The Dancer's Reflection Ch. 2 Pg.8
Added 2022-07-12 21:00:03 +0000 UTC
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Not for very long. She has a very high center of gravity and very small hooves, so she needs something to hold onto if shes going to remain upright for any length of time.
Proxer
2022-07-15 14:50:25 +0000 UTCThe art is ALWAYS worth waiting for. I prefer the color over faster line art. The way she's drawn upright like that - can she stand that way without a pole?
Brian Haynes
2022-07-15 04:56:22 +0000 UTCI don't know if the comment was deleted here somehow (I'd read through the comment from the email it sent) so I'll just reply here; you're absolutely right. Trying to write a long-form story has been a struggle both artistically and mentally, and I haven't been able to strike the balance between artistic quality and speed when feeling that if people are paying for it then it should be my best PLUS meeting or exceeding the quality president set by the previous page. I've considered potentially looking to hire a colourist to help speed things up but hit roadblocks on being able to pay someone an acceptable rate while also being able to support myself. As a second option, I've been considering asking what people would prefer being either speed or quality (since cost is a set value) by perhaps cutting out colour all together, or perhaps shading. something like that. Regardless, thank you for being honest about frustrations you have. This is a story that I want to be able to finish in a reasonable amount of time and the pace I've been setting is clearly something that needs to change in order to see that realized.
Proxer
2022-07-14 14:44:50 +0000 UTC:O This is just impressive no matter how you look at it. Excuse me while I pick my jaw up off the floor.
ComicTF
2022-07-14 01:30:46 +0000 UTCWoah, really? I didn't know anyone was "horrified" by anything in this storyline! The last arc of the story in particular, I really enjoyed for its exploration of the protagonist's altered mindset and physicality following the change. It's definitely subversive to what the original personality would want, but that just solidifies the nature of the conflict in this story, and the nature of the threat that the antagonist presents. The way I look at it, at least, heroes/protagonists have their boundaries and desires "violated" all the time in any kind of story, but in far worse ways. In Lord of the Rings, Frodo, an innocent and truly good person, is infected with an overpowering addiction to an evil artifact, is stabbed by a fell blade which leaves a wound that will never heal, Boromir is shot to death by orcish arrows, the elves are forced to flee their lands forever, etc etc etc. By comparison, what's happened to our protagonist here is pretty mild; but I think that the way it's presented makes it feel very personal, which makes it easier for us as readers to feel outrage on their behalf.
Val Salia
2022-07-13 19:59:53 +0000 UTCThere was no offense taken. Don't worry
Proxer
2022-07-13 14:18:50 +0000 UTCHow is that mean? I thought I would ask a question about the storyline, mainly a part in the story being showcased at the moment. It's only fair to ask questions about a story to see what the storyteller has to say about certain creative decisions in a comic. If I meant to be mean, It wouldn't be anything more than a hate comment telling Proxer about how "Oh YoU SuCk" or something to that degree (Which still wouldn't be the worse thing I've seen for "mean" on the internet since I'm a bit too kind to even put that and I've seen much worse comments on other comics that's beyond my capabilities of being "mean"). I wanted to ask to see why Proxer decided to go in this direction, and she answered. Simple and to the point. It was never meant to be mean, just an honest question.
ccateni
2022-07-13 13:15:43 +0000 UTCPleeeeease don't be mean to her.
rodso64
2022-07-13 05:30:06 +0000 UTCDaaaang, way to present that body!
Val Salia
2022-07-13 04:42:04 +0000 UTCLooks wicked Prox!
Ghost909
2022-07-13 02:06:43 +0000 UTCA turn in the story wouldnt feel very impactful if we didnt establish her new life first and her feelings about how she THINKS things are. Also I love her and wanna make her dance pretty for you.
Proxer
2022-07-12 23:56:23 +0000 UTCLooks like she’s picked up some mad skills sense I’ve see her last.
Kobe Wild
2022-07-12 23:33:41 +0000 UTCLovely anatomy (and volume) on the thighs'n'buttocks
It'sPierce
2022-07-12 22:45:40 +0000 UTCLove the touch with the lyrics
SneakyGato
2022-07-12 21:56:55 +0000 UTCQuestion: Do we really need to see the dance? We all are horrified from the last chapter, why do we need to see this?
ccateni
2022-07-12 21:48:45 +0000 UTCThis looks fucking great, glad to see more
MagicChurro
2022-07-12 21:32:25 +0000 UTCAlways happy to see more of your work! Hope things are going well for you on your return ;)
eqlipse
2022-07-12 21:17:45 +0000 UTC:D
eqlipse
2022-07-12 21:16:53 +0000 UTC
