Jack & Jill - Phase 9, Part 15
Added 2025-01-13 06:36:02 +0000 UTCHolly and Angela continue their fun at the hot spring. But is everything as it seems? Since this is Clinic 12, probably not!
I love writing for Holly and Angela. Their history is intense, but they know each other better than they know themselves. Angela sees past Holly's walls, while Holly helped Angela embrace who she's become.
As always, I can't wait to hear what you think!
Comments
Thanks, Singular! When I started writing Holly, I honestly wasn't sure if anyone would connect with a character who's done... well, everything she's done. But even in the darkest corners, there's a spark of something, right? She's made some seriously messed up choices, no doubt, but underneath it all, there's still a woman fighting to get through hell.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-28 04:30:00 +0000 UTCSorry, Kris!!! 💕 More episodes soon, I promise.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-28 04:28:32 +0000 UTCI have three words... Oh My Goddess!! I have a few more, Holly Stay with us!! Please dont die! I love how Holly has evolved over the course of this story!!
SingularCurve
2025-01-19 22:15:42 +0000 UTCCURSED CLIFFHANGER!!!!
Kris Greg
2025-01-18 10:41:22 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Jade Diaz
2025-01-16 08:29:09 +0000 UTCHmmm. I knew there was something off about that girl…
Robertlouis
2025-01-15 23:13:30 +0000 UTCDavis taking the chance to grab brooke during the chaos is interesting but he is an opportunist. We know xu has enemies, people who want his business, likely platinum star members who are excluded from companions for instance might want to install someone more sympathic. Now, the question is. This attack managed to hit both Holly and Xu. Jill seems safe at the moment, and Davis is contained. Where is the rest of the leadership, and the coven? What is everyone else doing, like Ava - Brooke was running from Davis, but the other companions are unaccounted for. Is this a coup or an assault? A smash and grab. There's a lot of possibilities.
Helena Grace
2025-01-15 23:12:01 +0000 UTCNow there’s a very interesting thought. What if there has been a planned attack by an unknown third party, at least at this stage? And if so, by whom?
Robertlouis
2025-01-15 22:52:34 +0000 UTCNot dead! But dying… ☹️
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 19:17:11 +0000 UTCNo, it's impossible , Holly is dead !
Erica Rost
2025-01-15 18:52:23 +0000 UTCMaybe the bullet was a lego chair
Nolwenn
2025-01-15 11:28:34 +0000 UTCIn the term petite mort, you have great notion of post orgasmic unconscioussness and spiritual freedom. It's not necessary about being dead in the act. She's totally in it🥰.
Nolwenn
2025-01-15 11:26:41 +0000 UTCRyan’s weapon of choice is a chair. It is known.
Jade Diaz
2025-01-15 07:30:53 +0000 UTCThank you, Ellen! 💖 Yeah, that was a wild episode to write, too. I really wanted to show how Holly and Angela could find something genuine even in such a screwed-up place. They both have a lot of trauma, but maybe that's why they connect so deeply.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 06:04:23 +0000 UTCWe'll see more of them both before the end of Phase 9!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 06:02:35 +0000 UTC😼
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 06:02:02 +0000 UTCAw, Tony, 💕 that future isn't gone...but, yes, it's in serious jeopardy. I love those two together, too! Angela has really blossomed - and she is one of the longest returning characters in the story. Hopefully Phase 10 will find her in a better place.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 06:01:53 +0000 UTCThanks, Hel! Davis is a sadistic bastard, but he's a coward. Does he have the guts to pull off something this big when he's more of a "kick them (in the balls) while they're down" kind of guy? You're onto something with the idea of a targeted attack, though. The question is, who's behind it and why? I can't wait to hear what you think of what I have planned next! 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:59:18 +0000 UTCAlyson, I cannot imagine waking up to my emotionally manipulative mind-fucks - I am sorry 😂
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:52:26 +0000 UTCHolly often used pleasure as a way to escape the reality of her situation, but it wasn't really about pleasure itself, but about that feeling of letting go - of forgetting - even if it was just for a little while. For Holly, it’s not that she’s seeking a "little death" in the act, it’s that she’s seeking a little life.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:50:38 +0000 UTCI imagine if Davis was the one who shot Holly, it's likely Angela wouldn't be ignoring him in the last frame. She already hates him (he was cruel to her as she was being changed by Xu), so if he'd hurt Holly, I'd expect a more EXTREME reaction.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:48:13 +0000 UTCThank you, Ella! 💕 Yeah, it's a tough one... but all is not lost. Angela seems determined to at least try to help. 😟
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:44:24 +0000 UTCYes, exactly. 😟 "...would've been fun." Those may be Holly's last words.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:42:58 +0000 UTCThank you, Wojtek! Honestly, I’m glad the ending of this episode landed in such a way that it defies easy categorization! It was hard to write and I wasn't sure if I pulled it off... seems I did! 😊 To me, the care Holly and Angela were sharing is the glimmer of something beautiful amid so much darkness at Clinic 12. So, in other words, you're right. It's not "petit mort" - as all deaths are big and profound, especially to the ones left behind. 😢
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:42:08 +0000 UTCThank you, Robert! Yeah, I was hoping that the shift in tone would work. I wanted it to feel like a false sense of security - like that moment where you think you're safe, and then the rug gets pulled out from under you. I'm glad you caught on to how I was playing with the dream sequences! The whole point was to show how Holly’s mind is drifting between past, present, and a possible future as she lays there, severely injured. 😔 Holly isn't dead yet... but it's going to be close. Phase 9 is the lead up to the gunshot that changed everything. Phase 10 is the aftermath and beyond. And thank you for all your kind words!!! 💕
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:35:54 +0000 UTCThanks, Gemma! I get that whiplash feeling. I really wanted you to feel like you were right there with Holly and Angela, like you were breathing in that same air of hope, maybe even starting to believe it yourself. I wanted that serenity to feel as real as possible so that when it gets ripped away...well, you know, it stings. But hope isn't lost. Angela won't give up on Holly without a fight.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:31:32 +0000 UTCThank you, Diana! 💕 Sorry for all the cliffhangers! But it really seems like the only way to tell an 'epic' story like this. Half Sisters will DEFINITELY be lighter fare - although poor Nikki has her own mess to deal with, too!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:24:26 +0000 UTCPoor Holly. 😢
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:21:25 +0000 UTCThank you, D. I know, that was a heavy one to write. Holly is in real trouble...
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-15 05:20:43 +0000 UTCThank you, Brandi! Honestly, I agree and for the same reasons. Holly has gone through a lot, and in the early years she went through it all alone. Any of the (very relative) "kindness" we see from Second Dawn / Clinic 12 has its origins in her.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-14 18:45:16 +0000 UTCShe's not dead yet, Thomas - but she's in a lot of trouble. 😟
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-14 18:42:53 +0000 UTCShe needs serious help fast...she's lost a lot of blood. To answer your question I HOPE NOT.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2025-01-14 18:23:29 +0000 UTCYou may think so, but I doubt it. Holly is quite loved by the girls of Second Dawn. Muse Emory deeply moved, inspired and then graciously allowed me to do my own characters in her "Xuniverse" and I'll say this: Jill would never forgive Ryan for killing Holly and neither would my fictional characters, Summer Chastity Crowe©™ and her Platinum Star mommy dearest, Dr. Delilah Crowe©™. Here's my Wattpad link: https://www.wattpad.com/user/1984AlexC Holly was both their handler and Summer clinged to Holly. Not unlike Holly clinged to Jill...who is scheduled to be Summer handler after Holly's "retirement". Summer isn't a killer but Mommy Crowe...well, there's a lot of scumbags who are currently fertilizer because of her. Here is Mommy Dearest, Dr. Delilah Crowe©™ M.D, Platinum Star: https://i.pinimg.com/736x/2e/9d/a4/2e9da416074fdc3f1dba25c72b2b9fd8.jpg Summer & Ryan together: https://x.jjj.cam/pics/nurumassage/brett-rossi-jaye-summers/majority-lesbian-pornw/brett-rossi-jaye-summers-4.jpg (Summer has Viking-style braids) Ryan & Jill together: https://x.uuu.cam/pics/hotandmean/brett-rossi-mia-malkova/national-ass-licking-xxxpartner/brett-rossi-mia-malkova-3.jpg (Jill is the one with red nails)
Female-Bosmer-Always
2025-01-14 17:48:09 +0000 UTCWait, is Holly dead or is she unconscious!?
Thomas Tolliver
2025-01-14 17:44:42 +0000 UTCAgreed. My own Xuniverse main character Summer Chastity Crowe wants Mason to suffer...like they suffered...for growing a conscience far too late in the game. And Mike...and Anton and Yasir. Don't get me started on Davis. Summer calls him "an animal whose function is to inflict pain."
Female-Bosmer-Always
2025-01-14 17:11:52 +0000 UTCPersonnally I think it's jill and Ryan. Who attack the ceremony. No one saw they came down. Jill shoot Xu and Ryan shoot Holly.
Nolwenn
2025-01-14 16:42:37 +0000 UTCHolly might be my favorite character she's so complex and beautiful in so many ways
Brandi
2025-01-13 21:57:51 +0000 UTCThat's one hell of a roller coaster ride. The joy of seeing their love being real followed by the hard come down at the end. Wonderful transitions (sic) between the two time periods. Thank you!
Ellen Mellor
2025-01-13 19:41:58 +0000 UTCWhy do you feel so confident Davis is who shot Holly?
Jade Diaz
2025-01-13 19:16:50 +0000 UTCAlso, any updates on Connie’s and Dr. Mason’s transitions?
Tony Wolcott
2025-01-13 19:10:26 +0000 UTCSo not quite so sad but still very touchy that that’s the memory that comes to her mind when she is on the brink on death
Omagathief
2025-01-13 18:20:37 +0000 UTCHi Omaga! Yes, the interaction / conversation at the spring actually happened. What we're seeing is a blend of a memory and a hallucination as she's losing a lot of blood. But what they said (and did) really happened.
Emory Ahlberg
2025-01-13 18:00:31 +0000 UTCwtf Holly hates cats? Hdu?!
Jade Diaz
2025-01-13 15:11:26 +0000 UTCNo no no. I truly started to feel like when Clinic 12 closed, Holly and Angela would go off and live happily together married
Tony Wolcott
2025-01-13 15:09:16 +0000 UTCAmazing art as always. The way you interspaced the future there is stunning So, I guess we know why Davis said 'rot in hell'. I still hope Holly pulls through. The shot looks too low for her implants to help, but I have hope! the cinematic here are amazing, I can almost feel the ff7 remake static when it's flashing between the present and future. What a time for Holly to maybe have a way forward after second dawn. The attack is obviously targeted, taking out Holly and xu? The real question is take over or what. i don't think Davis shot either one, but i could see him helping whoever did. Curious to see just how this mystery unfolds and the fallout
Helena Grace
2025-01-13 14:15:45 +0000 UTCEmory , the ending is such that it is difficult to describe in one word. In addition, we will wait in suspense for the continuation! A couple of things are certain : Mr. Davis is one character who was to be feared on the island and he got what he deserved. Love can be found anywhere, true.... Sacrebleu, it doesn't look like "le petit morte"
Wojtek
2025-01-13 13:51:06 +0000 UTCSo did that interaction at the spring actually happen or was it just in Holly’s dying, hallucinating mind 🤔? Because if that whole interaction was just in her mind that would be quite sad and sweet at the same time 😢
Omagathief
2025-01-13 11:46:32 +0000 UTCOuch! 😞 Sad, tense, and very well done!
Ella Cherry
2025-01-13 11:13:53 +0000 UTCWell those are a whole shitload of emotions for me to process five minutes after waking up. Good shit 🫠
Alyson Greaves
2025-01-13 11:00:05 +0000 UTCIn french, Orgasms are often call " La petite mort" ( little death) as a nickname. Holly know why😊
Nolwenn
2025-01-13 09:40:37 +0000 UTCOMG, muse Emory, please no. There's been enough "attritions" already. Not Holly...Davis, what have you done??? AGAIN???? You sick, vicious, sack of human garbage. DAVIS!!!! DDDDAAAAVVVIIIIIISSS Dr. Delilah Crowe©™: "Davis, you sick fuck, I'm going to tear you to pieces, limb from limb for this...you animal." she said turning to her feminized daughter Summer. "-Summer, go get the emergency medical kit out of one of the helicopters...and a portable stretcher. I need to stabilize her before she can be moved." Summer nodded and ran off. Summer Chastity Crowe©™: "Mama, please save Holly. She doesn't deserve this. She suffered enough...we all have."
Female-Bosmer-Always
2025-01-13 09:28:20 +0000 UTCYeah, that's what I'm thinking right now.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2025-01-13 09:19:28 +0000 UTCI had my suspicions about the previous two episodes and this one along that they were just too perfect, almost a pastoral interlude in the middle of what had been a period of undiluted violence and stress for everyone. And now we know, if all too briefly, and that Holly’s life is in great danger. Xu isn’t the only one who may be mortally wounded. Brilliantly set up, Emory, with yet another terrific cliffhanger. And the way that you conveyed the shifts between the dreams and consciousness was just fabulous, a wonderful mix of text and illustration. If - and it could be a big if - Holly survives - it will be interesting to see what the consequences of her dream might be. Yet another amazing chapter in the finest saga on the net.
Robertlouis
2025-01-13 07:46:29 +0000 UTCWhat the …! Initially I was enjoying the beautifully images of Holly and Angela’s ‘sexy time.’ Thinking, I hope Emory shows similar explicit beautiful images when Nikki finally explores her burgeoning sexuality. I then allowed myself to slip into, take in sensual beautiful calm space you created, allowing myself to be drawn into the rhythm of the sweet words of hope that Angela was providing for Holly. Holly slowly beginning to see a possible future she had not imagined. Then POW! What the hell, and a hellish twist in what was such a serene and sweet episode. You have done it again Emory and caught me, and, I imagine, a lot of you readers, off guard. Leaving us all up in the air, once again on a knife point of anticipation.
Gemma
2025-01-13 07:44:57 +0000 UTCWOW!!!!! So much, so good! And yet when we are finally getting the the most surprising and exciting part... cliffhanger! Now I will be pensive and on the edge of my seat until next month!! Thank goodness there are two episodes of Half Sisters this month!! Yeah!
Diana O'Neil
2025-01-13 07:19:15 +0000 UTCNO, NO, NO, NO, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Maggie Heels
2025-01-13 07:13:12 +0000 UTCWow.
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