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Added 2017-01-10 00:57:21 +0000 UTCI'm taking the week off to get some things sorted out, but I have all the CYOAs tallied and the celebrity RPF 'o the month chosen, so I just need some free time to fall into my lap to get something done. I tweaked the hundred dollar goal to be more enticing and I'm still working with Tracy on Spider-Man comics, so here's a little scenelet that yours truly came up with.
PANEL 5 - A quick insert of Dazzler's face.
DAZZLER
That's nothing.
PANEL 6 - A packed concert, Dazzler on stage performing, wearing her classic 'disco ball' outfit. In the front row, distinct from the silhouetted crowd, Peter is there with Mary Jane. MJ is flashing the stage, holding her shirt above her breasts, and written in lipstick on her belly are the words "Backstage Pass?"
CAPTION: "I was playing a venue a few years back when I met these two kids. She was a real freak, but he seemed like a poindexter. Couldn't figure out what she saw in him until I got his pants off."
PAGE 4 - Dazzler's Flashback: This page is set up like a splash page pin-up of Mary Jane's naked body, with her face at the top and her thighs at the bottom, but every other panel is interspersed with scenes of Peter and Dazzler 'interrupting' Mary Jane. Time is also progressing in each panel, as will be indicated.
PANEL 1 Mary Jane's lips as she licks her fingers slowly, lasciviously.
CAPTION: "There was more than enough to share, but Red let me have all of it."
PANEL 2 Mary Jane's view. Dazzler's plunging neckline is pulled down to her groin, allowing Peter to thrust into her. He takes her against the wall, her arms wrapped around him, fingers like sparklers as she claws them down his back. (Note: this is where Mary Jane's neck/clavicle would be if Panel 1 continued)
CAPTION: "She just wanted to watch."
PANEL 3 Mary Jane's breasts. She squeezes them, smearing the saliva on her fingers into her nipples.
CAPTION: "So I put on a show."
PANEL 4 Peter thrusts into Dazzler harder. Her disco medallion flies up from his power. Her fingertips are shooting lasers as they splay out.
CAPTION: "I love performing."
PANEL 5 Mary Jane's groin. Her hands, having trailed down her belly, now cup her sex.
CAPTION: "She loved it too."
PANEL 6 Peter comes inside Dazzler. She throws her arms out to the side, shooting out monster energy bolts in ejaculatory climax.
CAPTION: "First time I converted my own screams into light."
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Jack Charlotte
2017-01-12 00:47:22 +0000 UTC