly. I doubt there will be any significant groups of Northern airships visiting peacefully until either Yelena or the Northern leadership has been replaced.

Trevayne

Does anyone else think that the lunite airships who were acting as decoys alongside the pirate ships are part of a second strike force on the capital? Since they are faster than the Royal Navy?

Katz

I imagine that Olzenya is furious with William for not using the Corsair-Cs in the Academy training exercises.

Random Information

Yelena said that she mustered the vassal defence fleet, and even the farthest vassals would have had time to arrive. Edit: I reread the chapter, and she seems to be talking about royal vassals, which imply only the smaller vassals in the queen's personal domain. Still a kinda dangerous feudal policy.

Katz

Of course, there is one way they could manage it and that is if William figures out how to mage-craft compact nuclear weapons. Then all he needs to do is get one to the capital, probably via something really hard to intercept like a Basilisk-C. The plus side is that the Solites would probably back off as well. I don't think Blue wants to introduce nukes though.

Trevayne

Doubtful, they may take some flak because they didn't tell anybody else about them, but New Haven isn't about to attack their "ally" until the crown has been dealt with and Blackstone has hopefully suffered significant casualties.

Trevayne

I think that it will not look good for the Blackstones and might cost them some support. Maybe enough to delay the civil war again, the way Tala's loss did. Edit: It might buy her even more time if Blackstone decides that they need to put the civil war on hold and find out what happened to Yelena's vassals. I could see both of them (Blackstone and New Haven) delaying until they are sure the Lunite threat has been dealt with. Blackstone out of embarrassment over knowing about underships and not telling the rest of Lindholm and New Haven because they want to conquer LIndholm for the Solite Empire and not hand it over to the Lunites. Pretty sure the Solites would much prefer Lindholm staying independent than letting the Lunites grab it. End edit. Yes, Yelena's faction will be able to salvage all the cores and everything from the crashed ships, but I doubt the ships themselves can be salvaged anytime soon. It might be faster than building new hulls, but I expect they will take at least six months to a year to repair. Yelena already has more cores than she has ships. She will not get new ships for a year or more. If anything, she now has a massive target on her back because everybody will know she has at least 30-50 cores for the taking if an attacker can get past the Royal Navy. The saving grace is that I expect every other noble faction on Lindholm will be looking at this and thinking "Who did that and how do we keep them from conquering Lindholm?" They will think really hard once it comes out that it was the Lunites.

Trevayne

No, they were not at the capital. They are in their home areas fighting the orcs and preparing for the civil war. Why do you think they would be at the capital? Yelena's comment indicated she did not think the Blackstones were the attackers because it didn't fit Northern tactics. If they were present as defenders, she wouldn't even have considered them attacking as a possibility.

Trevayne

I'm wondering if when the Blackstone reveal their under ships, If they get branded as allies of the Lunites and New Haven attacks them as traitors to their cause

MaybeASquid

Were New Haven and Blackstone ships not at the defense of the capital? Yelena's thought last chapter seems to imply they were. Why does the prevailing theory seems to be that this boosts the separatist faction, when they were just as wrecked by the surprise attack? Or are feudal obligations nominal in nature, like, everyone has to send 1 ship for defense, no matter if you are a count with 1 ship, or a duke with 10? In which case the counties would get wrecked, but the duchies would just walk it off? In which case, holy shit that's a horrible homage policy for any monarch that relies on small counties to be kept in power.

Katz

I'm just responding here instead of trying to find your other comment/question. My question is, what happens to the Blackstones when/if it comes out that they knew about this new "undership"? Based on Talas willingness to go to the queen with the information before hand, I could see this being a turning point for her and maybe she leaks that they knew about it. Would some of their allies turn on them in support of the queen? Also, if William can drive off the invasion and/or take out their airships Lindholm can scavenge all the ships/cores. So it is definitely a setback, but may not be a total deathblow to the royalist. Especially if the info that the Blackstones knew was to leak, it may just give the other northern counties enough doubt to hold off until the queen can rebuild.

Business Casual

Good point. I think it is arguable because that battle was really more of a specialized ambush. It wasn't really a regular fleet action between two groups of ships because the Blackstones were trying to trick the orcs into fighting them. If they had shown up with a fleet the orcs would have stayed away.

Trevayne

Depends on whether or not you count the Blackstones 20 shard carrier against the orcs as the use of massed shards

O

Interesting question, is this the first fleet engagement where massed shards are used? Typically airships carry 1-2 shards as auxiliary weapons and only recently have airships been converted to be shard carriers. The Blackstones have just built the first keel-up dedicated shard carrier. We know the attackers employed their 20 shards as a unit to eliminate any opposing Lindholm shards as they were launched and to lock down the airfields by shooting down any shards trying to take off while they were still low and slow. Those shards also did at least one anti-airship strike when they put three fire javelins into the Honorable. We know that William is about to mess things up for the Lunites. He has already launched his first 20 Corsairs as fighters to clear away the Lunites' shards. He is about to launch another 20 armed for an anti-airship strike. They are presumably going for the group of airships over the academy. The first group of 20 seemed to be divided into elements of five. Assuming there are three airships attacking the academy, I suspect the strike leader will direct one group of five against each airship and reserve the last group to finish off any survivors. Another possibility is using ten Corsairs to attack one airship. They might do this because they are not sure how effective their weapons are and want to ensure they kill at least one airship. It might be excessive, but I expect these pilots have never used their anti-airship weapons before.

Trevayne

He does not as established in the chapter where he realized he can control his harrowing with cooking. having no friends made the realize he was struggling to empathize with people and that the Harrowing was a real problem for him.

Alex LordThorsen

It is certainly possible that Yelena really wants to do that, but how? The Lunite fleet was bigger than the combined Lindholm airship forced before this disaster. Its margin of superiority over the Lindholm fleets is going to be even bigger after Lindholm has lost nearly 30 ships. For that matter, even if they manage it at the cost of most of the rest of the Lindholm navy, then what? At best, they have wrecked the Lunites. That just means the Solites finish off the Lunites, unify the central continent, and then come for Lindholm. Yelena's goal is maintaining Lindholm's independence. No matter how satisfying taking revenge on the Lunites would be, I don't think she is going to do it is it just means the Solites get to conquer Lindholm instead.

Trevayne

If we're going with the WW2 theme, I would assume that an incendiary bombing that completely destroys the Lunnite capital would be in order.

Borisoff72

We have seen that three standard fire lance bombs can turn an airship into a burning wreck. I doubt that William's bombs can do much better, but I think they may do it more reliably. There is still a lot we don't know about this battle. There were six skytowers. If each had a full complement of four airships, the royalist vassals have just lost at least 24 airships. We don't know how many were on patrol, just they they were reduced to four after about 90 minutes of combat, with at least one of those having its core taken and is slowly crashing as a result. Since the raiders have felt able to divide their forces and move in on the palace and the academy (probably four ships for the palace and three for the academy), that suggests any remaining defenders are heavily damaged and/or disabled. Either way, the raiders no longer care about them. At a guess, there were about six on patrol. We know the names of two of them. The Honorable was hit by three fire javelins at the start of the invasion and reduced to a burning wreck. The Marmaduke had its core stolen. Together with the unnamed patroling ships, I expect the Royalist vassals to be down about 27 ships destroyed and three damaged. This night has been a disaster for Lindholm, regardless of how much success the Jellyfish and its shards have against the surviving enemy ships.

Trevayne

There are lots of reactions in the next chapter I would like to see and just thought of another. I am really curious about the twins' reaction to the Corsair-C. Assuming they are still alive, they were planning on basing off the Jellyfish. William might well rescind his instructions about keeping them away from the Corsairs because the secret is well and truly out once he intervened in the battle. One thing that I think all three of them would find interesting is the possibility of a Basilisk-C. If it is that fast with two shard cores, imagine how fast it would be with two Corsair engines. Aether-powered shards might not be able to catch it at all and it might have 1.5 to 2 times the weapon load.

Trevayne

If the machine guns can do that to a shard, I wanna know what the bombs can do to a skyship.

Matt Bradock

Yes, I remember reading that in an earlier chapter

Spintool

Good chapter Blue. Just got one big question. Wasn’t one of the main problems with shards is that their means of propulsion was tied directly to their ability to float and their ability to shoot using air cannons? It was mentioned before. Therefore, doesn’t shooting take power from the propulsion and therefore slow down the shards even more? Making it even harder for them to catch up?

Conrad34xdsa

Another thing that occurs to me is assuming, Yelena survives, what does she do next? Even setting aside the pending civil war, Lindholm has just been attacked and seriously damaged by the Lunites. How does she respond? Does she try to fight the war or ask for compensation? If she wants to fight, how does she fight a more powerful country on another continent? For that matter, Lindholm's independence has rested in part on balancing the Lunites and Solites against each other. If she allies with the Solites against the Lunites, they may win. What keeps the Solites from concentrating on Lindholm once they have dealt with the Lunites? There is lots for Queen Yelena to think about, assuming she survives the current battle.

Trevayne

Yes, but there are probably fewer than ten people who know that and some of them, like Marline, Piper, and Xela are geas bound to keep the secret. In addition, the Crown is trying to show that it controls the Krakenslayer device. They are the ones using it to harvest cores on a fairly regular basis. Interesting question, by now they have probably recovered 15+ cores. They haven't had time to build the hulls so where are they being kept? If they can't find the Krakenslayer, I expect the Royal stockpile of cores would help relieve their disappointment.

Trevayne

steampunk meet dieselpunk

Alec MacCurdy

I'm imagining a squad of storm troopers moving into the floats thinking it will be easy only for the entire squad to end up paralyzed from training bolts

jkbscopes

They are looking for the Kraken Slayer, but William Redwater *is* the Kraken Slayer

Oreo-belt25

One thing I am looking forward to in the next chapter is a viewpoint from Yotul. How does she feel when her shards are shot out of the sky and then those shards come after her and her airships. We have already seen Marinna's reaction to hearing the Corsairs and then being hit and shot down by them. It will be interesting seeing the viewpoints of Bonnlyn or the strike leader as they attack the airships. How do they feel about the weapons they are unleashing? What are those weapons? One nasty combination I could imagine is a Tiny Tim rocket with an armor-piercing warhead that contains a mix of RDX and white phosphorous. It is fired at an airship outside the range of the airship's guns, punches through the armor and explodes inside, setting fire to everything. The fire javelin (AP Incendiary bomb) used by the Basilisk has a bigger warhead, but the Basilisk has to come into the range of the defensive guns to use it. Another interesting question is just how dedicated are the Lunites manning most of this fleet? Are they like the WW2 Japanese and will suicide before surrender, or will they surrender if they see their fellow airships shot to pieces by shards that never come into range? For that matter, will Yotul and the orcs surrender if they are in that position?

Trevayne

Pretty sure that is the next chapter. Especially if we get to see the heavy hitters, the anti-airship weapons used.

Trevayne

To clarify this, while pilot quality is very important, numbers and aircraft quality also matter. If we assume the Lunites are at least three times as good as William's pilots, one way to express this is to give them a probability of kill of 1.0 and assume that William's pilots only have a Pk of .33. In the first round of combat, the nine Lunites each shoot down one Corsair. The 19 Corsairs only shoot down six Lunites because it takes three Corsairs shooting to bring down one Lunite. However, in the second round there are only three Lunites left. They shoot down three Corsairs and are wiped out (9-6-3=0. There are still seven Corsairs left (19-9-3=7). This is a simple model and air combat has much more complexity. However, I think it does show the likely outcome. The Lunite shards will either flee or get shot down. The real question is how many Corsairs will they take with them. I doubt they are getting 12 because Xela is using disciplined tactics that are designed to maximize her side's chances.

Trevayne

Good luck trying to reverse engineer the equivalent to nuclear fusion in space. Can smart people do it with a the wreckage of a working example? Probably. Maybe. Can they do it soon? No.

Alex LordThorsen

I wonder just how many people and how much firepower the respective ground forces have. How many storm troopers/commandos did the Lunite airships carry? Marinna thought they would not have a problem, and they are all mage-knights with both spells and bolt-bows. That said, she is now dead. They have divided into two groups and another reason that Yelena sent the Jellyfish to the academy is that she is surrounded by her elite guards. They are in defensive positions that they know very well and have probably fought anti-invasion exercises in at least 2-3 times a year. The academy is not nearly as well prepared. Edit: Yelena's guards also probably have radio communications. The academy defenders don't. The only things the academy has going for it are probably fewer attackers and more defenders. I think the attackers split their seven airships and sent four to the palace and three to the academy. I expect the students will fight if attacked, although the attackers are probably going for the administration buildings since that is where any secrets are likely to be held. The students are probably in bomb shelters in their dormitory basements, so will not have to fight if they are lucky.

Trevayne

Yes. The aftermath of this is going to be like the harvesting of Al' Hundra on steroids, especially since they are going to be trying to recover cores, recover survivors, and trying to repair the damage. The only good thing is that aside from the destruction of the skytowers, most of the firepower was directed at opposing airships and shards, not at just trying to wreck the city. There will be air-to-ground fire directed at the palace and the academy, but not at random into the city.

Trevayne

MORE DAKKA!!!! REDUCE THEM TO TINDER AND SCRAP!

Oreo-belt25

An interesting question brought up by @Baron Von Mott 's comment. Does William have any actual friends at the academy outside from his team, Griffith, and the twins? Do they socialize at the academy at all, aside from inside the team? Granted, they are all misfits to one extent or the other, but still it seems odd. Granted, I have known people who did not make a lot of friends at college. It still seems odd though, especially when one is attending college.

Trevayne

I think he was trying to assess the Queen's reasoning and thought reasonably enough that the purpose of the attack was to seize the Krakenslayer information. After all, that was her exact conclusion. He certainly accepted the decision fast enough, reflecting that it fits his personal desire to verify that Griffith and the twins are safe. The Queen has also had more time to think about her situation. At this point, she is trying to minimize further damage and does not want to get part of Lindholm's future (the academy students) damaged or destyroyed. William has just arrived and is trying to figure out what she wants him to do. He would naturally think of the military objectives first. For that matter, regardless of the damage that could be done to LIndholm's future, I doubt very much that anybody thinks attacking the Academy was the reason for this attack. Damage to the students is collateral, especially the elven students, since both the Lunites and the Solites want the elven resources of Lindholm to serve them after conquest and I don't think necromancy is a thing in this setting.

Trevayne

No, Midway was 4-7 June 1942 and gets much more attention because it was a decisive US victory. If not for a Japanese submarine, the US would have only lost aircraft in killing four Japanese fleet carriers and a cruiser. Coral Sea was a less decisive battle a month earlier, 4-8 May 1942. It was a tactical Japanese win because the US lost a fleet carrier, Lexington, to the Japanese loss of the light carrier Shoho. It was a strategic US win because the Japanese abandoned their efforts to capture Port Moresby in New Guinea by an amphibious assault. It also inflicted enough damage on the IJN carriers Shokaku and Zuikaku that they were not at Midway. So yes, Midway gets more fame, but Coral Sea was the first battle that was fought by opposing carrier aircraft and the surface fleets never saw each other directly.

Trevayne

"the world seemingly coming to a half" Good chapter. Time to see what the gang is thinking.

Jon Arbuckle

There's gonna be so many cores scattered around that city when this battle is done. The defenders, the ships who were docked, the attackers, hell the core that runs the Academy's floats might even end up blasted out of where ever it's hooked up by the end of this fight.

Admiralthrawnbar

Wasn't Midway the first true "indirect" naval battle? Either way, good point about keeping the Jellyfish hidden.

Baron Von Mott

Interesting that William jumped straight to thinking about where the gunpowder is stored, and largely didn't recognise the value of the academy students. That harrowing is really messing with his ability to empathize... Also, finally the Corsairs are in action! Let's gooooo! 😁

Baron Von Mott

I'm pretty sure it depends on the geas. The best example would be Williams and Marline's geas. For William's part, it was over once he gave a core to Marline. For Marline, the contract was to basically not talk. This doesn't seem to have a time limit, and thus we mist assume is indefinite

O

I noticed that the jellyfish is referred to as "her" instead of a "him" as was in previous chapters

O

It's truly a wonder how racists can balance on their high horse with how often they get their ass beat. Wonder if they have the equivalent of seppuku? Because that will be looking promising after this.

mike wade

Yes, it was an error. Xela could have used the radio training, but didn't know about it so she couldn't ask. William was too focused on getting his equipment built. We may see this repeated next chapter as pilots use their anti-airship weapons for the first time in combat. Even Xela only knows about them from William's dreamscape. I really hope he tested at least one of each type before his green pilots use them for real.

Trevayne

Pretty sure the Elves have been humiliated by Lindholm before. They have failed in multiple previous attempts to conquer it.

Trevayne

Good question. For that matter, can Marline talk about a subject if William is talking about it with their team in front of her? We will see. I doubt he has the time to sleep and offer them all a geas.

Trevayne

That is an interesting, but longer-term possibility. They might be able to do it eventually, but I think for at least the next few years he will be concentrating on things that he knows worked on Earth. For that matter, if it wasn't used as a weapon on Earth, he might not even know about it. Granted, he remembers a lot of music, but knowledge of obscure high energy chemicals like pentaborane is less likely.

Trevayne

Hmm, I wonder, what are alchemy and William's knowledge limits? Can he, for example, make some purely chemical unconventional combustion fuel like pentaborane, having almost double energy density of gasoline, become less toxic and more stable and thus suitable as engine fuel?

Vlad Cold

Can a mage be released from a gets? Or is it permanent?

mike wade

Yelena might have to drop the anti slavery part if it gets out that the orks were a part of this attack.

mike wade

Assuming any of the elf pilots survive, can you imagine the racist humiliation of being out gunned by green half-life commoners?

mike wade

Yelena... and the labs she retreated into. are in the palace, or under it. but she's ordering him to protect the academy. hmmm. the GOOD interpretation is about what was said. protecting the future as they have the situation in hand. the BAD interpretation is that, by sending him there, the academy will seem like the more likely place to find the good loot, and then the enemy will focus there. basically using the academy as bait. the BOOM interpretation is that she is gunna rig the kraken slayers to go all kablamo and plans to escape through a tunnel. basically abandoning the palace and not wanting to bother defending it because its gunna explode anyway.

Morpheus

I think that I should expand my thinking a bit: Shattering an army, which is the irreversible stage, comes after several breaks on the field. It is the leadership's duty to direct the repair of a broken fighting force with renewed training, tactics and purpose. A lot of armed forces in the past have come back from the abyss of repeated defeats to emerge victorious in the end. The US has its own examples but there are far more prevalent examples spread out throughout human history. The Roman defeats in the Punic wars, where both their armies and navies were repeateadly destroyed in the field only to re-emerge again and again until the Carthagenians were wiped out. The French in the hundred years war. Who repeatedly lost to the English and suffered from infighting but they were able to turn things around. The USSR in world war 2, which saw its army repeatedly beaten to near death but they managed to turn the tide in the end at tremendous human cost. It's a sign of good leadership and solid social grit to be able to make a turnaround after telling defeats on the field of battle.

Dragoongfa

The easy reply is that even if he didn't want to give the radio to the pilots, he should have at least given it to Xela so she could familiarize herself with it. Especially since the crown already has them on its airships.

Mikołaj

Not saying I think this will happen, but it’d be a shame if the curvy milf elf queen died heroically and we never got that artwork of her.

22junk

Are the bombs napalm or some other high yield ordinance? Either way its going to be one hell of a show when they hit home. Thanks for the chapter Blue.

Gjim

I think you misnamed Xela as Marinna in the second section, during the radio convo.

BelligerentGnu

Yes, but Xela can understand the need for security. The real problem is that his force is going into combat months before it was expected to. He didn't do adequate radio training because he didn't want info on the capability to leak to his enemies. It is a lot easier to keep a secret among a couple of people than it is among 40+ pilots.

Trevayne

Xela will beat up William for that fumble with radio.

Mikołaj

You may be right, although we have yet to see what William has come up with for anti-airship weapons. I expect he was trying to stick with just one design for ease of production.

Trevayne

I think it is going to be the Royalists and thus William. The Lunites have two ground objectives, the palace and the academy. Trying to find the shard would add another objective entirely, in a different location. On top of that, it is a burning wreck. William can probably repair it via mage-smithing, but I think it will take people years to reverse-engineer it unless they can capture some of his people from Redwater. Even then, it was specifically stated that William had to do the final mage-smithing so their output was limited to two shards a week.

Trevayne

Another thought, the Lunites clearly don't have any radio-equivalents. Marinna was relying on seeing a signal flag on her squadron leader's shard and signal lights on her airship for information and direction. Given that the Lunite shards are now outnumbered by over two to one (19 to 9, since they started this part of the fight with 13 and lost 4 in the first pass), by faster shards that have better weapons and communications, I expect they are going to get crushed.

Trevayne

Good point and you are correct that William was getting more instructors. I think I was confused because the only ones directly mentioned are Marline's aunts, and IIRC only Lady Sveta Greygrass is named. Here is the passage where he said he would hire more. “Which is why we’ll be hire on eight more instructors and having them work six days a week on five hour shifts,” the boy said as he slid another sheet across the table to her. “Which gives us four hours each day for maintenance for both craft each day. In turn, this gives our forty candidates each six hours of flight time each week. All we need to do is pad out the rest of the week with theory and other Household Guard duties, and we’ll have a small army of semi-competent pilots by the end of the year.” Although he intended to get eight additional instructors, we only know of a total of six. Xela managed to get two of her acquaintances to serve. William got House Greygrass to provide three veteran mage-knights (Marline's aunts) Here is the mention of Xela's two: Likewise, off in the distance she could both see and hear the dull drone of Redwater County’s second training Shard – the one that had, until recently, been little more than a science experiment, before rapidly being converted back into a two-seater training craft. Two people. That had been all she’d been able to get on short notice using her contacts. The rest either hadn’t responded, were retired, were off playing mercenary on the continent, or were still serving in the Royal Fleet. Xela got two and William got the three aunts from Greygrass. Still, I’ll not deny I’m a little curious as to what hold William has over House Greygrass to get three mages working for him practically for free, Xela thought.

Trevayne

I think it was mentioned that Xela got some of her old comrades to also be instructors

O

I just realized I misread the chapter and overlooked this part. To that end, the ship was now being commanded by one of Marline’s aunts, while the other two served as both the ship’s saboteur and defender. IIRC William had four instructors, Xela and Marline's three aunts from Greygrass. If the aunts are serving as Captain, saboteur, and defender, who are the other instructors leading the fighter and strike squadrons? We know the first 20 is divided into four groups of five. One is led by Xela and I thought the others were led by the other instructors. My suggestion would be to skip the roles of saboteur and defender, at least until they have some evidence that Jellyfish has been spotted. They are obsolete if the battle is being fought just by shards, because I doubt anyone is going to use a flight suit to cover several miles to get to a ship. They make sense in old-style close-range engagements where covert boarding is possible, but are going to be obsolete soon if they aren't obsolete already.

Trevayne

One last fascinating question is just how detailed a version of the battle has Blue come up with? He said he does not like writing battle chapters, but if he already has the battle storyboarded out, hopefully we can get the next chapter on Friday.

Trevayne

There is clearly going to be art least one more chapter on the battle, quite possibly more than one. There were only three main threads in this chapter. An enemy viewpoint seeing their first encounter with the Corsairs. A friendly viewpoint from the pilot that killed the first viewpoint character. Lastly, a viewpoint from William where he reviews what is still happening on the Jellyfish and then realizing he has the time now, asks his team if they have questions.

Trevayne

Another thing for everbody to consider is that it looks like this world's version of the Coral Sea may be happening. The Lunites have just encountered William's shards. They have no idea where they came from. They certainly haven't seen the Jellyfish. If William plays it smart, they will never see the Jellyfish, and the battle between William's force and the Lunites could be the first battle on the planet where the opposing airships never came in sight of each other. Granted, I can see the purists saying that the Lunites certainly did see the Lindholm vassal airships in the first part of the battle (the massacre stage). Still, if the Jellyfish keeps its distance, the opposing airships will only see the Corsairs.

Trevayne

Ugh. Frustrating chapter cause too many separate threads and cliffhangers at once. Feels like part of a series of chapters all covering this same battle

aj0413

Fair enough, but breaking an army can be reversed. That was not what your initial comment implied.

Trevayne

Both instances you mention did 'break' the armies that lost the battle, the fact is that both the US army and US navy did need intensive rebuilding and retraining in order to become the juggernauts that won their respective wars. It didn't help that in both cases the US armed forces had certain structural deficiencies that needed addressing before the turnaround happened, like how the officer core of the Union was fully gutted because more of the ranking officers were confederates and how the pre war Bureau of Ordinance of the US navy did more to help the Japanese than the attack of Pearl Harbor itself.

Dragoongfa

As much as I am enjoying the tactical description of the battle, I am really curious as to the reactions and fallout. Lots of people have to reconsider and make difficult decisions. For just one example, the Blackstone and New Haven factions may have just won. The whole Summerfield plot was intended to get the Summerfield fleet to switch sides. Now, the Royalist faction has just lost 16-20 or more airships with the destruction of the sky towers. Now, they have a serious edge over the RN. Will they try to use it? On the other hand, once they find out that this was a Lunite attack, maybe they rally around Lindholm, at least long enough to drive off the Lunites. Neither Blackstone nor New Haven wants to see Lindholm fall to the Lunites. The Queen needs to decide if she can afford to proceed with the emancipation program given how much relative strength Blackstone and New Haven have just gotten. The Lunites need to figure out what happened. Their surprise attack went of perfectly and everything was going fine. Then a whole bunch of shards no one has ever seen before came out of the darkness and messed everything up. Depending on just how effective William's anti-airship weapons are, they may not get much more information from their fleet except for panicked rep[sorts by communication orb about airships getting wrecked by weapons that nobody has seen before either. Among all the other things I am looking forward to, the next meeting between William and Yelena should be really interesting, assuming she survives.

Trevayne

Not necessarily. The Union lost the Battle of Bull Run and several other battles, but still went on to win the US Civil War. Winning the first battle certainly helps, but does not determine anything unless the loser is just overrun. For another classic example, Pearl Harbor was a really massive tactical victory for the Japanese. It also ensured the destruction of the Japanese Empire.

Trevayne

There is a few instances where it says Marinne instead of Xela I assume, as Marianna is dead at this point.

Szulczyn

“Well,” he said slowly. “It seems we have a few minutes before I’ll be needed elsewhere for the dashing rescue of my fiancees, and I take it you all have questions?” They did, though it was hard to answer any specifically when they all spoke at the same time. Telling his teammates (except for Bonnlyn) is going to be fun. For that matter, how much can he tell them. Can Marline even ask questions given that she is under a geas. Can William relax the geas, or does it not come into effect if William is answering his team mates questions right next to her? Very much interested in seeing just how much he tells them. I expect he will have to admit to being harrowed, because from their point of view he has probably been responsible for more innovation in the last year than every other engineer, mage-smith, and inventor on the planet put together over the last 50 years. I expect he will also say that he has created non-magical shards that the plebians can fly to the limits of their ability and fuel supply. I wonder if he will tell them about the anti-ship weapons? I certainly hope he explained what they are and how to employ them to the pilots who are expected to use them in combat in just a few minutes.

Trevayne

Congratulations, this came out before midnight Saturday in US central time!

Andrew Lechner

It is a great update, but ends with two issues unresolved. One cliffhanger is addressing his team mates. The other is getting to see what kind of weapons he came up with for use against airships. We know they worked, at least in Xela's visit to William's dreamscape. However, this suggests that they either haven't been tested at all, or they were just tested by William himself with no witnesses, except maybe Piper. Her thoughts briefly flickered to the second wave that had likely already been launched from the Jellyfish’s hangars. She knew what payloads they’d be carrying. Even seen them in action, in a way, via the medium of William’s dreams. It is good to have proof that they exist, but frustrating to realize it will be another week before we get to see them in action.

Trevayne

Damn. Not bad for an opening strike. One can hope that they pull off a desperate defense so that William can put his new shards into mass production. I'm also interested in how he's going to answer his friend's questions. Lol

Kaywye

nice

Marius Petrauskas

When they started hearing the corsairs coming my brain instantly supplied Ride of The Valkyrie for theme music lol. Also I was trying to sleep, but how could I after seeing you posted a new chapter!

Moonlightwind

Great update and a good look at shard combat. It answered a few of my questions, like confirming that William was keeping the radios close to his chest and only briefed his people on their capabilities within the last few hours. It also looks like he is using 5 plane squadrons, for the 20 fighter-configured Corsair-Cs that launched first. I do wonder about this because I thought he only had 4 experienced pilots, Xela and the three from Greygrass. Who is leading the anti-airship group? I suggest Xela be in charge of ten, another Greygrass pilot leading the other ten, and that leaves one Greygrass to captain the ship and another the anti-airship group. Although maybe he has another if he brought Aunt Karla into this. A couple of editing notes: The first line is confusing . Marinna is banking her shard not her airship. This soundlike like she is piloting an airship but we find out she is flying a shard. Marinna grinned fiercely, her flight goggles reflecting the flames below as she banked her airship over the smoldering wreckage of an enemy vessel. There are two places in the following section where Xela is referred to as Marinna. Marinna is already dead. She was Xela's first victim. She’d need to have a talk with William after this though. Changes needed to be made. “Ma’am, should we-” one of her cadets began, their voice hesitant, no doubt having just seen the same thing Xela had. “Keep climbing,” Marinna snapped, her tone sharp as a blade. “Do not get suckered into a turn fight. And don’t use the radio for anything less than emergencies!” “I’m being shot at, ma’am!” another voice squawked. “Permission to break formation!?” Xela glanced out at her cockpit glass to where, sure enough, at the rear of the formation an enemy shard had turned its nose upwards and was taking potshots at them. “Something just sparked!” Sela continued, the rising pitch of her voice betraying her nerves. Marinna clenched her jaw, suppressing the urge to bark back. Instead, she spoke as calmly as she could, “Move that stick an inch in the wrong direction, and I’ll make sure you’ll do more than catch a few sparks up your ass, cadet.”

Trevayne

I’m asking if he meant to say “one” instead of “once”. “More ways than one” is the phrase as I’ve always heard it.

22junk

I'm more interested in seeing who reclaims the crashed corsair

Chris

Plane and pilot

Chris

Both downed an aircraft and killed its pilot. The later is rarer than the former.

Dragoongfa

See I knew that William should have built a few SBD’s to take out the enemies ships, alternately corsairs were pretty good fighter bombers the Marines used them for close air support in both WWII and Korea.

Richard Anderson

Awesome chapter! Can’t wait to find out what this new payload is. Xela blinked, her breathing heavy in the tight confines of the cockpit. It seemed she’d just gotten the first ‘kill’ of the engagement in more ways than once. *in more ways than “one”?

22junk

Letssss GOOOOOOOOO

JR9364

Greenhorns, no matter how well trained, will always make mistakes. Which is why the first battle is what makes or brakes an army.

Dragoongfa

Thank you!

Andrew

The queen has figured out old-timey nail bombs from the kraken-slayer and can't wait to use them?

Borisoff72

First.

Borisoff72


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