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Harry Potter and The Pink Auror Chapter 11 (Blades, Hammers, and Shields)

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Feel like your kinda turning Harry into something he's not. Harry has always been powerful. He probably has more power in him than all 3 champions put together. His Patronus is all the proof you need. Would have made more sense if you focused on his power and he had to get better at tactical thinking. We already know he's more powerful. His problem has always been tactics because he's always scraped by on luck and power. This was the opposite of how things should have been.

Hakai

Love your Story

Nico Klaiber

Showed up for the gooner tags on ao3, stayed because the plot is actually really interesting 😂. But seriously I can’t wait to see where the story goes, keep up the good work!

Ronnoc607

This Chapter will be important for Harry's strategy for the rest of this Duelling Race

Vjollce

There will be romance next chapter

Vjollce

Nah I loved the focus on the duels in this chapter (though I understand that for people looking for romance this can feel like a slow chapter). The story is still supposed to be a adventure and getting a bit of insight in the different possible ways to approach a duel in the wizarding world is enlightening! To me at least ^^ Ron is still a prat.

Marco Zijlmans

Honestly I feel like you didn’t have to tell us the outcome of all the duels and could’ve used the chapter to build romance

Daeron Targaryen


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