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Harry Evans edit and minor revision

I don't think if anyone's noticed, but I recently went back to edit the entirety of Harry Evans for grammar and consistency. One minor thing that I changed that you should know is that I wasn't liking the romantic development with Tonks. I felt that if I continued in that direction it would detract from the other themes of this story. I just don...

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Harry Evans Chapter 86: The more things stay the same

Thankfully the rest of the train ride passed in relative peace. Ron Weasley ended up the only member of the Golden Trio that Harry didn't end up inadvertently meeting.

He and Tonks continued chatting and eventually exited the train to go to the carriages that took them to the castle. She laughed as he explained why Penny and Cedric ...

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Video Game Cultivator Chapter 23: Ain't no rest for the proletariat

It was a mentally confused Jin who returned after so long to his little apartment building and the outer reaches of the inner disciple enclave. Elder Flower had dropped him off at the food hall, so he’d eaten one meal before meandering towards home. The home he’d spent cumulatively less time at than at the Mad Monks Sect. He had to shamble h...

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General update/Looking for POV recs for Video Game developer

Ok, general update. I've started recovering from the hard times recently, which more result-oriented to you means... That I've finished the Game of Thrones first chapter, yay!

So anyway, the Game of Thrones thing still needs to marinate a bit before it gets a last edit, so I'll schedule it for like the 30th August or something. It has ar...

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Harry Evans Chapter 85: Inches away from the abyss

AN: This is a chapter many of you have probably been waiting for, for a very long time. Yes, we have finally started canon. We are on the train with Hermione, Ron, Neville and Trevor the toad. I honestly think that if you've liked the story till now, it now has the potential to become even more exciting.

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Harr...

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Rattata Chapter 38: Das Kapital und dessen Werkzeuge

A cold splash of water hit Joey's face and then dripped down into the sink that he was leaning on, staring into the mirror. 

He was in the bathroom that he shared with the other orphans on his floor. Still, considering he was always the first one awake, it essentially belonged only to him in these early hours of the day.

His tor...

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Harry Evans Chapter 84: Back to skewl

It was on the 1st of September, a few weeks after Harry's first meeting with Draco, that the two of them could be found in a McDonald's close to Kings Cross station.

The older of the two, Charon, sat there in a muggle tracksuit with his hood pulled up over his face, and a notice-me-not-charm applied on the entirety of his presence. It was ...

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Video Game Cultivator Chapter 22: The incredible Mr. Burn Out

“It appears that we have a problem,” Elder Flower summarised rather accurately as she looked down at the huge army surrounding the mountain of the Illusion Room Sect.

 

Jin’s heart skipped a beat and he almost wanted to puke blood at the nonchalant air of the answer. Their mountain, their home, their sect, was surrounded b...

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Changing the title of Harry Evans?

Hey, I know this is a bit random, but I've started re-editing Harry Evans, of which the title is actually Memoirs of a well-lived death, a name you've all not seen for a while since I'm way to lazy to ever write it out on Patreon lol, always referring to it as Harry Evans.

Anyway, I realised while reading again that this title doesn...

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General update

Lil update on the situation of how everything is going. Basically, after my vacation I'm back on the grind, getting back into my schedule. Last week was very productive for Rattata and video game cultivator.

One thing I finally finished is that I re-edited all publicly available Rattata chapters, while also being more rigorous on th...

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Harry Evans Chapter 83: The Mind Arts, an exposition

Harry looked at himself in the mirror critically. He was aged up to 25-something years old and was covered up completely with a black cloak, a hood pulled tightly over his visage, which was additionally also hidden by a shadow spell.

His new illegal wand was really coming in quite handy. It allowed him to continue progressing his sp...

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Rattata Chapter 37: The beginning of the end

It was after his victory at Celadon that the Stinky Hobo's life changed forever.

His new stipend was sufficient to fully sustain an adult man even if he had chosen to live in a city rather than being homeless. The desire for more badges thus became more a thing of Pride than a thing of necessity and due to this the jour...

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Harry Evan Chapter 82: Winning, duh

After his adventures through Viennese museums, his meeting with Fleur and his strategy talk with Flitwick, Harry entered the duelling arena which was for lack of a better term, decimated in comparison to yesterday. After all, they had gone from 72 contestants to 18.

It was only the audience, which in contrast to the contestants, had...

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Video Game Cultivator Chapter 21: Next level

“And that's basically what happened,” Jin finished, recounting the full story of what had occurred since he’d last seen Ting.

His fellow inner disciple kicked her legs out from where they were sitting on the wooden platform jutting out of her tower, which was there for others to land on when they came through the air.

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Harry Evans Chapter 81: Vienna calling, woooh, oohhohh

Everyone’s attitude towards Harry changed from then onwards. Before, people had been somewhat patronising to the young boy seeking to distinguish himself at a place he was not yet qualified to be in. Perhaps no one had said anything and perhaps his first victory had shut some people up, but the atmosphere had still decisively been hostile.&nbs...

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Harry Evans Chapter 65: Summer Start

AN: Wasn't easy getting here, but we're finally at the Summer before Year Three.

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If anyone would have happened upon a certain clearing with a gigantic apple tree and three tombstones during the first weeks of summer vacation, they would have found a scene that would have confused them as to what century they ...

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Video Game Cultivator Chapter 20: Enjoy peace, prepare for war

Considering the ridiculous focus that had been put on developing Outlast for nearly half a year now, suddenly being done with the job was in its own way slightly daunting.

The Mad Monks had gotten their new disciple with all of his brimming protagonist energy, no matter how much of it was potentially negatively directed at Jin. He had stop...

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Chapter 28: A smooth criminal

When the battle recommenced Lance revealed his second dragonite, but people were numb to it. The large dragon managed to score a win on Bruno's hitmontop. A much more impressive monster than Kong’s have been. It still lost miserably.

Then the dragonite got knocked out, surprisingly enough, by a heracross.

A third dragonite was sent...

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Harry Evans Chapter 80: Riposte

30 minutes of not much happening passed after Harry's first match. He was to have two that day. One for getting out of the 72 bracket, and one for getting out of the 36 bracket. 

Reaching the top 18 would be a nice feather in his cap. After all, winning one fight could have been a fluke, but two was just enough to prove that he...

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Could use some help

Hey guys, I recently posted by Video Game Developer story to Scribblehub and RoyalRoad which have functioning review system. I also realised that considering some of you have been my patrons since the first day the story was commissioned, you might have never read it anywhere else. Anyway, if you like it, or want to help me get more subscribers,...

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Rattata Chapter 36: The Stinky Hobo strikes back

The cleaning of the Ponyta stables might have been just a small step for a hobo, but it had been a great step for Hobokind. The Stinky Hobo who now, after having gained two badges, had started being able to afford the occasional haircut in addition to all the other necessities.

One should note here that what the Stinky ...

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Polling story support

Out of curiosity I would kinda just want to know which story people prefer of my three main ones.

You can answer this poll by asking yourself the following question: Which story, if it were to be discontinued, would make me unsubscribe from the Patreon?

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Harry Evans Chapter 64: Year END

AN: Took a bit longer for this chapter. Have to close some threads as I finish off the year :)

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The next few weeks of school were as awkward as they were surreal. Tonks and Harry hadn't told anyone about the fact that Greyback was now dead, which meant that the teachers and the students stayed on high alert. The newspapers report...

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Harry Evans 79: The first to lose

The next time they were in the arena, it was much fuller. They simply slipped outside to drink coffee and hot chocolate, respectively, and upon coming back, they found half the seats filled with bustling natives and internationals, all dressed to the nines as if they were attending a ball.

Harry and Flitwick were bustled unceremoniously to...

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Harry Evans Chapter 78: Drawing the lots

In the end, Harry ended up being too tired to go out and explore the city. Flitwick was a harsh taskmaster and it didn't seem like the man was willing to give him any respite even on the day before the actual tournament, for which he'd presumably need all of his energy.

 

So, he went to sleep, had an undisturbed night in the sin...

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General update

Hey, just wanted to pop by and say a few things.

This next month some unfortunate events are coinciding, so I will try my best to schedule the chapters ahead of time at the usual speed, but I will probably be unable to do the Game of Thrones First chapter until late July, and the book review potentially longer.

I'm currently out of a...

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Video Game Cultivator Chapter 19: Perspective switching

“This is a bit awkward,” Elder Zhang said while coughing into his fist.

Sect leader Shen and Elder Kwang shared a look before giving the eyebrow equivalent of a full-body shrug. Jin meanwhile just sighed. He hadn't really expected it to happen like this, but considering that this was to his knowledge the first time an Illusion Room was...

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Harry Evans Chapter 77: Welcome to Austria, where everyone wears brown

The portkey journey was much more violent than any apparation that he'd experienced in the past, which made Harry truly wonder why wizards designed every single magical transportation method to be as uncomfortable as possible.

 

He decided then and there, as he stumbled out of a golden arrival room and into a larger atrium, that...

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Rattata Chapter 35: Taking out the Trash

After receiving his first badge, the Stinky Hobo had upped his financial status from destitute homeless person, to financially well-off homeless person. The biggest benefit of the newly gained status was not the ability to stay for free at any Pokecenter, since upon trying once the Stinky Hobo was kicked out due to scaring everyone's Pokemon...

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Poll Winner: Game of Thrones minor Lord Si

So, the poll winner was quite decisively picked this time, so I'm looking forward to writing that. probably gonna start writing the day after tomorrow, tomorrow I have to Finish and polish the newest rattata chaper,

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