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Edits to Kernstalion 57 and 58

As the title suggests, I've made a few major edits to Kernstalion 57 and 58. If you don't feel like reading, the changes are as follows. 


- Est doesn't give the ring to Antoni

- Antoni is a little less 'dangerous' and Est is less scared

- Est fights the guard and wins easily

- Est takes a whole lot more seeds/nuts as payment for Antoni trying to trick them

- A whole lot of grammar/sentence structure fixes


These changes were made after some good feedback from Royal Road. Remember, if you guys see something you think makes no sense, let me know. I might not do something about it everytime, but I will if I think you are right :)

- John


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