Fertility Rites, Part 4
Added 2024-12-29 05:06:31 +0000 UTCHow far would you go to keep a promise? Would you go on a long journey? Face dangerous beasts? Risk life and limb? For Keelan, a hunter in a remote village that worships the fertility goddess LunovΓn, keeping his promise means something far more profound...
I hope you enjoy reading the ending of Keelan's story as much as I enjoyed its writing. π
EDIT: I added a complete version to the attachments below. All 50 pages in one PDF!
Comments
Thank you, Samantha. π The ending made me tear up as I wrote it, as well.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-04-24 16:54:44 +0000 UTCA beautiful but bittersweet end. Her sister saved her but never got to know her. I'm glad Keela will make sure her child knows her aunt. Tearing up a bit, thinking about missed opportunities, lost chances.
Samantha Louise
2025-03-23 04:52:57 +0000 UTCEmory, thank you for the fast reply. The pdf downloaded easy peezy. Thank you!
Mike R Pen
2025-02-17 20:33:45 +0000 UTCHi Mike! That is really weird. I just re-uploaded it for you. Please try again. π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-02-17 19:37:50 +0000 UTCLovely, sweet story. But I tried to download the complete pdf and I get a "not found" message.
Mike R Pen
2025-02-17 19:29:09 +0000 UTCThank you, Becca. Only now getting around to fixing that!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-28 02:30:51 +0000 UTCThank you, Gemma! I really loved her finding herself in this one. π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-28 02:26:55 +0000 UTCFYI, the complete PDF seems to be missing part 2 page 5.
Becca Royal-Gordon
2025-01-17 11:01:54 +0000 UTCSuch a beautiful story. Im filled with emotion here 3 times today, or is that 4? Dorley, The Catch, and now... now... This absolute gem has this kind of emotion and ending!! Thank you!
SingularCurve
2025-01-01 21:05:39 +0000 UTCAww dads speech made me tear up
Jade Diaz
2024-12-30 14:03:19 +0000 UTCI just wanted to comment on your beautiful images. The images of Keela being taken by Tomas and the one of her in that beautiful blue dress are in particular appealing.
Gemma
2024-12-30 05:41:36 +0000 UTCWhat a wonderful story! I love the mix of the fantastical and genuine gender feels, it's a rare mix. I know it's a rarity among the stories here, but pregnancy/motherhood is something I ache for, and while it will never be true for me, seeing it become true for someone, even in fiction, is its own kind of soothing balm. Great job <3
Jenny S
2024-12-30 05:07:16 +0000 UTCThank you, Robert! And I just added a "complete" version with all 50 pages. π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-12-29 18:08:54 +0000 UTCI waited to read the whole thing in one go. It's a beautiful, sweet, romantic tale that feels like it is telling a truth in the way that the best fables and legends do.
Ellen Mellor
2024-12-29 17:37:21 +0000 UTCI agree, a very educational story about accepting change and keeping a promiseβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ Also, it would be good to know what happened with Keela and Tomas, was he right about the baby being a girl?
Wojtek
2024-12-29 16:46:46 +0000 UTCI deliberately saved this story up to read it all together and it was a joy from start to finish. Mystical, mythical, beguiling, beautifully illustrated and with an authentic narrative thread. And the perfect conclusion. Just wonderful Emory.
Robertlouis
2024-12-29 14:09:20 +0000 UTCDescribing her feelings of him inside is erotic reading pleasure HOT TURN ON I want to be there in her body DELICIOUS
Sky
2024-12-29 12:17:05 +0000 UTCLots of tears of joy β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ Wonderful story, so heartwarming β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ any chances for some short epilogue? Like 5y, 10y, 15y after?
Maggie Heels
2024-12-29 12:03:28 +0000 UTCBeautiful story Emory. One so many will read with tears of joy, of love and of self acceptance.
Gemma
2024-12-29 08:10:51 +0000 UTCI agree, what a beautiful and rich ending to one story and the beginning of a much happier story π₯°β€οΈ
Omagathief
2024-12-29 06:18:51 +0000 UTCSuch a sweet and beautiful ending to this opening chapter of Keelan's story.
Tim
2024-12-29 05:33:37 +0000 UTC
