Mortality Script

Here's the script for the next comic. Obviously spoilers. It's also more of an outline of what to draw so its not very comprehensive. 

Mortality script

Page 1

1. Large panel (possibly whole page) sky is really light, bottom is really dark. Bodies on the land in between
   1. With heaven above and hell below. It is left to the mortals on earth to choose a side to serve.  Mortals fear gods, what greater purpose would their inferior life serve?
   2. I thought I understood this.. I thought I understood everything that was worth understanding.
2. Close up horizontal panel of two men on field, centaur helping a demon who’s been hurt.
   1. I never thought someone so insignificant would catch my interest.
3. Small close up panel of face (optional)
   1. But thinking you know everything… can get pretty boring.

Page 2

1. Small square panel of clay helping the demon drink,
   1. “It will be alright friend, just hang on.”
2. Small square panel of suddenly over dramatic lighting, demon looks scared
   1. You… you wear the armor of heaven's army.”
3. Horizontal thin panel, with clay in foreground, silhouetted, bright light with lots of eyes and wings in background, takes up whole background. Demon runs off in shock
   1. But you’re helping an enemy.”
4. Large panel with seraph filling the background, clay silhouetted in the center, small. 
   1. “why?”

Page 3

1. Horizontal panel, clay shielding his eyes. 
   1. “Forgive me, did I do something wrong?
2. Open panel, Seraph floating above clay. 
   1. “It’s not a sin but it is… senseless. 
   2. “He was hurt! I couldn’t just leave him there!
3. Horizontal panel on opposite side of page than first. Close up of clay in heavy lighting looking curious.
   1. “Why would you help someone you will be facing on the field later. 
   2. “why?

(possible panel to pause to think)

1. Square panel of Clay looking happy.
   1. “Because!
   2. “That’s not an answer…”

Page 4

1. Horizontal panel, clay from the side, thinking. 
   1. “I don’t know. It’s something inside me. He’s an enemy, but he’s still a person, so he’s important. So even if I ended up getting seperated from my troop and lost in a place I know nothing about.
2. Square panel, repeat of previous page. 
   1. “I had to do it.”
   2. “You’re still not making any sense.
3. Horizontal panel, Seraph floating close to Clay, filling up more of the panel than him.
   1. “Don’t people usually help each other?”
   2. “Mortal’s helping other Mortal’s is common enough. Helping their enemy is something new to me.”
   3. “But you mortals have done many senseless things I can not understand…”
4. Same, but the eyes focus on clay. 
   1. “I can teach you.”
   2. “Teach me?”
   3. “Sure, they say you never truly understand someone until you walk a mile in their horseshoes.
5. Square of clay looking embarrassed. 
   1. “And I’ve got quite a few miles to get walk to get back to my troop by now, so there’s plenty of time. 
6. Small panel of clay thinking.
   1. “Though you’re so bright, it might be kinda hard to travel together…”
7. Horizontal panel (open) of clay being blown back by a bright light.

Page 5.

1. Horizontal panel, mass of eyes and feathers. 
   1. “Are you implying that you, a meer mortal, who hasn't seen a fraction of time and space that I have, is capable of teaching me?
2. Horizontal panel on the left side of page, light fading away, clay’s eyes looking downward, feathers flying around. 
   1. “Why not, I don’t have anything better to do. 
3. Horizontal panel with clay looking at Seraph, who’s body is outside of panel, going down page. 
   1. “Will this form suffice?”
   2. “Well I can look at it without my eyes burning, so yeah!”
4. Open panel, above shot, the light from above fading to be lighter. Clay and Saraph walking together.
   1. My first frivolous choice would end up being the last one I ever made as an angel...

Page 6

Top: “so the centar, over our time together, attempted to teach me what it meant to be “mortal”

Page divided into 4 sections

1. Clay and Seraph seated over a fire. Seraph opening his stomach to eat. 
   1. “You’re supposed to taste the food when you eat it.”
   2. “It all ends up in the same place”
   3. “But you’re missing the best part!”
2. Seraph eats his fork, opposite angle of last panel.
   1. “”Also we don’t usually eat the silverware.”
   2. “So many rules…”
3. Seraph and clay playing cards, Seraph is holding all the cards in the background.
   1. “This was the most direct path to victory.”
   2. “But it was over so quickly.
4. Both looking at each other portrait
   1. “Are you sure you’re angry because you’ve lost?”
   2. “I can’t tell if you’re being smug or not.”
5. From behind so you can see paper and the background. Both drawing a map of the area. Clay’s is stylized, Seraphs is a copy of the background.
   1. “A map might be difficult to read if its so realistic like that. Stylization can help.
   2. “Weird…”
6. Both showing their pieces to each other. Clay looks tired.
   1. “I think yours is objectively confuseding, however.
   2. “Yeah…”
7. Both laying down in the dark, Seraph in the crook of Clay’s legs.
   1. “Sleeping wastes a lot of hours you could be using for other things.”
   2. “Heh, we don’t really have a choice.”
8. Closer shot, Seraph turning over
   1. “This is the best thing you’ve showed me. I think I’ll nap for a few decades”
   2. “Please don’t
9. Long panel at bottom, both walking next to each other. Camera at the height of Seraph, Clay out of shot, flinching.
   1. “What about sex.”

Page 6

1. Vertical thin panel, Seraph looking at clay who is bright red.
2. Open panel, Seraph flying around Clay in the middle.
   1. “That’s part of being a mortal too, isn’t it?”
   2. “I mean, without it, you wouldn’t have more mortals, would you?”
   3. “I never knew you could be this quiet.”
3. Square panel, close up of clay’s face, at the end of last panel.
   1. “Look… It’s just. I believe....”
4. Square panel of Clay, flustered. 
   1. “T-that's someone you talk about with someone important to you!”
5. Copy panel of Seraph’s stone face.
   1. “I’m not important?”
   2. “What! No! 
   3. “You said everyone was important.”
   4. “They are!”
6. Vertical panel, Both in shot, walking together. 
   1. “It’s different for everyone. I personally think it's an experience I want to have when two people are important to EACH OTHER.
7. Horizontal of Seraph walking at eye level
   1. “How is it different for everyone if everyone does it?”
8. Repeat of previous panel, but Seraph runs into clay.
   1. “I can’t participate anyway without risking-oof”

Page 7

1. Thin panel, view from below, with Seraph and clay silhouetted on a hill. Below there are spots of blood and dead bodies.
   1. “Ah, I suppose we’re getting close to your troop.
2. Open panel, both from behind, fires in distance. 
   1. “They… they said we would be doing the Lord's work… I thought we were doing something good…
   2. “Mortal lives are short, some are just willing to give that time to their gods. It’s not something to get distracted
3. Thin panel, Clay in upper half, overshadowed. but camera trailing down to Seraph, looking surprised.
   1. “Don’t say that!”
4. Square panel, Clay gross crying.
   1. “Just because their lives are short, doesn't mean they weren’t important! It’s not the length but the purpose you give your life that matters!”
5. Horizontal longer panel, clay running off camera, throwing down armor. Seraph reaching
   1. “And this isn’t what I want my life to be!”
6. Thin vertical panel of Seraph holding his chest, a small light coming from it.

Page 8

1. Open panel, Seraph clutching chest with a glowing light from center
   1. I’ve lived for countless years, but his words lingered in my min. Have all those years had any purpose to them? Was I just existing to exist. Bored and complacent to do what I was told.
2. Horizontal panel, Clay is the only thing lit in the darkness. On his back, looking forward.
   1. He will die in a few years, and I would live on without him. I’ve experienced more in these few weeks than I ever have. The thought of going back to the mundanity without him gave me an uncomfortable and painful feeling in the pit of my soul.
   2. “so...
3. Large horizontal panel. Seraph sitting on Clay’s stomach, above his crotch. 
   1. “Thats whay I want you to have sex with me… So I'll lose my wings to sin and become mortal.”

Page 9

1. Horizontal panel, Seraph grinding his ass against Clay’s dick from behind. 
   1. “Are you sure it won’t hurt? I don’t want you to regret this… (panting”
   2. “If I do this, this regret will only last a lifetime. If I don’t, the regret will last for the rest of time itself.
2. Horizontal panel, thinner and to the side, Clay cupping Seraphs face and kissing his forehead, seraph looks surprised, word panel in left half.
   1. “Is this alright with you, though. You said sex should be with someone who’s important to-
3. Vertical panel, other side of page. Clay smiling.
   1. “It’s fine, because you are important to me. I want to do this..”
4. Vertical panel, Seraph holding his chest with the glow back.
5. Both previous frames frame an open panel of a cock near seraphs butt.

Page 10

1. Long open vertical panel, length of next 2 panes.. Seraph with wings out, riding clay’s dick. Dick pushing against stomach
   1. This sensation...
2. Square panel, both their faces close together.
3. Repeat of previous panel, large eye starts to turn into a mouth with drool coming out and tongue, panting
   1. “Y-you’re so warm…
   2. I can feel the air being pulled into my body...
4. Larger square panel, Seraphs lower bits.
5. Repeat, bits start to look more realistic. 
   1. “Everything is tingling… I...
6. Long Vertical panel. Seraph is silhouetted in foreground, Clay in shot, straining, his legs locked with the other.
   1. “I’m sorry, I can’t hold back…”
7. Smaller Vertical panel, Seraph stomach starts to swell with cum squirting out of the bottom.
   1. “I-I’m-”

Page 11

1. Open panel. Seraph is bathed in light, very had to see, halo.
2. Horizontal panel, Clay is shielding his eyes.
3. Repeat, lights are dimmed. 
   1. “Seraph? 
4. Another open panel. Feathers flowing around panels. Demon Seraph sitting with a limp hords cock on his thigh while he leans back. Mouth open, panting, smiling, belly bloated, cum spurting out.
5. Small horizontal panel, close up of Seraphs eye, big smile. His eyes have hearts in it.
   1. “C-can we do it again?”

Page 12

1. Open panel. Scenic field with building in foreground. Nun with devil tail standing in the doorway. A smaller nun is running out to great Clay coming down a winding road to a stone gate pulling a wagon with more casual clothes.
   1. There's a lonely little convent with... Unique sisters. There, a centaur helps out on the premises. A new sister has joined the fold. Everyone is important, everyone matters to someone.
2. Horizontal panel. Seraph on Clay’s back, looking at the boxes. 
   1. “Is it food? I hope its food! Let's eat it all now!”
   2. “You’ll get a stomach ache.”
   3. “Ooo, I haven’t had one yet. Let’s try!
3. Vertical panel, Seraph kissing Clay on the head while standing on his shoulders.
   1. “Besides…”
4. Open panel. Seraph smiles as he hops away.
   1. “We’ll eat it together! I want to have all my “firsts” with you!”
   2. But some people are special to you.
5. Thin Vertical panel, Clay blushing and clutching his chest.
   1. Very special...