Nour's Poll ... 0? I Don't Flippin' Know
Added 2024-06-20 16:42:34 +0000 UTCI'm back on my polling bullshit you guys! Woo woo!
Okay but seriously as I'm re-reading parts of Nour I want to know your thoughts about this specific thing. This is a short poll cos I need to know quickly to know if I should stop and do a quick re-read for fixes and additions or to just keep on chugging along.
QUESTION: At this moment, Nour is not shaping up like Ruben's format which isn't a bad thing. It actually makes me feel easier since I don't have to stick to this really specific format. But, it also feels like Nour is suffering on the romance front. Mainly that's due to touching being a problem but romance can obviously be done in different ways. And unless you're on the toxic route, I feel like you don't get that at all.
So, do you think Nour is fine where it's at or do you wish there were more scenes where the two of you are growing closer, getting romantic? Maybe even to the point where when the truth does come out, there's an even bigger feeling of betrayal due to you thinking Nour was truthful with you and such?
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Lmao but that's actually very helpful. Let's me know that the story can stand alone so when I go back through just add more flavor text and moments that I see are fitting.
13Leagues
2024-06-20 21:20:17 +0000 UTCI feel a lil bad for being in the middle, so I guess to further explain it: A slower pace doesn't bother me, and if it ends up feeling "uneven" in terms of route romance features, that's fine cos that's how it be sometimes in order to have a full, wonderful narrative. With that said, the feral goblin in me loves romance, so when the goblin is in charge, that'll be the goal lol
Ry A.V.
2024-06-20 19:25:38 +0000 UTC
