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Writing journal

This middle section of The Murdered World is turning out to be sex scene after sex scene. I think something I might try with the next draft is to do a flashback/flashforward structure where we start with the characters in this trapped situation, then jump back to show how they got there. So instead of having long stretches of plot, then SEXSEXSE...

Pooling Resources 2

Kirk danced his weight from foot to foot, trying to hold back his cum as her lips slipped from the very edge of his erection to the curly hairs that bordered it. Salma knew he thought that his launch would put an end to the ecstasy he was in, but she didn’t care. She wanted his cum and he would give it to her. No man could keep from letting he...

Don't Be Shy 6

Kara woke late at night, the windows dark. Few sounds made it through the thick walls of an upper-class dwelling, but she recognized the tenor of the city at rest. It disquieted her. One of the few positives of unemployment was that she’d grown used to staying up late, if she wanted, and sleeping in. At least late enough that it was fully dawn...

All A Hero Needs Is A Quest 5

The inn, built of easily assembled wood left rotting on the ground by a heavy storm, had not seen upgrade or much in the way of repair since its construction. There were many drafts in the haphazardly built structure, and it allowed in the stray orange cat as it allowed in many pests and peeping eyes.

The cat made its way through environs ...

Writing journal X

Okay, I’ve got this month sewn up. Now I’m doing a little addition to The Murdered World—I realize now that most stories will have a big event, and they’ll show the immediate reaction to it, then they’ll skip ahead a bit to the point where the characters have accepted it and are moving forward. Star Wars, Obi-Wan dies, Luke screams, we...

Spider-Boy 3

She knew that Kon had to be even more out of his mind with lust than she was. And he had to be close to coming, because Felicia knew everything she was sucking and stroking was as sensitive as her pulsing cunt. Drool dripped from his meaty cock and landed on her breasts; Felicia rubbed the liquid into her already sweaty cleavage as she gleefully...

The Bare 5

“Thanks,” Jinx shrugged. “I’m so tired of those guys thinking they can install me in the backseat of their rigs like I’m some sort of… bobblehead! I’m not for sale!”

“I know that, babe. It’s alright. Take it easy,” Dick said, coming up behind her and putting his strong hands comfortingly on her shoulders.

Jinx k...

Writing journal

I'm setting a pretty rapid pace this month. I've got a lot of commissions done, including four chapters of Spy Wolf, and I've outlined the next couple chapters, so I might get a jump on those for next month. I also got done two chapters of Don't Be Shy, so I want to get another two chapters of that done and then four for next month. And I wanna ...

Crime and Punishment

Mary Jane pressed herself tight to Peter’s costume as they flew through the air, weightless and yet moving with irresistible heft. Cool air whistled by, stroking her hair like a restless lover, but she felt warm. Not just excited by joining Peter on his webswinging, but heated by the feel of his feverish body pulled close to hers, holding her ...

Bone's Country 10

“Jefe, please, por favor, not like this, anyone could see, anyone could hear—”

“You think I oughtn’t show you off?” Bone growled, kicking her feet to either side so that her legs were splayed, enough room between them for a stallion to mount her. “Or maybe you just don’t want nobody knowing how much you en...

Don't Be Shy 5

“Aaaa! Oohh! Gghn!” Kara could only squeal, over and over again, her hips full of motion not wholly her own. The pain was drifting away, proving to be the only thing that blocked the lascivious feelings now working their way into her body.

The more she strained, the more she felt, the more there was to feel. Good things, sensu...

X

Didn't get much done today, but I did come up with a subplot I'd like to add during a second draft. I think it'll liven things up during a slow part of the story, add a little intrigue, I don't know. I've been pretty tired today and I need to get up early tomorrow, so I'll be in bed soon. Might try to get a paragraph or so done.

Big Black Costume update

“Shut up!” Jade cried, incensed now by the awful things Yolanda was saying. She’d known Courtney was a whore, but she thought that with enough punishment, she might be able to go back to being a true hero. The kind of woman Jade could be friends with.

Jade shoved the dildo into Yolanda’s mouth. Now she knew friendship was impossibl...

MtK update

Dick’s face was just above Mary’s. She trembled at the feel of his warm breath fanning out against her lips and cheeks. Dick kissed her: she moaned her mouth open, already seeking out his tongue with her own. They stayed together for a long moment, then Dick put his palms down beside Mary’s head, raising his torso from off her chest.

The Ravager 2

His drink arrived. Bond took it, touched his glass to hers, and then spilled it on the man on the neighboring stool.

“Hey, watch it!”

“Terribly sorry,” Bond said, with schoolboy sorrow, and took the man’s seat as soon as he went to wash up.

“Are you sure you can afford spilling drinks at these prices?” Penelope as...

The Murdered World 4

‘Cockroach’ Flynn McAvoy was no one’s idea of a dashing cat burglar, but at five foot six, he didn’t need to be. There was nowhere he couldn’t climb, wiggle, slip, or crawl. And in his own way, he was as careful and as calculating as Frank Castle. Long before he picked one lock, he knew everything there was to know about his target’s...

ETA

Okay, I ran the numbers again and wrote a short little scene and now we are at 28 chapters, 38000 words written since last week, and 48000 words in total. Twelve thousand more and this bad boy is novel-length, which is good, because I have just a couple more sex scenes and some plot to cover. You never know, there might be enough for a sequel; j...

Yeep

In the past week or so, I've written 27 chapters of Punisher fanfic--enough for one update every week for almost seven months. The story in total is now 47000+ words long. Since the 17th, that is a little under 29 thousand words. I'm pretty sure at one point, I wrote five thousand words in one day. I'm tempted to do one more update, just to get ...

Summers Drive update

Celeste gave herself over to a long quiver of enjoyment. Her cunt convulsed madly and her eyes crossed from the immenseness of her climax. Emma’s words had seemed to set her off and waves of delight now rippled through her, inundating her wet sex, sending her over the edge and into feeling nothing but Scott.

“I’m coming!” she cried...

Bone's Country 9

He reached down… petting the expanse of bare flesh just under the hem of her chemise. “I didn’t tell you to do that,” he said, teasingly flicking the hem up the back of her thigh and letting it fall back down.

Sophia turned around to beguile him with her lovelorn eyes. She was quick with an explanation. “I didn’t want anyone el...

Don't Be Shy 4

One hand nestled underneath the waistband of Kara’s lace panties. Kara felt the material bunch, twist, as Lena slowly peeled it down the sweep of her buttocks. She was barely anymore naked without the panties than with them, but the way Lena feasted on the sight… Kara was bent over facing the fireplace, feeling its heat on her face, but it f...

We Bought A Harem 5

Tim needed to use the bathroom and Red Tornado had to pick up Traya from school, so the only adult supervision as Bart lost his virginity were the other harem members watching and realizing that it would soon be their turn.

The thought did not fill them with trepidation.

Even Aisha looked forward to sampling what Dania, Rahma, Nida, ...

Wedding of the Century update

Peter didn't know how, but he got the students calmed down and reading Chapter 5 in their textbooks while he took Mary Jane into the connected lab to talk privately. Privately he thought he deserved a medal for that, even though he had to concede letting the kids listen to music.

Someone produced speakers and before he shut the door to the...

Giving Her Host The Most update

“Get over here and take it then,” Harry rasped.

Molly came around and straddled Lash’s chest, feeling her full breasts pillow under her thighs as Harry wrenched his prick from out of Lash. Even as it came out, a rope of his cream spurted out and crossed Lash’s belly from navel to sternum.

Before any more was launched, Molly d...

ETA

It's taken almost thirty thousand words, which is like half a novel, but I've gotten to the point of the premise kicking in. Or the end of the first act, I suppose. 

I wanted this to be just an "opening sequence" of Punisher doing typical Punisher stuff before I interrupted the gameplay loop and revealed the twist, but now it's more l...

Writing journal

Now I've written thirteen chapters of The Murdered World, and I have to write more because there's no way THAT'S lucky. Also, I have a few tabs of fallout shelter research open in Firefox, so I can't close those until I've written the next few chapters... pretty sure I'll stop before I have enough material for the next year.........

How It's Done

“Oh shit!” Steph cried. “It won’t fit! I—”

“It’ll fit real soon,” Bruce assured her, his naked body meeting hers, their mouths fusing until all the hunger in both of them was unleashed.

Suddenly she was all unbridled heat, a woman so full of passion that she forgot her nerves, but only until she felt his massive coc...

Tri-st update

After you’ve all had your coffee, you deliver Betsy to Karen, who drives off with her, smiling and waving. Just before leaving, Betsy gives you a long kiss and reminds you that you won’t be rid of her that easily. She’ll be back: “And while I’ll share you with Karen and Felicia, I don’t want you running down your batteries with anyon...

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Wrote like five thousand words the other day. Two thousand at a D&D session on my phone, where I multitask to keep myself from fidgeting, another five hundred on my phone while I was waiting for a pizza, then the rest staying up way too late on my laptop. It’s eleven chapters in all, which irks me a little because it’s one short of the t...

Pooling Resources

Salma Hayek was delighted to find her old From Dusk Till Dawn costume still fit, though she didn’t look quite the same when she examined herself in the mirror. It was quite a bit tighter; her pregnancy had left her more heavy-set and her face didn’t have the natural suppleness of youth. She’d aged well, but still had to rely on a few surgi...