The Blood-Stained Blade Ch. 01-05
Added 2025-01-20 15:01:01 +0000 UTCI'll be starting a new story sometime next mont
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Agree the first chapter is the weakest. For a numbers go up thing it felt a bit slow
Kitty Lee
2025-01-26 15:43:50 +0000 UTCEdit suggestion: and that caravan was ~~not~~ [now] under assault by bandits of some sort.
Kitty Lee
2025-01-26 15:41:22 +0000 UTCa cursed sword game lit? genuinely been hungry for one forever, and today we feast!
Riley Cox
2025-01-21 08:18:44 +0000 UTCLove it
Alec Ruth
2025-01-21 03:47:09 +0000 UTCYup, I'm already completely addicted to this story
viisitingfan
2025-01-21 00:22:39 +0000 UTCIncrease Connection 3: With this level you don’t feel your wielder’s emotions and hear their thoughts, they hear yours too, completing the bond. (With this level your don't ONLY feel your wielder's emotions. Current wording suggests it loses that ability)
Ahmed Hashi
2025-01-20 23:28:03 +0000 UTCit was certain that it was being toyed with it. (Remove unnecessary it). not triple it as it had first though, (I assume you mention thought?)
Ahmed Hashi
2025-01-20 23:26:00 +0000 UTC> Improved Siphon 3: increase maximum Life Force drained per blow from 3 to 7. > +5 Life Force > At only a hundred Life Force, it considered that a great deal and selected it as quickly as it could. it has capacity of 80 at this moment > Life Force: 36/300 a bit above this, it is said that it has 34 left. it looks as an interesting concept, though too dark is not my thing. the sheppard boy mustn't be able to hide the healing because his clothes should be in ribbons. I hope this is not all just so that things get a dark term for the sake of darkness and numbers going up. from math point of view, the first chapter should've had hundreds of deaths to achieve the upskills and keeping the idiot alive. shoving down the price of the skills might make things a bit more realistic because the blade should've been relatively weak.
gostsamo
2025-01-20 21:59:54 +0000 UTCI’ve enjoyed the story so far the only problem is that I think you should have a POV for Ren. To help raise the stakes and give us reader more of a connection with him like what you do in Tenebroum.
DeadSlime
2025-01-20 21:55:57 +0000 UTCLove the story so far mate! Hope ya continue it in the days the come! ^^ The first chapter is definitely the weakest of the 5. Our MC just feels a bit too humanizing for what's supposed to be a broken soul in a sword. But it seems it really start to pick up in story/quality after they get the share senses skill. That does bring me to a question though. Why does our sword see in what I'm assuming in a 360 degree area? And not, well, share the senses of the wielder? (Besides for a narrative reason, I understand it would be awkward if the sword ONLY say what the wielder say and etc.)
Lilly
2025-01-20 17:30:05 +0000 UTCwill fix! Thank you for the correction.
D. Winchester
2025-01-20 16:56:05 +0000 UTC"and deliver the coup de gras" Maybe a bit pendantic but its Coup de grace
Random Guy
2025-01-20 16:47:25 +0000 UTCNo problem he seems to act like he got the upgrade afterwards its in Chapter one around the time he first loses Life force.
Random Guy
2025-01-20 16:07:46 +0000 UTCI shall go back and look. It's entirely possible I might have screwed that up. Thanks for pointing that out!
D. Winchester
2025-01-20 16:05:23 +0000 UTC"Life Force: 0/150." shouldnt that be 80? He didnt take the storage option but the siphon.
Random Guy
2025-01-20 15:53:39 +0000 UTC
