Hey. Hi.
Summer is a bad time for me, always has been. This isn't an excuse, it's an explanation for why my mind turns to gravy: ambient heat impinging on someone who is extremely a beast of winter. But hey, at the very least: look forward to the next chapter of A Quick Death in Texas this weekend. Because that's in sto...
2021-07-09 20:00:05 +0000 UTC
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Sometimes detective work is as simple as putting yourself in the right place to hear something you shouldn't.
Welcome to the next day. It’s time to kickstart a morning blessed by a trickster god. There’s a lot of moving parts in play, and what’s crucial is the order they move in. So, let’s do some refrigerator p...
2021-06-07 19:11:38 +0000 UTC
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Van's past incidents, Telin's family motorsports outings, and shared affection over Italian food: I swear these two hypercompetent idiots will realize they've quietly built a relationship some day.
Canine and Heelcutter
The St. Joe's Faithful
“So you lived in St...
2021-05-18 19:07:07 +0000 UTC
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Please excuse him. He smiles like that by default.
2021-05-10 01:27:15 +0000 UTC
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[vertically emerges from a murky, foggy swamp] OH HI, DIDN'T SEEYA THERE!
Been a while since I did one of these, and when I'm caught up in life as is, I like to do one to check in. I got a gig job that's helping out around the help, and working that into my life sorta threw my balance off. But I'm getting back in the sa...
2021-05-05 20:50:37 +0000 UTC
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Tito is Just Standing There.
Hi. I'm doing one of these again now, too. Check back in a few days, it'll be done then.
2021-04-13 17:23:40 +0000 UTC
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"Hi I'm here to flush a guy's head down the toilet, and kill everyone that tries to stop me. Anyone have objections?"
“How long have they been your neighbors?” asked Van.
“It’ll be 4 years, once we’re past this hot season,” Carillo said.
“Bein’ the reason why I’m havin’ trouble with all t...
2021-04-13 17:21:00 +0000 UTC
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"Hello, I'm here to make your bad situation
2021-04-13 17:15:53 +0000 UTC
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"hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe."
Canine and Spooky
“With Great Power, Comes Great Eye Lasers”
“So I guess the question is, which one of us gets to start?” said Van, after he’d exhaled his smoke. He kept his eyes to the horizon, scanning with his...
2021-04-01 19:36:08 +0000 UTC
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Ever been punched so hard, you realize you're a sub?
His senses had failed from the blow, but at the last possibility, he’d caught himself from tripping the trigger of his secret sure-killer, his beloved Gator Jaw. This had saved him from what his former comrades in section 99 had warned him about, before they threw h...
2021-04-01 00:14:48 +0000 UTC
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As a steel giant does battle with a silver
2021-04-01 00:10:40 +0000 UTC
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WELL THAT WAS QUICK.
Five - Severe Circumstances With Difficult Explanations
[Welcome to Gator’s POV. We won’t be here long, because as we’ll rapidly discover, he’s equal parts miserable bastard and boring fuck. As he makes his way through the New Laredo starport, we come to understand the very minimalis...
2021-03-19 20:59:52 +0000 UTC
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You people wanted antagonists? Meet the death of inner life that is an interstellar CEO.
“Good timing, right after lunch,” Ellering said. “Talking with those people always makes me lose my appetite. Speaking of, there’s the matter of van Rooyen: what response have we had from our prospective new hires...
2021-03-11 19:58:59 +0000 UTC
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Holy hell, that took a while. Worth it, tho
2021-03-11 19:54:58 +0000 UTC
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Damn, what a title.
Hey hi, I've been meaning to do this for a while! Here's the second draft of A Good Man, revised down to the first break. Big things you'll probably notice: an overall lesser aggro dickishness to Van, now that we know a fair bit about why he is the way he is, and also, an overall feeling of control t...
2021-02-20 21:33:50 +0000 UTC
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It's time for a business plan. Of sorts.
It's about time to get things on track, to a degree. Let's start small: let's see A Good Man get onto a storefront. What am I doing to pursue this? Well, the second draft is early in the works, with an editor lined up. So that's exciting!
And then on top of that, I've got A...
2021-02-15 21:28:32 +0000 UTC
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This is workable.
The thing about these articles is that sometimes I have something new and exciting to say in them. This time, I've got something old and exciting to say, which is that I'm still hard on the grind, with my heart behind it. A Quick Death in Texas is going to be good work, I can feel it, it's got me excited, and it'...
2021-01-18 19:47:37 +0000 UTC
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Welcome to me maintaining momentum in my posts by bringing you all the even-further-behind-the-scenes work I've been doing on A Quick Death in Texas. Today, I've got the framework for Chapter 4 for you all! Enjoy!
Four - And Those Who Follow Them
[Van’s dreaming again. This time, it’s not the inner terror he...
2021-01-18 19:45:55 +0000 UTC
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This was what I needed
Yesterday I wrote LAMF, and it felt good. I hadn't peeled out on a stretch of fiction like that in forever, it felt like I was finally moving on sharpened skates again. Maybe it was the prospect of getting to uncork the violence on A Quick Death in Texas, which sounds just terrible, but catharsis ...
2021-01-11 18:10:47 +0000 UTC
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"You know, those first two chapters, those felt like they were Section 99 storytelling, but I gotta ask, where was all the blood- OH HERE IT IS, HERE'S THE BLOOD!"
Three - Bloody Footprints
The farmstead fell quiet, and the regulators laid in a low prone behind a foliaged dirt berm. Seconds passed since the last...
2021-01-11 17:45:45 +0000 UTC
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"Family" can be biological. It can also be the people that'll support you, even if what you're doing is drastic.
Van had good confidence in therapy. He didn’t have the sort of schedule where he could keep up with regular sessions, but Dr. Rama in St. Joe’s always had a way of working him in when he needed to get som...
2020-12-22 00:12:57 +0000 UTC
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He wasn't a Maguffin. He's a bit frustrated about being mistaken as such.
“What about you, who’s the inner circle?” Van asked.
Taino gave him the slightest roll of his eyes, he knew what he was actually asking. “Tadji, his sister and their cousins. They’re rolling with me dress...
2020-12-18 21:46:13 +0000 UTC
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Seriously, he is.
Point of it all was, he wasn’t a wrack in a pen or some superpowered pig in a battlesuit any more. Whatever he saw in himself now, whatever conflict of self assuredness and anger that made him feel like a perpetually half-finished project, it wasn’t anything so pathetic or hateable. Even i...
2020-12-15 19:24:44 +0000 UTC
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Yes, yes it is.
So now that I'm actually up and moving on This Thing, I'd like to actually use this little semi-regular blog thing that really should be more regular now as a means of putting in my little footnotes on the stuff that's showing up in the story. In that spirit, then:
- Van's fighting technique, T...
2020-11-30 20:09:03 +0000 UTC
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Pardon Me for Screaming
“At this point, I just have to ask all of you, forthright and honestly: what do any of us benefit from keeping Van Parker on his leash?”
‘Granny’ Janila Sendra, spry at 62, fiercely beloved by the clan she was matriarch of, let her open question hang in the room. Not all present were pre...
2020-11-24 00:33:55 +0000 UTC
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Let's get back on track.
Okay, that was a period of weeks, wasn't it? Now that we can now sorta unhitch ourselves from a feeling of looming destruction and instead warm our hands on the embers of a fascist regime that insists on burning down in the funniest ways imaginable, I intend to actually get prop...
2020-11-17 16:46:24 +0000 UTC
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Now, for a little writing practice.
Today was a day spent derusting my actual ability to write prose, specifically, prose in action scenes. To do that, I wrote a little short about an incident that happened the day Van moved to Port of St. Joseph. The jist: this man has no chill, for the cause of the common and downtrod...
2020-11-01 03:21:53 +0000 UTC
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What started out as a quick introduction to the collectives sorta, snowballed. You'll see.
Heya, I'm back, and I'm near about ready to get going on this juggernaut. I feel adequately prepped and ready now, and with the exception of sketching out the character of a few of the residence, I now not only have a really good ...
2020-10-23 20:52:09 +0000 UTC
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Hey, welcome back. Now, we're properly set to explore the place A Quick Death in Texas is going to take place in, first from an orbital view, then from a quick drive through the place itself. The goal of this writing? Create a feel for a tangible place that has both weight and nature, rather than being a backdrop for space adventures to star...
2020-10-12 22:17:12 +0000 UTC
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First, the former. Then, the latter.
Okay, so: Here's a bunch of stuff about a place in space called New Laredo, as well as the planet it's perched on. I hope you'll find it a place worth fighting for, because that's what I'm getting at with it. I promise I won't scuff it up too bad with what's coming.
Then after ...
2020-10-12 21:40:15 +0000 UTC
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