Dani's Daring Date pt.4-7
Added 2022-02-19 03:26:34 +0000 UTCThe bridge page is probably a little too wordy, it was worse before I edited it down to this. Hopefully the next pages will be more concise.
Edit: Had to fix some typos
Comments
Too wordy? Oh no, the dialogue lets the imagination run amok; the expectation as John heats Dani up...
2022-02-20 17:02:15 +0000 UTCSo... John watched the video 😏 Maybe it gave him some ideas 😏
GuardianLorian
2022-02-19 16:15:18 +0000 UTCI dunno, I'm a fan of the dialogue, but I'm a fan of your story blurbs and writing. I think it works well...shit's hot, yo...
RckyPtrn
2022-02-19 04:15:16 +0000 UTC
