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Its back! Early Viewing - Borne of Caution: Act 3, Ch 1

I hope it was worth the wait.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nU35AvAI7hRwkRlfG2jvbGUC2BU0KGP4_zZ4U-5Tyfc/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Absolutely worth the wait. Can't wait to see where they go from here.

Justin L

F****** THANK YOU. I just don't know what esle to say, well done 👍

kemono

I was thinking the ONE would be the "Chosen One"

Radha Patel

It’s good to be back! And what a doozy of a chapter too!

KoZa

We are so back ᕙ⁠(⁠ ⁠ ⁠•⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠•⁠ ⁠ ⁠)⁠ᕗ

wave_emoji

Love this chapter hell yeah not a big fan of cryptic speech I'd always feels like a bashing my head I prefer just flat-on this is what's going to happen so I hope someone decrypts irritated his talk sometime but other than that it's awesome and Brandon is so screwed his father is going to kill him he's going to climb through that pokegear and kill him

Phoenix Bugg

Also calling it now, the ONE mentioned is going to be a ego merge of Nine and Lee

WhatAFungi

I think they should wait till after they show off the training by smacking down Norman, THEN do the battle bet thread

WhatAFungi

I’m so glad it’s back! Norman’s gonna get smacked down hard, isn’t he?

WhatAFungi

At last!

BelligerentGnu

Sylveon.

Silveraith

That was a delight to read. Ty for the the chapter.

Straven

What pokemon are on Lee's team. I feel like I am missing one base on the coversation with Sala. Corviknight Octillery Shinx Sceptile Ninetales

Eric Steingraber

Yeeeeeeeeeee LETS GO!? Anyway Petalburg Gym going to be smashed? 😜

Duke of Coffee

Fantastic chapter and a great opener to another arc. Gonna miss big daddy dragon a little 🥹

Hazel Kings

Heck yeah! Chapter turned out great!

Mengha

Big fan of how this chapter turned out i think you handled divine intervention beautifully, cleaned up a loose end with Sala and announced the flight's step back into the limelight like a raging Draco Meteor! It'll be difficult to top this but the ending transitions fantastically into whichever direction you take it in. I look forward to the next one!

Jericho Rising

So ..... Ninetailss and hendonf for life

Kcx1

Divine bullshit, go! Glad we're back.

Soah1086

Okay I expect a Battlenet thread next chapter. I imagine people are having a meltdown right now lol.

MegaZeroX

Excellent end to the training arc. Can't wait for the next couple gym battles.

Iota

Aaaaaaahhhhh! Not looking at comments yet but too happy to see a chapter to stay silent rn 😆

Hazel Kings

Love it still wish he got a legendary or at least a mythic

nasapeepolover116

Amazing chapter! I wonder what would happen should Lee meet a Lucario and bonded trainer.

Bryson Blevins

Yeeeeeeeeeeees

Koutetsu Oni

Thanks for the chapter. Been waiting for this story to start up again

LegosFreak

Aaaaaaa voltouuuu

Yona Ksr


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