After Landing
Added 2024-01-19 13:00:31 +0000 UTC
Comments
Sounds great! Thanks!
Your_Big_Fan
2024-01-21 05:27:45 +0000 UTCHmm I think I prefer as it is where they don't know
Bob
2024-01-20 07:48:22 +0000 UTCThanks, eye color will be highlighted in next episode
AWE-SOME-Ryan
2024-01-20 04:35:07 +0000 UTCThanks for your suggestion, I might add some BDSM content (collar and mask will be included) in future
AWE-SOME-Ryan
2024-01-20 04:34:20 +0000 UTCI feel that these two short stories have great potential to be expanded into longer chapters. For instance, having Olivia wear a mask and nipple pasties, slowly developing from foreplay, and then seductively reducing her attire could perhaps add more tension to the later sex scenes with the gangs, making the story more substantial. This is just my humble suggestion, thank you!
Your_Big_Fan
2024-01-19 19:54:45 +0000 UTCGreat stuff! My one critique for this and EP04 is that Shirley and Olivia's eyes should glow green when the programming is effecting them. But hot stuff regardless!
ExG
2024-01-19 18:24:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the update. Olivia is astonishing in the cage harness. I am wondering if you could give her a collar and a mask so she will be more mysterious and etroic.
Your_Big_Fan
2024-01-19 15:53:23 +0000 UTCWhat a nice surprise! Great great scene.
Dominique
2024-01-19 14:56:32 +0000 UTC正在考虑不同的洗脑状态，包括设备故障之类的
AWE-SOME-Ryan
2024-01-19 13:27:38 +0000 UTCsam这个提议很有意思啊！NTR的变形？哈哈哈
Zheng Yang
2024-01-19 13:26:48 +0000 UTC能不能保留他们的思想，却强迫听指令的功能啊？
sa m sa m
2024-01-19 13:13:34 +0000 UTC小剧场精彩程度不亚于正篇故事
arkjohnson
2024-01-19 13:09:54 +0000 UTC
